Name: shadieladie reviewed
The Legilimens on Feb 07, 2006 10:00 am
wow why can't he do it that's really weard
Name: eli reviewed
The Legilimens on Feb 07, 2006 06:27 am
Hmmm. I am really captivated by this story. I'm glad that your description of Ginny wasn't that she is "stunningly beautiful". I am really enjoying reading this story, and I hope that you will update soon.
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed
The Legilimens on Feb 07, 2006 02:31 am
Really a good story, I've read your other stories and you do an amazing job.
Keep up the good work, and please update soon.
Name: Sophinna reviewed
The Legilimens on Feb 07, 2006 01:30 am
I just wish I could read more of it... Now!
Name: Sophinna reviewed
The Legilimens on Feb 07, 2006 01:30 am
Really, really extra super brilliant!
Name: Sophinna reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Feb 07, 2006 01:29 am
Wow, this is good, really, really good!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
The Legilimens on Feb 07, 2006 12:13 am
Oh, I am so excited for this story. I can ust tell it's going to be completely fantastic. You've got a beautiful flair for writing and winding the intricacies of a story. Kudos to you and I look forward to the next update!
Name: eli reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 30, 2006 04:14 pm
Right off the bat, I'm just going to say that I love your style of writing. Your description of "Cecilia" was amazing. I am already captivated by this story, and I can't wait to read the rest of the story!
Name: emir reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 10:47 pm
oh boy, this is so intriguing. I love a good plot and you have delivered a most delicous appetizer. I can not wait for the next dish... I mean chapter.
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 09:47 pm
Oh, my - this is great. Such a good start!! Youv'e completely got my attention and if this were a book, I'd be settling in for the night because I suspect I'd be reading the entire thing in one go. I've loved your other works and the quality of writing is top notch. This is so in the same category as Sarea and Jade Okelani's If You Only Knew (which is high praise - its a fabulous WIP if you haven't read it). I love post-Hogwarts stories and I think the reason I can't stand most Harry/Ginny stories is that is that she's always getting married at 17 and doesn't have her own sense of self developed unlike here. Fab - don't you dare leave us hanging. Can't wait for an update!!
Name: Helena reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 05:23 pm
For starters, I was thrilled by seeing a character with the name Helena. That made this the best story in years to begin with, and yes, I'm desperately superficial.
Secondly, I love the whole plot you have going on. One of the sore spots I've found with some D/G fics is that the plot has gone down the tubes, all predictable fluff & smut where you already know the ending before you've finished the first chapter. You've introduced something with a unique twist, and although this isn't the first "detective-like" Ginny fic, you're doing a spiffy job of adding some mystery to this fic. Good ICness too, another dissapearing trait among fanfiction. Harry seems like Harry. Ginny like Ginny. So on and so forth.
In short, I urge thee to update. Quickly.
Name: Helena reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 05:23 pm
For starters, I was thrilled by seeing a character with the name Helena. That made this the best story in years to begin with, and yes, I'm desperately superficial.
Secondly, I love the whole plot you have going on. One of the sore spots I've found with some D/G fics is that the plot has gone down the tubes, all predictable fluff & smut where you already know the ending before you've finished the first chapter. You've introduced something with a unique twist, and although this isn't the first "detective-like" Ginny fic, you're doing a spiffy job of adding some mystery to this fic. Good ICness too, another dissapearing trait among fanfiction. Harry seems like Harry. Ginny like Ginny. So on and so forth.
In short, I urge thee to update. Quickly.
Name: AvidAuror_DM reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 07:27 am
Fascinating. Simply Fascinating. Not to mention intriguing!You have started out beutifully. Got us hooked and all.
Update soon.
Name: EJAUS reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 06:52 am
This chapter was a bit of a downer starting with a vicious attack and moving on to a Ginny who just seems miserable. She says she broke it off with Harry but clearly she hasn't. Whenever he needs her, she is there. Things can not stay as they are. Both Ginny and Harry are in emotional limbo. Perhaps someone will help Ginny move on and once she does maybe Harry will too (in a different direction of course)
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 28, 2006 04:14 am
Ooh, I am so intrigued. Good chapter!
Name: julian steerpike reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 06:52 pm
really really cool as a beginning - suspenseful enough and just so chocked full of plot and questions :) please do update soon!
Name: Phoenixxx reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 12:46 pm
This is really interesting, I love it.
Name: Embellished reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 12:07 pm
This is a promising start! I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with it.
Name: VIXENFAIRY27 reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 10:15 am
OMG! HEEEEEEERE'S DRACOOOO!
CANT WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CHAPTER.
i THINK YOU ARE DOING A GREAT JOB IN WRITTING THIS. YOU HAVE MISTERY, SUSPENSE, PAST LOVE RELATIONSHIPS...i DO HOPE THAT THIS GETS SOME ACTION ON THE NEXT SCENE.
Name: shalita reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 09:45 am
oooooo... this sounds like a good one.=) I've always loved Ginny in the healer position, it seems rather natural for her.
Name: shalita reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 09:45 am
oooooo... this sounds like a good one.=) I've always loved Ginny in the healer position, it seems rather natural for her.
Name: Mione23 reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 09:37 am
I LOVED IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Name: shadieladie reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 09:05 am
oh ... but isn't Cecilia a Melfoy? so how exactly is that goin to work or is the person in Azkaban Melfoy Sir.?
Author's Response: No, Cecilia isn't a Malfoy.
Name: caps reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 08:24 am
This sounds like a very intriguing story. What you have written so far makes me very curious as to what happens next and who the Legilimens is (either Snape or Draco)
i can't wait for the next chapter
By the way I liked your stories in Sailing the Dark Ship universe
Name: caps reviewed
1. The Diagnosis on Jan 27, 2006 08:22 am
This sounds like a very intriguing story. What you have written so far makes me very curious as to what happens next and who the Legilimens is (either Snape or Draco)
i can't wait for the next chapter
By the way I liked your stories in Sailing the Dark Ship universe