Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Explanation on Apr 15, 2009 07:57 am
its good and i like the p&p that ran through it. i just feel like draco was a bit ooc. but other than that, great job!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Explanation on Mar 02, 2008 12:23 pm
i love pride and prejudice. this is great too!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Morrigan reviewed
Explanation on Apr 10, 2006 12:56 pm
I really liked your story... is very easy to read and it's original, the only but I have is that even if try really hard, I can't imagine Draco admitting that he's jealous of Harry Potter!! Anyway, nice story
Author's Response: True. I had trouble imagining that, too! Still, it was necessary to the story. Thank you for your review!
Name: luvreluv reviewed
Explanation on Apr 09, 2006 08:52 pm
Okay, I think that you had a really good idea to start with. Also, your style is very readable, but there were some things that I didn't really enjoy about your story. First, if you want to keep in character, then Draco probably wouldn't have ever read Pride and Prejudice. Secondly, your story was very rushed, and the new relationship came out of absolutely nowhere. Even if he did like her hair, what was there to make either of them let go of their animosity like THAT? *imagine snapping fingers*. There isn't mcuh of anything after that, just try to work on the cliched-ness. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! It's always been difficult for me not to rush the one-shots. I'll have to work on that. Also, we had to operate on the hope that Draco had read P&P. Thanks again!
Name: missa reviewed
Explanation on Apr 09, 2006 05:09 am
i really doubt that draco would have even heard of p&p let alone have read it!
but cute story all the same.
Author's Response: Well, I was operating on the hope that he had! Thanks for reviewing.
Name: KateinVA reviewed
Explanation on Apr 08, 2006 02:07 pm
Nicely told! (I actually just finished watching P&P - Fine eyes, indeed.) You've made good parallels to the novel.
Author's Response: Thank you! I had hoped I was successful with that.
Name: wishiwereaweasley reviewed
Explanation on Apr 08, 2006 10:03 am
Lovely, my dear. Of course, I already knew that! I am particularly fond of the title. ;)
Author's Response: Oh, yes, the title's the best part. Thank you!
Name: sapphirehoney_929 reviewed
Explanation on Apr 07, 2006 02:22 pm
awe, i love it, i love it, i love it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad it was enjoyable.