Reviews For Mistakes
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Mistakes on Jun 09, 2010 01:39 am
She did not make any mistake. I'm proud of Ginny for walking away.

Author's Response: I'm happy you think of it that way. ^^
Name: shaded reviewed Mistakes on Apr 02, 2008 11:38 am
Another wonderful one-shot. I like your portrayal of all the characters. I can never quite imagine Ginny willingly becoming a mistress and her convictions are keenly apparent in this story. It's almost amusing to see how Draco does not understand where she's coming from. He's had such a different upbringing, that extra-marital relations seem the norm.

I hope that, for the childrens' sake at the least, something can be sorted out between Draco and Ginny.

Author's Response: I wouldn't say that Draco thinks extra-marital relationships are normal. He's very like Mr. Rochester in that he thinks he deserves someone better, someone that he actually loves, rather than being cursed with the wife he has. He has a hard time seeing what is wrong with seeking happiness, and he knows he would not be hurting Pansy by being with someone else because she cares about as much for him as he does for her. But Ginny is like Jane Eyre in that, even though she loves Draco, she won't give up on her morals like that. You're right that Draco doesn't understand her point of view, but that's mostly because he's lived a miserable, unhappy life for so long. And, because he was raised a spoiled rich kid, he thinks he can get what he wants.

This reply is waaaay late. I hope you forgive me. ^^;
Name: Aphrodite reviewed Mistakes on Dec 13, 2006 07:33 am
:( How sad. Still loving this story though

Author's Response: :( Thanks for reviewing!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Mistakes on Oct 17, 2006 02:50 pm
Loved both of them! Can't wait to read more of what you write! :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked them! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: saucy reviewed Mistakes on Sep 23, 2006 12:05 pm
More teary-eyed-ness.

Author's Response: :( Thanks for reviewing!
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed Mistakes on Sep 23, 2006 06:10 am
OK! This is going to have a happy ending right? You know Holly & Charlotte living together with Ginny & Draco, maybe another child on the way!! you know white pickett fence around the manor, all that stuff Right!! Killing off Pansy Lucius & Narcissa, or maybe the 4 of them disapearing I dont know just happy!! And maybe more than only one more. How about it!!!

Author's Response: *Innocently puzzled* Hm... I don't know. I haven't thought about it before... Haha, we'll just have to see.
Name: Kisou reviewed Mistakes on Sep 20, 2006 10:27 pm
This is an interesting way to do this, a triology of one shots. I haven't ever seen that before. That's probably because I read very few one shots. They lack plot, and it takes an enourmous amount of talent to engage an audience so quickly. But, this does that. It does have some serious characterization issues. I don't think either Draco or Ginny make much sense, as of HBP, though with enough background, I'm sure they could. The issue is that a one shot doesn't give you that opportunity, but since this is a triology, I look for more thought through characters.

Author's Response: Thank you for your input. These oneshots are not HBP compliant and I knew I was forgetting something. Even in my own head, there is no way I could have worked this out if they were. The original story was meant to be vague so Mistakes and the third part turned out to be more developed. Opinions are always helpful and I will take what you've said to mind!
Name: Hpfan00 reviewed Mistakes on Sep 20, 2006 02:50 pm
Oh your kidding right? Only one left to go? Man you can do Soooo much more then just three! (done blowing off steam now, sorry) That was great, I'm on the edge of my seat now waiting for the final chapter. Hurry hurry hurry!

Author's Response: Part three has been sent to my beta so as soon as I get it back, it will be posted. Hopefully by next weekend. Thank you for your enthusiastic review!
Name: red_head reviewed Mistakes on Sep 20, 2006 04:46 am
it's so sad and so perfectly written!nice job

Author's Response: Thank you. Stay tuned for the third part! It might have a happy ending... :)
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Mistakes on Sep 19, 2006 05:17 pm
Oh this is so sad. I do hope that the girls find a way to bring their dad and Ginny together. I so want him to divorce Pansy and hopefully he pays her off and keeps the baby.

Author's Response: There's a third part coming up so stay tuned for that. We'll see what happens...
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