Name: Kat reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 03, 2006 11:57 pm
Nice story for your first attempt keep it up
Author's Response: oooohh... your second review? hahaha... thank you very much! I'll post the next chapter as soon as the site is operational again!
-KiM
Name: KAt reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 03, 2006 11:56 pm
Nice story for a first timer hehe keep it up
Author's Response: well, thanks very much!
Name: saucy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2006 04:31 pm
This interesting. But there are some flaws. I was mentally changing the wording of sentences around as I read. I hope you don't mind me asking, but do you have a beta-reader? If not, and you want one, I am available for the job. Anyways, the plot is very good, overall, and I want to read more.
Author's Response: Okay, saucy... Thanks very much!
Author's Response: I would be very happy if you'd be my beta-reader!
Name: sapphirehoney_929 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2006 01:44 pm
this is so cute, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I honestly have the second chapter now... i'll post it soon, after it has been edited by a beta-reader... i think i need one! thanks again! hope you read the second chapter!
--KiM
Name: Slytherin Wolf reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2006 11:48 am
Nice start. The artist of the song is Jordan Hill, if you were curious to who sings the song.
Author's Response: Thanks very much Slytherin Wolf... I like that song very very much!
--KiM
Name: Akire3 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2006 06:39 am
tres cute! I like this Ginny she seems to have a lot of spunk, and good chapter, cant wait for the next one.
:) :) :) :) :) :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I like Ginny there too! Thanks for the review! Chap 2 out soon! Hope you read it too!
Name: lina reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 29, 2006 05:19 am
I liked it; there's definitely potential here. What song is that? And just some advice for the next chapter, you might want to watch the repetition sometimes. "She turned to him gave a cute little smile—which surprisingly looked very cute", and the amount of times he refers to her as redhead, I think it would flow better with less repetition, try speaking it aloud to hear how it sounds? That was my only thing, otherwise it was great! Can't wait 'till chapter 2.
Author's Response: Thanks for the tip! I'll try to make sure I won't get redundant next time! thanks very much! chapter two will be posted soon! --KiM