this is such a interesting story so far...i want to see whats gonna happen next please continue writing!!!!!!!
Draco's alive!!
Please update this fic soon!
I hate it when a good story just sits online and doesn't get updated!
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I like your descriptions a lot. They create wonderful imagery. I would like to give one criticism though, I think they way you had them both sigh at the same time in this passage (below) is kind of cliché and cheesy.“I know.” said Ron as he wrapped his arm around her. “So much has happened since then, but I still remember everything so clearly.”
They both sighed.
“I know.” said Ron as he wrapped his arm around her. “So much has happened since then, but I still remember everything so clearly.”
They both sighed.
Wow, great start, youve taken HBP into consideration, and seem to be running with it, Hope you update really soon, I cant wait to see where you take it!!
Wow, this is a great story!! Very well written!! Please update soon!!
Lovely! I had been waiting since June to read something like this!