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Name: Jewels reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 24, 2006 05:18 am
brilliant! love it all! :D
Name: Sophinna reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 24, 2006 02:05 am
Wow, I really enjoyed reading that. I like your writing style a lot, it is warm and friendly and I especially like the first line - doesn't that apply to us all? Thanks for this!
Name: Kisou reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 10:36 pm
Okay, this is interesting, but what happened to the cold, calculating, brilliant blond boy we know from the sixth book. That ability to work, and inability to work with people, doesn't go away on its own. This is just a character check.

I think sometimes we get caught up because we, or at least of the majority of us, on this site love Draco. And think him the sexiest man alive in the Poterverse. But, we need to remember 1) That wasn't necessarily true in school, he's supposed to be pointy looking and 2) He's not nice. Not nice at all, ever, in any circumstance that we've seen. Ever. We've seen him love people, but really, only his mother. But have we ever really seen him treat someone decently? That's not to say he wouldn't, but you have to remember who you're dealing with. If you want to right a story about the perfect bachelor who doesn't know how to work, go ahead. But don't put it on this site, because, sorry, that's not Draco.


I just re-read that and I realize it's a little bit mean. But I'm not going to erase any of it. It's your right to know what I actually think. But also know I'm probably being overly critical. Almost every being on this site has this same problem. So don't let it discourage you, just notice it, and gain something from the fact that you know what mistake you're making when others don't.
Name: Ms.Malfoy reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 08:47 pm
Looking good! Hope you keep updating.
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 07:03 pm
Love it, love it , love it! Your Draco is so great - self absorbed and realitic. Hmmmm - what will become of all this altruism? (I stole that word from Mynuet's review)
Name: CuteElf14 reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 03:57 pm
This is lovely! Write more! :)
Name: spider reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 03:45 pm
This is off to a very nice start. Ginny and Draco's argument was definitely amusing, but it's nice to see that he came back to bring her breakfast at least. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Name: Mynuet reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 01:36 pm
Oh, dear. I don't think there's anything quite as terrifying as Draco being altruistic.
Name: moerae reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 01:06 pm
I like I like!
Name: whatever_mayhap reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 12:58 pm
Great story + very well written.
Name: smprsgrrl reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 12:13 pm
Ooo, I like. It was very well written and I'm particularly a fan of Draco like this. Very nice start.
Name: Embellished reviewed Chapter One: 5F, Muggle Relations on Apr 23, 2006 11:53 am
Hee hee. This certainly looks like a promising story. A lazy Draco merely getting by on charm is perfect. I am very much looking forward to seeing what comes next!
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