Name: Moonyk reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2006 06:27 am
Wait, did he actually buried himself alive with her body?! I just had a 3rd read.

Fantastic 3rd party by the way. A coffin maker!

Author's Response: Yes, that's exactly what he did. I never said I was cheerful. And I like my narrator too! I think I might use him for another story. Thanks for the feedback.
Name: Moonyk reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2006 06:24 am
omgosh I'm confused, i'm sorry. but...what happened there at the end? he went in to get her body?! or did he go in to die...or was she not really dead in the first place...

oohh im dreadfully sorry but could you please clear it up for me? i just cant figure it out!

Author's Response: It's okay! He basically buried himself alive, so that he could be with her. I toyed with the idea having Ginny being buried alive, but I just couldn't work it. Thank you for reading!
Name: Akt5us reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2006 06:12 am
Wow. There was just so much conveyed in that that i didn't think could be conveyed. Loved it! Beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: WG13 reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2006 04:32 am
Remarkable writing. Very Romeo and Juliet and terribly sad...

Author's Response: Thank you for saying that; Romeo and Juliet was exactly what I was going for, but I didn't say it because a) I thought it was a bit cliched and, b) I wasn't sure if I had actually accomplished it. Thank you!
Name: shalita reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2006 03:50 am
This strikes me as something Poe himself would write. Especially that last sentence. It's sunny where I am this morning, but reading this story makes me think it's grey and dreary outside. Awesome job. =)

Author's Response: Wow...Poe himself, you say? I fell off my chair with joy. Thank you!
Name: bobkatz reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 24, 2006 03:09 am
OMG!! That was terrifyingly poetic.
The style of narration you've adopted rarely works, but you've managed to pull it off beautifully.
Arghh...I still can't get over how terrifically morbid that was.

Author's Response: I'm blushing. Thank you!
Name: Cynicaldreamer reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 23, 2006 08:21 pm
It's really pretty. Beatifully angsty! The third-person p.o.v. adds to the unique of it.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 23, 2006 07:50 pm
Heartbreaking. Beautiful. Powerful. WOW~ Really Really poetic and breathtaking. Wow!

Author's Response: You're absolutely one of my favorite authors on this site. Can't even begin to tell you what this particular review means!
Name: DrowningOphelia reviewed Chapter 1 on Aug 23, 2006 07:28 pm
Oh wow, I got shivers. Great technique.

Author's Response: Biggest compliment I've ever gotten. Thank you!
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