Name: patricia reviewed Chapter 2 on Jun 15, 2006 02:55 pm
this is such a interesting story so far...i want to see whats gonna happen next please continue writing!!!!!!!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 2 on Feb 21, 2006 06:04 am
Draco's alive!!
Please update this fic soon!
I hate it when a good story just sits online and doesn't get updated!
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Chapter 1 on Feb 21, 2006 05:59 am
Oh no! DOn't cry Ginny!
Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 14, 2006 04:11 pm

You can find betas on Fictionalley Park, but you have to be careful and make sure they know what they are doing. Usually it's best to find someone who can tell you which stories they’ve betaed so you can see if they are at all proficient.

Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 14, 2006 03:38 pm
I like your descriptions a lot. They create wonderful imagery. I would like to give one criticism though, I think they way you had them both sigh at the same time in this passage (below) is kind of cliché and cheesy.

 

 “I know.” said Ron as he wrapped his arm around her. “So much has happened since then, but I still remember everything so clearly.”

 

They both sighed.

 

“I know.” said Ron as he wrapped his arm around her. “So much has happened since then, but I still remember everything so clearly.”

 

They both sighed.

 

Name: AuntAnnie reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 14, 2006 11:59 am
Wow, great start, youve taken HBP into consideration, and seem to be running with it, Hope you update really soon, I cant wait to see where you take it!!
Name: MJ reviewed Chapter 2 on Jan 14, 2006 02:12 am
Wow, this is a great story!! Very well written!! Please update soon!!
Name: SS Felton reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 12, 2006 12:52 pm
Lovely! I had been waiting since June to read something like this!
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