Reviews For Breaking His Heart
Name: shaded reviewed Stop It, Draco on Jan 07, 2009 03:26 pm
Aah! This story just *cannot* end here! I feel so invested in Draco's plight. Poor guy really can't catch a break, can he?

The tension between Ginny and Draco was well expressed. "Stop looking at me in that tone of voice." is a prime example. *g* You can just sense that they are both at their wit's end.

I wonder whether Draco will go after Ginny to apologise and explain his abrupt behaviour. Or maybe he'll decide to retain a slither of his 'Malfoy pride' as he calls it and return to having tense silence between them. Will they both still be in the cottage when the baby is born? How will it be delivered? Will the child look like it's father? So many possibilities...

I really hope that you continue this story, as it has great promise. Oh, and happy new year! :)
Name: Moonyk reviewed Stop It, Draco on Sep 06, 2007 08:09 am
I always love your Dracos but I think you've abandoned the fic, which is really upsetting cos I wanted to know who's the father!! Haha!!! Oh well. Great job so far though!!!
Name: reena01 reviewed Stop It, Draco on Jan 08, 2007 11:12 am
Interesting story, can't wait to see more of it.
Name: Blond JAMES Blond reviewed Stop It, Draco on Oct 29, 2006 09:21 am
you really should continue it.
please, for me?
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Stop It, Draco on Sep 26, 2006 08:40 am
Okay, this fic is totally NOT crashing and burning. I, for one, and eagerly awaiting another chapter. The angst is ripping my gut to pieces (that paired with the angst in Along Came a Wizard). I can't wait for the endings to come out happy after all of the gut-wrenching that has been going on.


So, don't think your fic is crashing and burning. It's really well written and I can't wait for another installment.
Name: jscoope reviewed Stop It, Draco on Sep 14, 2006 07:10 am
Is this story going to get an ending? It's great so far
Name: PenelopeWeasley reviewed Stop It, Draco on Aug 07, 2006 09:36 am
Great job, can't wait to see what happens next! And who's the father!?!
Name: starry_laa reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 28, 2006 07:12 am
Here's hoping that Draco suffered from amnesia as well *Grins*
Kinda feel for that poor guy- having the baby along isn't exactly going to help things if the baby isn't his.
I hope it doesn't crash and burn!
Name: Scanty Slytherin reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 26, 2006 02:30 pm
i dont think its crashed... but where is it going?
Name: dawn03 reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 26, 2006 12:57 pm
I absolutely love this story. I like the twist with Ginny being pregnant but not knowing who the father is etc. I can't wait until we find out what happened to Ginny while Draco was away and the sexual tension between the two is amazing.
Name: Jessica reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 26, 2006 09:39 am
I think your story is wonderfull, please keep it going!
Name: MrsDanielRadcliffe reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 26, 2006 01:27 am
That was fantastic! I really enjoyed it! I can't wait until you have the time to update again!
Name: patricia reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 04:55 pm
this is such a good story right now i love how draco and ginny are separated and when they have a chance to be together, she's pregent and has amnesia...great twist i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Name: shadieladie reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 04:38 pm
Well i don't know about other ppl but i like the story
Name: Nicole reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 01:42 pm
Absolutely loving this one, so there shall be no crash n burn for this one, I'd be devastated. There's nothing quite like Draco POV story and the circumstances in this one while a bit soap operay are fantastic, so you have to continue until we at least resolve the whole baby daddy thing...please with a cherry on top?
Name: cornishpixie reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 04:16 am
You really should keep going on this. I love your stories, the plot is always so well developed and you can never guarantee that you know what is going to happen. That kind of story writing keeps you on the edge of your seat.

Also, is Draco going to get good news anytime soon?
Name: WG reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 04:07 am
O dear... what a total mess. Have to say that i don't feel totally sympathetic towards Draco. Sure, he is miserable; but what about Ginny?

Poor thing... to be pregnant AND have amnesia AND to top it off not to know who the father of her kid is....
Name: skyfalcon21 reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 03:38 am
Dear, I love this story! I don't sense it crashing and burning any time soon, so don't worry! You still have me! Keep up the good work!
Bon chance! Sky
Name: lizzyop reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 24, 2006 02:37 am
Oooh, poor Draco, my heart is bleeding for him, that someone robbed him of his "package of red silk and freckles" :(

AAnd, why would this fic crash? I am quite sure that I'm not the only one arund who adores it :))
Good luck, keep on, still fab, Liz
Name: moerae reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 05:49 pm
I remember this fic from the first time around, except I didn't remember it's name, and felt this long lost connection with the fic!:) Great job so far; except I don't know how you are going to give it a happy ending. Here's a thought: she was articificially inseminated as a back up for Potter, so maybe if he failed they would have another hope, and who better to do it than the Weasley girl? I am giving Harry a bit of credit here. See this way everyone's problem is solved! I'm sure you are going to throw us through the grand canyon, what with cliffies and trenches along the way...I must confess i'm looking forward to it!
Name: dracosmysextoy reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 05:07 pm
i like it. i like it. i like it. all i want to know is who's is it? is it really that hard of a question? thanks for updating!
Name: Marcia reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 04:20 pm
FW,

I just do not understand why you're hesitant about this story! It isn't remotely close to crashing and burning. Where's your insecurity about it coming from? I love it!

This chapter is very well written and the phrases, images are a joy to read. I love your use of the language. As for the plot, dying to see you pull it out of the hat much as Harry did Godric's sword in the chamber. Write faster! [and update The Slytherin's Witch too...still tired of it?]
xxxooo!!!
Marcia
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 04:10 pm
No crashing and burning here my dear fallenwitch! I love your works and this included. The whle notion of Ginny being in a place where she believes her and Draco are together and being very much in love with him while Draco knows that time has passed and feels hurt is very interesting. I'm dying to know who the father is as I still cling to the hope that it is Draco (I don't know how - thats your job!). :) I liked the snippets of jealousDraco thinking that the child might be Harry's.
Name: Calise reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 04:07 pm
Is it maybe possible that those close to Ginny feared for her and did something to her that made the baby she was carrying grow at a later date. I read it once in a "bad" fic and wondered if fully explored and done correctly it it would turn out good. Either way I adore your fic.
-Calise

Author's Response: Hmmm...that's a new idea, but not one that we will be using here. Isn't it amazing what we can twist and turna situation into when we "need" to? Thanks for much for your review, Calise, and I'm glad you are liking this one! -fallenwitch
Name: daisymama reviewed Stop It, Draco on Apr 23, 2006 03:58 pm
Yay! I can't tell you how happy I am that you are updating this story! NO WAY is this story crashing and burning. You know how much I enjoy your writing, and I think this is such an original and interesting storyline. I cannot wait to see where this story is going. Just one question.....does anyone in the Order know where this "safe haven" is?

Author's Response: Great question! Nope, no one but Draco knows about it. Well, Ginny and Draco now! -fallenwitch
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