Reviews For Under
Name: Scarlet Azalea reviewed Under on Jun 25, 2007 10:18 pm
Heartbreakingly beautiful, well-written. Please keep writing.
Name: rachael leigh reviewed Under on Jun 07, 2007 07:42 am
wow!what a work...it wasn't just an ordinary draco-and-ginny fanfic.it was something worth-reading even it means staying uplate at night just to finish it.i hope to read more of this kind of fanfic.nice job tudorrose
Name: Katmillia reviewed Under on May 09, 2007 07:55 pm
OH MY GOD I can't believe you did this that was absolutely amazing and I loved it but dammit the ending made me depressed for the rest of the night! You are a brillant writer.
Name: arabella reviewed Under on May 06, 2007 03:39 pm
beautifully written with an ending that fits perfectly. congrats on an awesome job!
Name: reviewbunny reviewed Under on Apr 29, 2007 02:34 pm
beautifully told. the ending had my heart crying for them. bittersweet angst, i reread it like 5 times. good job :]
Name: samantha reviewed Under on Apr 15, 2007 02:08 pm
I was just lurking around the forums, and saw that this was recomended a couple times because it was "powerful" and "gut-wrenching." So I decided to check it out. And the people on the forums were right.

This was amazing. Although I was a bit unprepared for the length, it was well worth the time. Incredibly heartbreaking, and some of your descriptions were so eerie that you gave me the chills. Your characterization of Draco also blew me away, you gave him *alot* of depth and dimension.

This is the first DG oneshot I've read in quite a while, but it was so good that it's inspired me to go off and search for many more.

Thanks for this. I love fics that renew my love for DG.
Name: eliagem reviewed Under on Apr 03, 2007 04:59 am
Hey, I read this on the actual exchange and I think I commented, but I just have to say again that this is one of the most beautiful angst-fics I've ever read. It was just such a powerful story, and the ending! It almost killed me- but in a good way. Wonderful work!
Name: arabela reviewed Under on Mar 29, 2007 05:41 am
That. was. amazing.

You paced it SO well, I really felt it went fast, despite times when things were moving...nice and slow, sort of lazily, almost. Agh, I LOVED it.

BUT THE END! oohhh, the end...

beautiful. just beautiful.
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Under on Mar 29, 2007 12:01 am
And I forgot to mention that I LOVED your characterization. Draco still wanting to always be a Malfoy even in death. I agree wholeheartidly with everyone else's reviews! This is truly a masterpiece! Such as it deserves 2 reviews! :D

*huggles you for such an amazing fic!*
Name: kellbell930 reviewed Under on Mar 28, 2007 11:57 pm
Ahh! That was so well written and unbelieveably done. The ending--oh the ending! I think I would have done the same thing. I wouldnt have been able to condem him to torture in the land of the living. But they did love each other. Ah, bravo madam. That was excellent! I loved the Greek mythology and I almost started crying at the end. Brilliantly done!
Name: distempered reviewed Under on Mar 28, 2007 06:23 pm
Ugh, dear sweet Lord. I just randomly felt the need to read this again, but I forgot what a huge punch to the gut it was. I sincerely hope you signed up for the next exchange, if only because I will selfishly hope that you choose my prompt to write.

Anyway, onto a real review. The characterizations are spot-on. The angst is just brilliant. The story is beautifully-constructed. Your prose packs a wallop. In short, absolutely amazing.
Name: felicitas reviewed Under on Mar 21, 2007 05:43 am
I always have some trouble with the merging into greek mythology, Ancient Egypt, etc... But this, this is so beautifully sad. I´m overwhelmed, holdind tears because I´m in the library. I´m speechless. I do agree: that is love...
Name: Flyingwithdragons reviewed Under on Mar 04, 2007 10:18 am
Beautiful.
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Under on Feb 20, 2007 12:53 pm
Oh Jess, I read again and I am enchanted yet again. I cried again. I was moved again. To think that such beauty would exist in such sadness. Wow.

I know I've said it before... but I'll say it again... Brilliant. A Masterpiece for sure! ;)
Name: rebecca reviewed Under on Jan 31, 2007 12:50 pm
wow! this is beautifully written, and so sad! wonderful story. =)
Name: melissa reviewed Under on Jan 10, 2007 11:17 pm
I absolutely love this :) I was lurking around the D/G fic exchange, and even though I couldn't vote, I was rooting for this to win best prose. I just love it!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I can't believe I won; I feel so flattered! Anyway, I'm glad you like the fic, and thank you so much for the review!
Name: Nyghtinggail reviewed Under on Jan 09, 2007 07:01 pm
Beautiful, rich, fufilling. Loved every minute of it. Excellent usuage of mythology it was well laced through the story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it, and very pleased the mythology bit went well. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: LimnHere reviewed Under on Jan 09, 2007 04:59 pm
I wanted to cry when reached the last few lines. Ever since you posted this up I think I've read it three times. I don't have the words to even start to express to how moving and hauntingly beautiful this is. This is just wonderful and well written. Terrific job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sorry I made you cry; I hate to make people cry. But I'm glad you liked the fic! Thank you for reviewing!
Name: jujubinha reviewed Under on Jan 09, 2007 11:32 am
This is so agonisingly gorgeous! Gorgeous and heartbreaking, really. I love this, and I applaude you for such terrific writing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :-)
Name: twiddlekinks reviewed Under on Jan 09, 2007 10:43 am
Mmm... this was such a beautiful fic! hehe I'm honored to have written a story for such a fantastic author, and I'm glad you liked "Unraveling." In your story, I /loved/ the believability of such a burning, as well as your artistic interweaving of italics. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you appreciated the italics...I screwed up the coding in my Exchange submission, so it's such a relief to have that all prettified over here! *sigh of relief* Thank you for reviewing, and thanks, again, for my beautiful piece! *swoons* :-)
Name: Blanchefleur reviewed Under on Jan 09, 2007 12:11 am
Wonderful but utterly sad!! I love greek myths and this was a good adaptation!Well done !! Absolutely loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for taking the time to review!
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed Under on Jan 08, 2007 06:51 pm
AHGH! Totaly Brilliant. I don't know if you know, but this was my favourite! ;) (ha ha ha - everyone laughs at my bad joke). But really. This was beautiful. Heartbreaking. Powerful. Unique. So SO SO good. I loved it. Really Wonderful. I love lots of the stuff you write, but dare I say it - this was a masterpiece? ;)

*Smooches you!*

Author's Response: Thank you! I wouldn't go so far as masterpiece, but thank you so much for the praise and for acknowledging my fic! *huggles to death, and smooches back* You're the best, Jess!
Name: Sue Bridehead reviewed Under on Jan 08, 2007 02:31 pm
I have to tell you once more how much I love this fic. Beautiful, poignant, and chilling. *shudder* Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! Interesting you should juxtapose "beautiful" and "chilling"...we've been discussing the "sublime" in my English class, the concept of something being beautiful but slightly terrifying at the same time, and that's the first thing that came to mind when I read your comment! Anyway, end tangent...I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for reviewing!
Name: spider reviewed Under on Jan 08, 2007 02:28 pm
Aha! So now I know that you wrote this amazing story. Congrats on all of your awards in the Fic Exchange, and good luck in the FIA Forums one, as I nominated this there as well. This story was incredibly beautiful and you should definitely be proud of it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, for the praise and the nomination! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: softlyforgotten reviewed Under on Jan 08, 2007 01:23 pm
Couldn't resist giving this one last review; it's still heartbreaking, and I STILL can't get over the ending.

I did like the fixed up formatting in that one of the 'this is love''s wasn't italic, which was interesting to see.

Thank you so much. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I wonder what people will think of the "real" ending, with the last "this is love" in regular form. It's a tad less sappy, I think, that way...but that's just me. :-)
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