I very good story, Prongsie! Very sad though. It's very brave of you to kill them both off. I haven't had the guts to kill either of them. I'm such a hopeless romantic. My only suggestion is to add to the end. Maybe switch the P.O.V. to Blaise and tell how they discover Draco and what is in the letter. The letter could be made very sweet and profound. That's just a thought otherwise very good!