Name: Aurelie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 30, 2006 06:18 am
Great story! Describing the protagonists' situation and personality through their fears is a brilliant idea! Do all of these phobias really exist? I've only heard of some of them before. It might be very interesting to see their story continued, so please try that!
Author's Response: Yes, all the phobias DO exist, but some of them I chose to interpret somewhat uniquely so that they would fit in with my plot. Thank you!
Name: saucy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 09:57 pm
This is wonderful just as a one shot, but I would just love to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: V_is_for_Violet reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 07:10 pm
is very much interesting & thus should b continued ;) :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thanks for the review.
Name: thenilaughed reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 06:55 pm
It's perfect as is. Anymore would beat it over the head.
Author's Response: Thank you for the opinion and the praise!
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 06:54 pm
Yikes, this is dark. The whole thing about Lucius being insane yet not knowing it, and Draco trying to take care of him was creepy. I feel sorry for both of them. Maybe they can help each other find their place.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Moranar reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 06:49 pm
Interesting. Please continue. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Nyghtinggail reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 06:36 pm
I loved it. I hope you continue. Or do something along the same vein. I'm not sure how you could continue the phobia-s. Maybe label each chapter a phobia and have them sort of focus on that, how it came to be affects them. Etc.
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Author's Response: That's a good idea, but first I have to decide if I'm even going to continue it! Thank you for the review.
Name: Tessie Tura reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 05:55 pm
I think it's wonderful alone. Knowing when to stop is the hardest part of being an artist (be it in writing, painting, music, etc).
Author's Response: Truer words were never written! Thank you.
Name: search4inspiration reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 05:28 pm
I agree with braidedsilver... it is wonderfully poignant and concise. Unique and creative... well done! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the opinion...and of course for the compliments!
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 05:07 pm
You should continue. I am really enjoying this.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: braidedsilver reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 29, 2006 04:19 pm
End it there. It's perfect as is and redundancy can kill a good story.
Author's Response: I admit that when I asked if I should continue this or not, I didn't expect responses to be QUITE so varied...but that redundancy comment definitely hits home. Thanks for the review!