Name: Mollie reviewed Chapter 2 on Jun 19, 2007 01:25 am
Wow, this was so good that i want to put it in my book of quotes. I really like this poem!!!
Name: passion reviewed Chapter 2 on Apr 22, 2006 08:06 pm
Brillaint!!i liked it!!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Nectaris reviewed Chapter 2 on Apr 22, 2006 04:47 pm
Wow, this was really nice. I am a pretty critical poetry person (meaning I am a screaming banshee critic of cliche poetry) and this is REALLY talented. Thank you.

Author's Response: *blushes* Gosh, Thank you! I'm not exactly a poetry person, but friday I had this sudden urge to write a villanelle, and I did! Thank you SO much for your lovely coment
Name: Meg reviewed Chapter 2 on Apr 22, 2006 04:07 pm
I have the image of Ginny in an Azkaban-like environment, or perhaps the place itself it Voldie won, and Draco on the outside watching and helpless to do anything for her. The only thing I have a bit of a disconnect with is the phrase "for tomorrow is a new day". It makes it wonder if I've misinterpreted your poem. Either way, I thought it was lovely and evocative. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you! The image I had in mind was that Ginny was in a psych ward or something, and Draco keeps looking for the old her to come back to him. She's withdrawing/receding into her mind. But I can see how you might see that! Even under that context, Draco might wish her to fight back, to not be so obedient. He simply wants response from her... Either way thank you for your lovely comment! It was my first atttempt at a villanelle, and it's hard work! :-)
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