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Ooh, that's different. Usually Draco is the one who refuses to admit that he really loves Ginny, not the other way around. She'll probably stop denying it when he leaves. Hm, I like it, even with the less than hopeful ending. :)
Oh, wow. That was moving.
Of course, it helps that I'm listening to slightly tearful songs, but, wow. The emotion this invokes is evocative and coarse, harsh and heartfelt.
He denial is a stab from the sword of a traitor. It hurts him, hurts him to breathe.
He swallows painfully as she stabs the truth into him, coughs a little as the life rushes out of him at such a high velocity that it leaves him and the rest of the world surrounding in awe of his inner capacity to fall apart. His reaction towards Ginny is so drastic and reckless that it seems a last resort.
Poor thing; he has danced around the truth for so long, that, even now, it seems only a dream.
He coughs up his heart and cradles it in his hands as he lets out one last dying gasp, clinging to the remnants of life ever so frantically.
Oh, the poor boy.
I felt that surge of pain, the twinge of reluctant abandonment.
Everything about this just makes my eyes widen and my heart clench painfully.
Such a favorite.
Author's Response: Your review is a like a poetic work all on its own! Thanks so much for the lovely review lilydarling - it was truly beautiful.
uh, that was nice... are you considering writing a sequel? ... please?
Author's Response: Thanks! At this time, I have no plans of doing that. For now, I'm exploring other venues. But thanks again for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it!
Damn you and angst. sigh, did he really have to go to Italy? i blame it on Ginny, and her denial of their love. A great angsty read.
Author's Response: Haha, I blame Ginny too. After all, Draco is perfect, right? Anyway, thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!
Oh, this is angsty. Very nice, how Ginny was having troubles, a change from the usual loving Ginny and non commital Draco. Very well written.
Of course, now he realized that Ginny hadn’t been the one in denial. It had been him. He nodded his head slowly before reaching for the door knob. He was sure of that at least.
The next day, he volunteered for Italy.
That little bit just showed so much character, and was very well written. Thanks for the wonderful ficlet.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Oh, reading the last line gets to me, too. It's been a long time since I read this - haha, my own work but I started off with that sentence actually and worked backwards from there. Again, thanks for reviewing!
A one shot?!? I must protest -- this is the perfect start to a long fic: how does Ginny react? What happens to Draco in Italy? How does he try to move on? What brings them back together? I would love to see Ginny repentent and chasing Draco, finally wearing him down, unlike so, so many fics that are the other way 'round.
Author's Response: As I've mentioned earlier, I had plans for continuing this fic that I'm afraid will not come to fruitation. However, if you're curious about what I had planned, you are welcome to email me. Thanks for reviewing! I also like the idea of Ginny doing the chasing too - but I've done or contemplated both sides.
I love it. I'd like a sequel please to know Ginny's reaction to his going to Italy. Mainly that's because I want to know why she doesn't love him. Thanks for an excellent piece.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. Unfortunately, I don't think the sequel will ever be written though I did begin it and outline it all. If you want to know what it would've been, you could email me or er, see if I give in and do write it one day. Again, thanks for reviewing!
Wow. This piece is all-too brief, and yet it is so compelling in this form: like you've walked in one a moment of their lives, and then kept on. I felt terribly for Draco, but I adored the way you wrote Ginny, no matter how badly it hurt him. She wasn't the pliable and perfect, easily-loving Ginny from most fics, and that was fabulous. You have a way with words, because you managed to convey a sense of desperation, of resignation, and of thwarted love, all in very few words.
Fabulous job! I love your work. :-)
Author's Response: And I love your reviews! (And your work too!) But since we're in a review context, let me say again that your reviews are just so smashing. I like working with different Ginnys and Dracos. I think that's what's so compelling about characters that are sketched out enough to get a real sense of who they are but not complete in the way the Golden Trio are. There's this wide latitude in exploring all the possibilities. I'm glad you like Ginny, I usually very focused on Draco that I miss out on Ginny sometimes. Thanks again for reviewing!
Yeah, so I reviewed your fic over at the dgficexchange and I wrote there that once I found out who wrote "And the Twilight Sounds" I would properly fangirl you. In short, that means I feel the need to review all of your fics and add you to my favorites list.
I absolutely loved this fic, I actually snorted when I read this line,
“I’m still with you,” she sniffed. “I could be with Harry.”
And I followed that up with a hearty "Oh no she did not!" O.O
Author's Response: Hm, I think I like this fangirling thing. =) Yeah, Ginny is just being full of it at the moment. After all, we know that she would never choose Harry over Draco! Thanks for reviewing and of course, fangirling!
I like the way that was written. Not too much angst...just the perfect war fic.
Author's Response: Thanks very much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it.
Author's Response: Well I never intended to do a sequel but who knows? The requests are quite compelling. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
I liked that take on Ginny. She's normally so pure and warm. I don't think she'd be after the chamber. I think I like a cold Ginny and a desperate Draco. That was very believable.
I was a little confused about the whole "I could be with Harry" thing and why it was a mistake for Ginny to say that. I can see that as being reassuring just as quickly as I can see it insulting Draco. (Though maybe it’s just Draco being stupid over Harry.) But then again, it makes it obvious before that there's some definite tension when he reacts that way to something that doesn’t seem like such a big deal. So I don't really think you should take that out, but I'd love another sentence or two clarifying in some way or another why that's angering for Draco even though it might be obvious to really obsessive fans. Don't make the mistake of thinking all of your audience is brilliant. It just doesn't happen that way.
Oh, and I loved this sentence:
"Ginny let her arms drop and Draco felt the cold air wrap around him instead."
Keep it up. And I hope the next chapter of Common Cure is well on it's way. I like that story.
Author's Response: Thank you for the constructive criticism. It's very helpful and I do consider it when I write. I try not to be too ambiguous when I write (haha, I sound like I have done this more than twice! but I suppose every chapter is like a blank page) or if I am, I do so with the intention of tying up loose ends. But once in awhile, I guess I like to shake things up a bit. And thanks for pinpointing specific parts! I really appreciate that!!
Wow...dark ending. Are you planning on continuing?
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Unfortunately, I have no plans to continue this bit. However, in my next long fic, don't be too surprised if you run into a similar scene...
Ouch! Of course that is my interpretation of the tremendous ambiguity in this fic. My heart aches for Draco in his darkness. I hope going to Italy allows him a bit of a reprieve before coming back to face all of his demons again. A lovely piece with enough angst to go around for all of us! I loved it so much that my disappointment at NOT seeing another chapter of A Common Cure evaporated. Sometimes taking a break from the "pressures" of a long chaptered fic with something else can be so therapeutic. Thanks for this one. It's a keeper! - fallenwitch
Author's Response: Thanks again for another lovely review. But never fear, I have a timeline to adhere to. I WILL finish ACC before I graduate. Oh...that's only in 10 weeks. I WILL finish ACC before I enroll in law school? (But I'll try for the earlier date!)
I really liked this story. I would like to see a follow up on it. See how Ginny handled him leaving.
Author's Response: I've considered writing her reaction in but as I've mentioned in my other responses, I like the ambiguity and finality of his decision to leave. On the other hand, I'm thinking of working off the ideas of "Deny" for another longer piece. Thanks for the review!! I really appreciate it.
Wow... I like what you did its not every day you read a story where Draco sees his own lies and faces them. I'm still waiting for CC but its nice to know that you are working on it. Yay! For teen angst! Oh those wonderful years nobody in their right mind misses..
Author's Response: Haha...hey, speak for yourself. I fear getting older! I thought 19 was a great year. High school, on the other hand, is a different story. But thanks for the review! And I'm working at it!
Lovely story of unrequited yearning. Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you liked it!
I'm not sure how I feel about this. Sad, certainly, but other than that, I don't know. Should I be hopeful? Or should I despair? And what is Ginny really feeling? It's a little confusing, but I kind of like the ambiguity. But I would probably like answers better! Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: I actually went back to this story, after I posted it, and edited it to make it more ambiguious! I usually like to tie up all my loose ends but I kind of like it this way... Sorry! On the other hand, writing this little piece has spurred some thoughts for another long work I'm considering after I finish C.C. But thank you very much for the review! I very much like the ambivalent feedback!