Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 09, 2010 01:32 am
So sad. Damn Draco.
Author's Response: I know. He was a meanie. :(
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 27, 2010 11:44 am
a cute one..
Author's Response: Thanks. ^^
Name: bluelover reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 15, 2009 10:38 pm
Love the story! The poem is so beautiful =)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Name: LovelyLytton reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 24, 2008 08:20 pm
I liked it! Determined and heartbroken Ginny and seemingly cold Draco always make a good plot!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it! n_n
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 02, 2008 11:24 am
Very well written. I especially like how you wove the poem into the story, so that it becomes part of the narrative. Draco is a heartless man to leave Ginny and their daughter to marry Pansy.
I like how you gradually introduce what is happening; firstly with Ginny's tears, then news of the impending wedding and then the fact that Ginny is pregnant. Slowly but surely the whole picture comes together. (Now I'm gonna run off to read the next part..)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! n_n
Name: iheartHP reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 06, 2007 11:30 am
wow thats all i can say cause right now i am speechless!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Mythica reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 14, 2007 09:27 am
That was sad... but very good. I'm glad she's so strong. It's a good model for single pregnant women everywhere.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Her life is tough for her, obviously, but I think she stays strong throughout Mistakes and Forgiveness too.
Name: Aphrodite reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 13, 2006 07:27 am
Love it.
Author's Response: Yay! Thanks! (Sorry. I'm trying to zero out the reviews I haven't responded to. XP)
Name: saucy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 23, 2006 11:49 am
That's so sad, I'm getting all teary-eyed.
Author's Response: Awww. Sorry. XP Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 20, 2006 10:16 pm
I wrote a story by this name. It's sweet, but it seems, at least from just reading this, a little too complacent for Ginny. I also don't think her family would kick her out. They might not be happy, but they love each other too muhc to be that heartless because of one stupid thing like that could have been.
Author's Response: I'm not sure exactly how Ginny is complacent. Because she let Draco leave her? Because she didn't fight her family kicking her out? I agree that I don't really think the Weasley's WOULD kick Ginny out. That was the one part of this one-shot that never really rang true for me, but I left it because I wanted to portray her yearning for the past and her lack of support. That was probably overkill, and this is definitely not how I would write Ginny now five thousand years later. XP
Name: Passion reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 18, 2006 02:40 am
That was brilliant..i really liked it...i especially liked the poem...great job!! Damn you Draco...!!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
Name: KatherineGrace reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 06:55 pm
you should really continue this. or leave it open for others to continue. well done.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! (Sorry. I'm trying to zero out the reviews I haven't responded to. XP)
Name: Kara M reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 03:20 pm
You should add more parts. you've got a really good plot line going.
Author's Response: Thanks! There are now two sequels to this story!
Name: Kara M reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 03:20 pm
You should add more parts. you've got a really good plot line going.
Author's Response: Thanks! There are now two sequels to this story!
Name: susue reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 02:04 pm
that was really good. haha i criedd. :(
sequel?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! There are now two sequels to this story!
Name: Lyndsie Fenele reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 11:26 am
*cheers* Very evocative. I know you said you only have time to read drabbles anymore, but how about writing them? *points to "challenges" section on the sparkly new forums* I'm so glad the corruption is complete!
Author's Response: The corruption is very, very complete! (Sorry. I'm trying to zero out the reviews I haven't responded to. XP)
Name: dragoncharmer79 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 10:59 am
Are you going to add a sequel or is that it? I would love to know how Draco would react to seeing his and Ginny's daughter after she was born.
Author's Response: I've turned this story into a trilogy, so there are now two sequels! (And sooo sorry for responding to this nearly seven years later. I'm trying to zero out the reviews I haven't responded to. XP)
Name: Aunt Annie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 10:48 am
You know this is so sad, but you could do a continuation. Maybe!! there is alot of potential there.
Author's Response: I've made this a trilogy now, so there are two sequels! Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
Name: spider reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 09:11 am
Nice story. Even though Draco and Ginny aren't together it's good to know that she can move on. Your poem is beautiful, as well.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 17, 2006 08:50 am
This is so sad. I was in tears. It hurt me to see that in this story, Draco is a cold hearted bastard.
Author's Response: Haha. Ginny has this theory that he was too afraid to go against his family's wishes and marry her, so instead, he pushed her away. He really does love her though. Too bad he has no idea what's good for him. And now he has to live with and sleep next to Pansy for a hundred and thirty years.