Are you going to finish this intriguing story
LOL. I loved this story. It was so well written, and Draco's inner musings are just hilarious. Nicely done. I loved Ginny, hehehe. You really should consider expanding this, though!
This is soooo hilarious!!!!lol
Brilliant, so funny!!!
Ooohh man this looks so good. Wonder why you haven't updated yet. But nope, I won't give up! I will wait for the next chapter, just you watch! (hehe)
cheers!
I loved this. The fact that Ginny was stalking Draco, and not even trying to hide it was incredibly amusing. I also loved Draco's storming off at the end, and his assessment of Weasleys as "contrary creatures". Very nicely written, and if there's an update in the future, I'll definitely be reading it.
I've only read a few fanfics by people who really know how to write. Your style is perfect; you put in just enough suspense and foreshadowing to leave me waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait!!! Keep up the good work and post soon.
You're a positively dreadful writer!
Lol, not I love this it's so well written. The sentence structures flow so well and I think you should ignore what that girl said about it being too much like reading. I think it has some brains to it. Anyone can string together words about penises and orgasms and the like for fluff and smut, but not everyone can gramatically and DRAMATICALLY string together an entire chapter that wholly flows with great transition. I love the storming paragraph and the "contrary creatures" bit. It's awesome
Only part I didn't like was the M'am hit him over the head with a spoon. I have this pet peeve with the M'am. I hate it when authors use M'am or Ma or anything other than Mum. Mum is more english in culture. Mother is also bad when we consider how close and tightnit the weasley family is.
Oh I DO hope you'll continue with this one. Very good indeed!
Really good. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please don't abandon it. It is nice to see a story from Draco's point of view. I love the Malfoy arrogance!
I really like your plot and characters. One thing I think you should work on (just a helpful opinion) is your writing. It's very good,it's just a little too long and complex for reading fiction. It makes it really obvious that you're reading instead of making it seem like you're watching events unfold. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but that's the best way I can phrase it. Keep up the great story though!
Author's Response: Actually, that was kind of what I was going for. ^_^ I love words, and the sounds that sentences they make when you read them out loud. And I guess the fact that I love to play with words and sentance flow sort of shines through in all my writing.
hahahahaha this is awesome! i laughed a lot at the end... it really was a perfect way to finish the first chapter! now i can't wait for the rest!
Very nicely done! I like that it's all Draco's POV and his steady mantra of Malfoyisms. I'm looking forward to the next bit.
My one teeny tiny nitpick is the use of the word regretfully where I think regretably would have been more appropriate.
Hee hee hee Oh this is really good. Wonderfully written with real humour and insight. Draco is brilliantly in character and I love his opinions of Weasleys and his thoughts on his own superiority - fabulously conceited. Great work. I'll definitely keep an eye on this one!
Author's Response: Xo Thanks so much! You're like, my idol and whatnot. ^_^ I loff Exquisite Irony with a passion!
Excellent, I love, love, love it. I hope you upate again soon, because this story rocks
I really loved this chapter! Draco's POV is really wicked, and so true to form. I think my favorite part of the chapter was the last 3 paras, especially that bit with the storming. And I certainly got some weird looks for bursting out with laughter (that licking the elbow bit got to me...I was doing so well too, containing the laughter threatening to escape, but that line just opened up the dam!) Good writing style, can't wait to read more!
Bloody feckin' hilarious, this is!
I LOVED the bit about the storming. ^_^!
And the storming bit was wicked.
So was the unplottable point business.
Very nice! I like the perspective. Good stuff! Write more please!
bu..but where is the next chapter...wha-waht's going on!?!?!
I love your characterization, especially Lucius and Narcissa. They were wonderfully evil without really knowing they were that way.
And the storming was great. It made me laugh out loud for quite a period of time. Hilarious, I tell you.
I loved this. Just enough cruelty for Malfoy not to be OOC, but you also managed to put some hilarious sarcasm in there. And there was just Malfoy losing it. 'Potty-er than Potter' I loved that. And Ginny was priceless. So fearless, but she still had a human side, you could see. I really loved this. I think it just screams for a sequal!