Reviews For Amici ed Amanti
Name: #1 fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 8 on Jun 23, 2004 05:05 pm
Just when I thought Liam finally came to his senses and was giving in to the tension, sparks and lust- he pulls away! He pulls away! I don't think he pulled away because he is about to cheat on Bella. I bet(at least hoping that is the furthest thing from his mind). i guess he thinks just like he sai - that he ruined everything! Well, he is for leaving poor Lucy like that! Poor Girl! Did he just think he was the one taking advantage and that's why he put a stop to it? Does he blame Lucy? Can't wait to read what happens next.
Name: Euphrosyne reviewed Roman Holiday Part 8 on Jun 23, 2004 03:23 pm
This is a fab story - I never imagined that I would ever like another set of characters as much as Liam and LucyAnn - but they really come *alive* in your writing! Or it could just be that he's so Malfoy-ish... Please write more! Not sure where the border between begging and encouragement is exactly - at the moment I don't really care as long as something induces you to update. You are a great writer and thus rather evil for making us wait for more :p
Name: madalene3666 reviewed Roman Holiday Part 8 on Jun 23, 2004 02:03 pm
I absolutely adore this story - and I've loved Liam ever since you first introduced him. He's Draco all over again, isn't he? And the promise of D/G in the future - can't wait. But please finish Tangled Web or fill in the blanks that you hint at so teasingly of how Ginny and Draco got together. What I imagine can't be as good as you'd write it!
Name: #1 fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 7 on Jun 22, 2004 05:27 pm
Liam is just asking for it! I mean, they are sharing the same bed. So much temptation can arise. I would love to know what's going on in Liam's head. Is he attracted to her? In some small way he must be. I am surprised he is just so comfortable in the small bed, I am worried that he does just see her as a friend. What man would just sleep side by side with a woman and not try anything? Oh my! Oh my! Next Chapter please!
Name: #1fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 6 on Jun 22, 2004 05:19 pm
They are so natural together! Can't Liam see this. Why is he so blind? When is he going to finally realize that Lucy Ann is the girl for him? So many questions I have. And Lucy Ann can cook! Yes! more points in her favor. I bet that Italian witch can't cook to save her life. See Liam, Bella is bad bad bad. Lucy Ann good good good. Now wake up and smell the roses! No more getting drunk and denying your feelings for the girl. Just shag her already!
Name: Magica reviewed Roman Holiday Part 7 on Jun 22, 2004 12:39 pm
This story is great, I didn't really get into your other stories as much as this one. No offense, they were great but this ones amazing. I can't wait to find out what happens.
Name: Zazuza reviewed Roman Holiday Part 1 on Jun 21, 2004 11:44 pm
Wooooooooohoooooooooo!! I'm SO GLAD I went looking for your stories again!! You disappeared from fanfiction.net and don't post all your stuff on PortKey, so I assumed you didn't write stuff to post on the internet anymore. Can I just say again how HAPPY I AM that I had to search around for your stories so I could send "Cabbage Capers" to a friend of mine?! VERY HAPPY. Yup, I'm a big fan of your stories. I absolutely love the family you've built up for Draco and Ginny. I don't even remember what name I used to review, but I posted a comment about one of your stories once before (yes, I know, bad me for only doing so once... as far as can I recall anyway), and actually suggested that you write something about Liam and Lucy Ann. I don't know whether you did so in response to that or decided to do so completely by yourself, but I'm (again) VERY HAPPY that you decided to write this. Right... um, I haven't actually read it yet. *blush* Going to do so now... Chapter 1: What a b!*$# (Bella, that is)!! Chapter 2: Awww! Cute greeting, love the kiss/punch reference. A few typos, but nothing drastic. "Lucy Goosey" is so adorable coming from Liam!! *giggles like a maniac* Chapter 3: Typos again. Loved this: "...stopped her mutinous thoughts of wondering where Bella kept her wand and where she'd love to stick it." You go with those instincts, Lucy!! Nasty thing, that Bella. Chapter 4: Response to the end: AAAAWWW!! Oh, and I'm glad Bella is gone for now. Chapter 5: Strange that Liam decides where they shop for her dress and which one she should buy... I ADORE the thong episode! *snicker* Aw, c'mon Liam, you are in D-E-N-I-A-L. She's even a redhead, for goodness sake - it was clearly meant to be! Chapter 6: His uncle Severus!! Haha!! I wonder what dear Snapey-poo thinks about that... Typo. I'm loving it so far, although I really wish Bella wasn't in the picture and that, well... I guess I kind of wish it was from Liam's point of view and he was the one already in love with her... but that's just me. I guess it would be kind of odd to suddely change perspectives, but would you consider doing a few chapters from Liam't POV? Once again, I'm so happy you're doing this, and it's turning out beautifully! If I don't review again, it is merely because the laziness has returned. Rest assured that I will be checking this regularly for updates! So post lots!

Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful review. I'm sorry you had a hard time finding me - ff.net deleted my account sometime between Saturday evening and Sunday morning without any warning - I don't know what I did and I still haven't gotten any response from them regarding that. I can't post all my stories on portkey because I break ships and the Liam/Lucy Ann stories don't fit. Here has been the best place to keep them all together. And don't worry, I'm still writing. Thanks again!
Name: RavenclawChrissie reviewed Roman Holiday Part 6 on Jun 21, 2004 07:56 pm
This wonderful story deserves a wonderful review. I enjoy this story very much. I can't wait for more! *sends encouraging vibes your way for this story as well as for 15 years!* (The Gareth cookie is an evil evil tease!!)
Name: #1fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 5 on Jun 21, 2004 07:27 am
How do you manage to make the tension just so unbearable! AAAH! In a good way of course.Many authors have tried it, few have succeeded and you have. I can feel it myself. Reading this, I feel like I am in Lucy Ann's shoes. The heat is coming right off the page! I can even feel it from Liam's side. It's smoking, that's what! He is in denial. Serious denial. More Please! Please? With a cherry on top?
Name: #1fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 4 on Jun 21, 2004 07:19 am
Love the girl talk with Stephie! Listen to your friends Lucy Ann! You know you want to shag Liam's brains out! Who wouldn't? He is the son of the one and only Draco Malfoy,plus he's also got Weasley genes. RAWR! They seem so comfortable together,sipping their wine. Now, the ending where Liam is just staring at the door. He is starting to feel something, isn't he? I can just picture it like it's a movie! Oh wonderful! Wonderful. I want to make a fanfilm out of this.
Name: #1fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 3 on Jun 21, 2004 05:22 am
Is Liam blind? Bella is fantastic! No! No! And she goes and insults lucy Ann. I wish Liam could hear Bella because her true nature is really coming out now. Poor Lucy Ann, I would have thrown my croissant with jelly straight at her!
Name: #1fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 2 on Jun 21, 2004 05:16 am
She still has a thing for Liam, since her school days when she sucker punched him for kissing her! Sweet!! But it's unreciprocated! She has all these butterflies in her stomach and he has Isabella! I wish he would start feeling the same way. I know it is sometimes hard for females to think of male friends in a way other than friendship. You know the saying - once a guy is in a friend role he is there for life. But I have heard opposite is true for men. Men might say that they have girls who are "just friends" but they always admit to thinking about them sometimes in a not so friendly or beyond friendly manner. I hope Liam soon sees Lucy as girlfriend or better yet wife material.
Name: #1Fan reviewed Roman Holiday Part 1 on Jun 21, 2004 05:11 am
i love your And Baby Makes Three and Cabbage Capers! I love the whole universe you've created with Draco and Ginny and love seeing little Liam evolve. It's almost as if he is an actual person, you've written him so well! I feel like I know him, silly, huh? I am already rooting for Lucy Ann to give Isabella a good slythering hex. I hate the Italian witch already. I thought Malfoy's had taste! Didn't his dad teach him anything or did he inherit Draco's bad judgement? Hey when are you going to finish Tangled Web and will the new baby...i guess she would be a older child in this story arc, make an appearance?
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