Name: bahzirboy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 25, 2008 06:19 pm
It's GREAT! I understand why your proud of it, you have a right to be! For a first story it's great!
Name: ThisBurningHeart reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 24, 2006 06:28 pm
Interesting story. It's kind of cool that you tied in the chamber with their relationship. There aren't many stories like this one. :)
Name: ablaze reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 19, 2006 01:49 pm
I love it. SO beautiful. and i like how you put us in draco's perspetive. you just have an onveraxcessive use of exclaimation marks. thats all.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Oct 23, 2006 03:04 am
Great piece and I was glad to see a softer side of Draco and comfort his girl Ginny! Your story was too the point and I look forward to some more short stories from you.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am working on a new short story right know actually=)
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 07, 2006 06:05 pm
Congratulations on your first story. It's not easy to produce a finished piece. It doesn't bother me that you decided to make Draco out of character. I do think however, that you have to account for the character change. Perhaps he ruminates about himself, his place in the world or about the expectations others have for him? Maybe Draco himself has noticed that he's acting differently? I don't know since I'm not a the author, you are. Maybe it's Ginny that brings out untold sensitivity in Draco. I don't know. Anyway, an excellent first effort. Please continue. Thanks.
Name: gurl reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 05, 2006 02:49 am
I do not know how you feel about constructive criticism especially since this is your first story... if you don't want it, don't read this. Good job on the grammar and plot idea. However, I felt that you used a bit too many exclamation points and both characters were OOC (Draco especially more so than Ginny). Congrats on your first fic tho!
Author's Response: thank you for the constructive criticism! every writer need it.
Name: gale reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 04, 2006 10:05 am
this is so out of character
Name: gale reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 04, 2006 10:04 am
this is so out of character
Name: Bitter_thymes reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 04, 2006 06:55 am
Well done for your first story; Enjoyed the dynamic between them.
I'd only watch using the exclamation point so much; your writing conveys the drama well enough on its own.
Name: stormcloud1972 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 04, 2006 04:02 am
I love the second person narrative. It makes the story quite intimate. Keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Name: dgloves70 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Sep 03, 2006 05:03 pm
Oh this was very touching and I think it was very good one time piece.