haha. poor poor ... uhm... ginny or draco? haha. update soon!
*giiiigggllleee* hahah brilliant, update soon ok? i just love it :)
I love this story. It's too funny! I can't wait to see what kind of crazyness will occur next!
LOVE IT!! Update soon.
Author's Response: thanks! i'll try to :)
laughing all the way to the review box! Great humor!
Author's Response: that means a lot to me :) thank you so much.
oh my gawds, i'm laughing like a loser. nicely done :) pls update. i also just read your other story. it was really great. keep it up and update soon please. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Author's Response:im so glad you enjoyed it ! thank you ! :)
Oh that was just beyond entertaining. I am ever so looking forward to what happens next.
soooooooooooo funny plzz update!!!
Heh, this is amusing. Writing in first person can be difficult, so good on you for your first time out. The tense shifts are a bit jarring though, so perhaps you could find a way to make them a little more seamless? Otherwise, I'm liking this and am eager to see where you go with it!
Author's Response:thanks for your review ! i'm sorry if you found it jarring or if it pulled you out of the story for a minute :(
i really am trying my hardest, and i'll try to watch out for tense shifts more often. thank you so much for reviewing !
lol! that was so funny! i luved it! u shold totally add a lot mor chapters!
Author's Response: thank you, and i will
I've confess to reading this fic a total of 3 times! The first time, I ended up intrigued but confused. The second time, I cheated and read your reviews & responses BEFORE I read it, and then expended much energy making sure I understood the damn thing. The third time was a charm. I laughed and hooted my way through the glorious thing - maybe even outdoing Ginny herself at the end! I NEVER read something more than once so why 3 times? I don't know. I was intrigued by your use of language. Very witty and quick - so quick that when I blinked, I missed something crucial. I liked that. I also thought it was a bold move to go for a humorous fic your first time out. Now that I've almost created a fic out of this review, I will sign off. Good job! - fallenwitch
Author's Response:your review means so much to me, as you are absolutely my fanfic hero. i LOVE your fic, and the fact that you appreciated mine just sends me into pure giddy-ness. im so glad you enjoyed it. also just to clear it up, i am not bold, i am safe. humour is the only thing i know. i can't spin amazing, never-before seen plotlines (like you), so i tell a cliched story and hope people are laughing too much to notice. lol (i think its working :grins evilly:). - fluff ducky
great beginning. very funny images. i can't wait for the rest. keep going!
Author's Response: thank you and will do.
First half was standard goodbut second half oohoo hehehe v v v v g =)
Author's Response: thanks!
hahaha This was uber-sweet, and I especially liked the bit about grammar -- er, the lack thereof. Am lookin' fwd to more stuff. :)
Author's Response: thanks you! by the way, i am a super-fan of PhD.. i hate the sciences, but if Draco Malfoy was ever my professor, I'm sure I would stay in school til the day i died.
Hilarious! And I like how you did the exact opposite of the 'test'. Instead of Draco saving her, he falls down on top of her, very funny.
Author's Response: thanks. i get really sick of the whole, "ginny almost cracked open her skull, but luckily malfoy caught her" thing. and then they gaze into each others eyes adoringly before he shoves her away or something.. it really bothers me when i see it constantly.
This looks like it could be a really funny story. I particularly like the line, "I am so angry I could spit fire. Well, I realize that I could by simply casting a spell, but that's not what I'm talking about." I am a little confused about why Ginny pinching Draco's wrist led to him holding his private parts, though. Did I miss something? Also, there is a paragraph that got repeated; you might want to delete the extra copy.
Author's Response: Thanks for informing me about the extra paragraph, i'll get right to it. also, yes, you did miss something. she thought she had pinched his wrist .. but since draco was holding his private parts in pain, and not his wrist, she most likely missed, wouldn't you say? thank you for the review and the compliment!
post-its are muggle... um maybe if you made them magical never lose their stick post-its...
also try to remember show don't tell. your ginny tells us how she she feels we don't see it. because of this you writing doesn't flow.
one solution to this is not writing in first person. there are a lot of pit falls to first person because the writing starts to sound repetitive, which in turn can make the characters sound younger.
i hope that this is helpful.
ps if you want clarification on some of my points email me (lima_crew@yahoo.com)
Author's Response: Thank you for your advice. I'm not going to change my story from first person to narrative, because that's how it was before, and it's funnier this way. however, your absolutely right about showing, not telling. i'll try to do that more as i continue to write. thank you.
cute...the ending seemed a bit abrupt and you've got a paragraph in there twice (Test 7 description) but other than that, not bad for your first time out...is there to be more?
Author's Response: Thanks for telling me about the 2nd paragraph, consider it deleted. there will definately be more. chapter 2 is already written, being beta'd right this moment.
Excellent, well written and hilarious, I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will be updating soon, cross my heart.