Name: *poohbear* reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 10, 2007 04:17 pm
awww so cute!!!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Name: Ayri_Scalet_Owens reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 02, 2007 09:21 pm
Wow..beautiful..just..wow..
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Name: Aphrodite reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 14, 2006 04:35 am
:) Great story
Author's Response: Thank you : )
Name: Half Blood Outcast reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 11, 2006 09:52 am
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. how adorable. I love this little fic. I think you should continue this one on and make it a long series.
Author's Response: I always plan to come back to these one shots once my brain finished up some of the other stories. Usually, I end up off and runningon something else. I'll see if I can get back to this one. I'm glad you liked it, andI appreciate the review.
Name: lostmoon reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 04, 2006 12:25 pm
i liked this alot because it is the very essence of the D/G relationship...as real as it gets
Author's Response: This was not a warm and fuzzy story, but it felt right to me too. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: cassidy_early reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 17, 2006 09:08 am
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: Thanks again.
Name: cassidy_early reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 17, 2006 09:08 am
awwwwwwwwwwwwww
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Name: MyEscape reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 25, 2006 02:22 pm
more?
Author's Response: I'm not sure at this time. I have too many other fics going. I'd like to get back to this eventually though. THanks for the review.
Name: Rashonda reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 22, 2006 10:17 am
The only thing, I don't get is why would she try and change him and his way. She knew the way he was when she hooked up with him, he's not a nice person. But, in his own weird ass way he loves her, and she should get that. I don't know how, I missed this one of yours'. Great as usual.
Author's Response: Thank you. I agree, he is who he is. But, he could stand to be a little nicer. I think in this fic, he doesn't really know how to behave. He is acting like his parents. She needs to show him there are other ways to act.
Name: Katrina_M reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 09, 2006 01:20 pm
very beautiful for a one-shot! its hard to put so much emotion in such a short story but you managed it.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Vetta Daughter reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 28, 2006 09:45 pm
Brillant & Passsionate without being overtly fluff.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Dracosgrl10 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 28, 2006 11:28 am
I really enjoyed this... just thought you should know
Author's Response: Thank you. Several people didn't care for it, and I was beginning to get paranoid.
Name: curlihairedfiend reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 01:14 pm
CUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!! a perfect choice of words for Draco at the end. Vulnerable but not overly mush and OOC for him.
Author's Response: Thank you. I was trying to keep him more in character which is not something I usually do.
Name: Katie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 11:08 am
It's ok. Not the best, it could be better, and i don't see what's so bad about it.
Author's Response: Sorry it wasn't your cup of tea.
Name: CourtneyFaith reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 09:31 am
~WOW...wonderfully written. I just love the way draco says that she can be replaced. Very true to the character. I also love the way Ginny needs some kind of commetment.~
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review, and I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Caroline reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 07:43 am
aww! that was so cute! I liked it=)
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Name: passion reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 05:31 am
that was sweet and simple..i liked it a lot...beautifully written...great job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate the review and the compliments.
Name: Ginevra reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 04:59 am
cheery little ficlet. i loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you. Cheery fluff is good.
Name: beautifulDeath reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2006 12:58 am
That was so beautiful :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 26, 2006 09:12 pm
I love it! YAY! I knew Draco could change... a little! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I like it when Draco changes for the one he loves.
Name: Vixenize reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 26, 2006 06:04 pm
Aw, that was a cute story. You are seriously the one-shot fluff queen lol.
I like how Draco says that he can easily replace her with anyone (but she can't replace him) yet in the end, he admits it's not true because a part of him would die.
One thing that I didn't really like (and I hope you don't mind that I'm saying this!) was the term "...and kissed him passionately." I think you'd've been better off describing the kiss rather than saying they kissed passionately... mostly because it's not very descriptive and it seems like a term most sappy romance novels use.
And I like your comparision of the Malfoys vs. Weasleys. Society may be more used to seeing relationships like the Weasleys, but I like how you wrote that despite the "weirdness" (or dysfunctional-ness) of the Malfoy family, it's still full of passion. Good job! :)
Author's Response: I am the Queen. Woo hoo!
Thank you for the great review. I agreed with your assessment of the last line after I went back to review it. I hope you like the change.