Reviews For Mummy's Story
Name: Aunt Annie reviewed Never Forget on May 31, 2006 08:46 am
Hi, I really wish you would update, this is really a good story, please update soon

Author's Response: I realised that I'd responded to every review but this one... it's a chapter or so late, but I'm responding! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm posting more asap!
Name: Mj reviewed Never Forget on Apr 28, 2006 01:57 am
He will come back, won't he? Even if he doesn't it's still a great story. Please update soon!!

Author's Response: ^^ I will!
Name: Kisou reviewed Never Forget on Apr 26, 2006 09:20 pm
I was reading the other reviews, and even though I kind of said this already, I just wanted you to know you're not that far off. I have a younger brother who's seven right now and he reads astronomy books (The kind you'd get at a planitarium for adults who don't know anything much about the subject.) for fun as bed time reading. He actually reads better than my sister who's two years older than him. Some kids really are just intelligent.

Author's Response: Wow, that's impressive. Good for him! So look at Cissa that way.
Name: Kisou reviewed Never Forget on Apr 26, 2006 09:17 pm
I think this is good. Interesting, certainly. I keep stopping and trying to figure out if it's believable that she's seven. And most of the time, I'm not sure. She seems a little more intelligent then some seven year olds but not all of them. Some kids are naturally brilliant, and she certainly has good genes for such. Keep checking yourself, because it's so easy to slip in to your normal voice, but you seem to be doing a wonderful job of it currently.

I liked Luna. She's highly amusing. And she's my favorite character in the books. (Draco second and Ginny third, of course.)


Author's Response: Those are my favourite three characters. Along with Sirius Black and the other Marauders. ^^ Thanks, I will check -- I've read all my chapters a million times. xP
Name: flame_kitty reviewed Never Forget on Apr 25, 2006 02:45 pm
Ministry of Magic? Was she meeting Draco in Knockturn Alley? And did he perhaps go to the ministry to clear his name or something?
I'm so bound by your story!
Keep up the awesome job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's awesome! ^^ I can't answer those questions without giving away plot, except that I answered in a Response earlier on why Ginny's going to the Ministry... it's nothing big, just to visit family. And Knockturn Alley? We'll hear more about this later. x.o
Name: Meg reviewed Never Forget on Apr 25, 2006 02:56 am
Little Cissa is quite the child prodigy, isn't she? Not only is she Slytherin sneaky, she also reads and deduces things like a MUCH older child. 7 years old? Come on.

Still, a sweet story that I am enjoying. Carry on.

Author's Response: Yeah... considering I'm pretty much double Cissa's age, I'm working reeaaaallllyyyy hard to think like a seven year old. I've written later chapters and I think she sounds a little younger. But... to make me sound more like that all-amazing-knowing author (x.o), yes. She's a little genius. xP Thank you for the review!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Never Forget on Apr 24, 2006 04:51 pm
I love your little Cissa. I ADORE your Luna. I think my favourite line was,

"I need him to come back. I need him to make Mummy happy."

Yes, he does need to come back to make Ginny happy! I' be happy too! ;)

Author's Response: Ginny does deserve to be happy!! I'm glad you love the characters. Good characters can make even a terrible plot a good story. I love Cissa, too!! xP Thanks for the review!
Name: shadieladie reviewed Never Forget on Apr 24, 2006 04:47 pm
what? why would she go to the Ministry of Magic?

Author's Response: To see her family. Ron, Harry, and her father all work there, and she was previously informed that her family who don't work there are going to visit. So it's pretty much a Weasley reunion. ^^
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