Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 2 on May 24, 2009 06:03 pm
a thought provoking story... i need more action...
Name: snitch369 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Sep 20, 2006 06:27 am
Rrrrrrrrr, I'm so pissed off on Ginny's behalf! The meddlers!
Author's Response: *g* Thank you? I guess...
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 2 on Sep 09, 2006 05:30 pm
~LOL. That is so Ginny>~
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 16, 2006 10:03 pm
I completely love this story. I'm so looking forward to more updates. Narcissa is so mean, the perfect mother-in-law. Break in the Sun (till the Sun Breaks Down) is one of my favorites.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy to hear it! :) And Narcissa...yes, she's wonderfully mean, isn't she? Love her. :)
Name: Sarah Prowess reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 16, 2006 10:21 am
Finally a good d/g story!! I loved Break in the Sun as well! That whole first fight in the bar and the alley was BEAUTIFUL!! There arguing is spot on. Your portrayal of their characters is spot on, from Ginny's stubborness to Malfoy's arrogance and possessiveness.
I'm really looking forward to reading this fic! Rotten conniving parents!! I'm not completely sure Draco would go against his father's wishes either. How long til the next few chapters will be posted?
Author's Response: I am happy you feel their banter is natural, and in character :) I do enjoy writing it. The next chapter will be out soonish, when I have time to edit it again, and then there's one more that's almost finished, I think, and after that, I'll have to hold off posting for a little while till I can finish more. I'm glad you're enjoying the read so far! Thank you!
Name: curly reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 16, 2006 01:32 am
hahahaha, just cool. the more they want to appart ginny and draco the more ginny wants to marry him. i´m looking foreward the next chappters and how gin and drake will behave at such a situation. You are a great writer cause you let your readers always nosy !!!
Author's Response: Lol! Thank you!
Name: spider reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 14, 2006 07:32 pm
Ah. Never try to stop a determined Ginny Weasley. Although the ploy that Narcissa, Molly, and Arthur have come up with might work... Draco still admires his father enough that he might heed him - if not out of fear.
Either way, what I liked most about this chapter was that Narcissa seemed very in character. It would have been a bit unnatural for her to have agreed so readily to Draco and Ginny's engagement. She behaved as I would expect her to: calm enough in front of Ginny, though not necessarily gushing with joy, and then cutting toward Molly and Arthur.
As I said before, nice job.
Author's Response: I love Narcissa so much, writing her fills me with enormous glee, in this story. She's so wicked.
As to the parents' little plan...it's not quite what it seems *g* You'll see. Thank you!
Name: WG reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 14, 2006 03:36 pm
Again - poor Ginny. himm... didn't expect Mr. & Mrs. Weasley to stoop quite so low... wonder if Draco will have to balls to stand up to his father...
Looking forward to ur next chapter.
Author's Response: I pondered this, after you said you wouldn't expect them to do that, but the way I see it, they are desperate, and scared - and seeing how the Ministry works, I have no doubt that such 'favours' are everyday occurances. But you'll see soon how it all plays out. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 14, 2006 01:27 pm
I am so mad! WHy cannot they leave them alone! Ma, I am ticked off so this has to be a better chapter! I look forward to knwoing how they both decide to work around their parents and what lies ahead for them! Fabulous chapter.
Author's Response: *g* Glad to have evoked strong emotion. Thank you!
Name: Marcia reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 14, 2006 12:33 pm
Squee!! So happy to see you posting again! Keep on going!! And thank you.
Author's Response: Thank *you*! I'm happy to be posting, too.
Name: adorame reviewed
Chapter 2 on Aug 14, 2006 12:03 pm
wow, what a great chapter! What can possibly happen now once DADY Malfoy is pulled into the picture? Hope that you update soon.
Author's Response: Hmm...you'll see what Narcissa is planning very soon :) Thanks for reviewing!