on Oct 04, 2009 09:40 pm
that was very cute i liked it a lot
on Mar 17, 2007 08:32 pm
hmm, that was so cute.
on Sep 23, 2006 12:32 pm
on Sep 16, 2006 02:24 pm
Loved it! My goodness, Draco's teasing and Ginny's completely rude scorn of the first part of this fic were so enjoyable. You write Ginny's voice so amusingly-- it's just little touches like "allegedly rehabilitated" and "if it were possible--somewhat gleeful". I'm not used to you being a humorous writer (you usually write lotsa angst, right?), but this fic was so much fun.
Honestly, though, my least favorite part was the dancing at the end. I thought the tango was a bit over-dramatically done, and I think Ginny gave in too easily at the end, just as Malfoy made himself too obvious.
But up until that point I thought it was a perfect fic, and it made ME gleeful just reading it! Truly, I couldn't stop grinning. So thanks for posting!
on Sep 15, 2006 07:50 am
lol i loved the end. well done cute story
on Sep 13, 2006 03:37 pm
Very, very sexy. I loved Draco's last lines.
on Sep 13, 2006 11:33 am
I do love a feisty Ginny and a snarky Malfoy. Good job.
on Sep 12, 2006 10:57 pm
I absolutely LOVED this line: I will proclaim my undying devotion to your freckles right here and now, Ginevra.
Had me roaring in laughter for a few minutes.
on Sep 12, 2006 10:43 pm
When have I ever not loved your fics? Hahaha, Draco, how you swoon me like no other! Now I'm trying to imagine seven inch stilettos and dancing in them. Ouch. Ginny truly is brave.
on Sep 12, 2006 07:01 pm
Tres sexy! I also took the liberty of fixing your paragraph breaks - if you use any codes for line breaks at all, then you need to use them for every paragraph. You had a p and a br in your header, so I just deleted them and it restored your linebreaks.
on Sep 12, 2006 06:58 pm
LOVE LOVE LOVE it! But you knew that already! I'm your fangirl. I admit it! ;)
on Sep 12, 2006 03:48 pm
HAHA! That was cute! I loved/hated ginny's defeat! very well written! it was difficult to read and follow though without indentations and seperate paragraphs
on Sep 12, 2006 03:45 pm
Paragraph breaks are your friend.