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I LOVED this the first time I read it on the exchange and wish you'd continue it! Thank you for it.
Name: Myanceris reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 09, 2007 08:15 am
I love fluff!!! *melts into a puddle of goo* Nice premise. Not over the top on the sappiness and nice draco characterisation. Good work.
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