Name: Ritata_urp reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on May 24, 2011 07:45 pm
ow....! I didn't quite understand it...=( only at the very end :)
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Dec 27, 2008 04:29 pm
wow this is an intense story. really good, but really intense.
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Apr 28, 2008 12:20 pm
i liked this. very good.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Feb 27, 2008 06:15 am
Huh. Not sure what to think about this one.
Name: shaded reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Nov 26, 2007 09:06 am
Wow.
When I finished reading this, I just had to go back and re-read it all.
The way that the two anniversaries were brought full-circle with Draco and Ginny's wedding anniversary gave a very bittersweet edge to the story. How they lash out against each other so viciously is contrasted so well against the calm, almost sedate nature of Draco returning to Ginny's bed and holding her.
A very well-written story.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Oct 24, 2007 09:43 am
amazing. i just loved it. well done. the way you use language is just lovely like:
'The next day he awoke a guest to his own crucifixion. The searing morning light sank into his eyes, pounding his brain and rattling the unsteady bones in his body. and 'Drifts of pristine snow covered the roof and nestled against the side of the primeval structure.'
it really lets you imaging the places, and it puts you there making you feel as if you are standing with them. i think that so many authors lose this sort of description in their work, they describe things like hair colour or eye colour or what the characters are wearing. but dont touch on the surroundings.
well done i loved it!!
xx
Name: Julie reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jun 12, 2007 09:51 am
This was funny, I mean, at the end, I was literally shocked. I was like 'THEY'RE MARRIED?!!?!?!?!' I mean, honostly!! They didn't sound like they WERE bloody well married, they sounded as if they were an old arch enemies, just trying protect each other because of their job. Yeesh!! Anyway, this is a good story!!:D:)
Julie:)
Name: Caroline reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on May 04, 2007 03:52 pm
I love it. This is absolutley one of my favorites. I love war stories, and this is how they would be, Draco and Ginny? I like how realistic you portrayed them. After a long and difficult war, nobody would get out unharmed. The way they deal with it is so good. And I like the.... should I call it flashbacks? Interludes? All in all one of my favorite war-angst stories!!
Name: mongoose reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Apr 25, 2007 03:29 am
Is it wrong that I got alot of amusement out of this story?
Name: YvettE reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 17, 2007 11:30 pm
cute, i loved it! no doubt! I love how angsty these two can be, drives me wild!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! -fallenwitch
Name: sweet gurl reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 16, 2007 06:54 pm
are they suppose to be on war still??
i liked this:
The compass that guided him all his life is broken. She is his beautiful northern star, the only thing of beauty left in his life.
its so nice!!!
good job
Author's Response: Hello sweet gurl- No, they are in a chaotic post-War situation. I have posted the prompt for this fic to help clarify the context of the story. I think that should help. If not, feel free to email me, and I'll be more than happy to uncross any lingering crossed wires! And that will passage was my favourite as well. Thanks so much for a wonderful review. -fallenwitch
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 16, 2007 02:48 pm
oh man. That was amazing. You had me going right until the end- stuck wrapped aroud your words. I loved this, I really did.
Author's Response: Yes! Finally, someone who got it! Thank you so much Pipperstorms. -fallenwitch
Name: pens82 reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 16, 2007 04:49 am
I was a bit confused
Author's Response: Hello pens82- Join the growing crowd of confused readers. I have posted the prompt for this fic which should help contextualize the story for you. If you're still confused, feel free to email me through my author's bio page, and I'll be happy to answer any lingering questions you may have. -fallenwitch
Name: alexandriaisariel reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 07:22 pm
This was really sweet. My boyfriend, who actually looks a liiiiiitttle bit like tom felton, and I had our three year anniversary LAST friday... I loved it. Please keep writing! This stands great as a one-shot.
Author's Response: Oh, well Happy Anniversary to you both! Wonderful to hear that you enjoyed this one. Writing? Yes, I'm still writing! Thank so much for a wonderful and oddly coincidental review! -fallenwitch
Name: Cathryn Aeiran reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 06:34 pm
That was nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! -fallenwitch
Name: jess reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 06:32 pm
i think im a little confused, i also think you should write more of this story out, instead of making it a one-shot
Author's Response: I've gone back and posted the prompt for this story which should help. If you're still confused, feel free to email me through my author's bio page, and I'll be happy to answer any lingering questions. Unfortunately, this will stand as a one shot. Thanks for reading and your review. -fallenwitch
Name: YYYY reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 06:20 pm
CONFUSING!
Author's Response: Yep, I hear you! I've gone back and posted the prompt for this fic. I think that should help with the context of the story. If you're still confused, feel free to email me through my author's bio page, and I'll give you all the scoop you want. - fallenwitch
Name: jandjsalmon reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 06:15 pm
I loved it. I thought it was intense and heartbreaking (without really breaking my heart) and really really well written! YAY for fallenwitch! ;) One of the best of the exchange... and I'm not biased at all! ;)
Author's Response: Hi Jess! I thought you hated angst. And it was not one of the best of the exchange. Please... Still, my weakened ego loves you! Thanks for dropping by this little corner of the fandom. It's always nice to see you! -fallenwitch
Name: saucy reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 04:12 pm
How very interesting.
Author's Response: Interesting. Yes. Thank you. -fallenwitch
Name: WG13 reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 03:45 pm
*grins* what I love about your story are all the unanswered questions... and a Ginny who kicks butt. Fab story!
Author's Response: Thanks, WG13! It's nice to see a reader who can tolerate that kind of ambiguity. And kick butt Ginny is always a plus. Appreciate you dropping by, esp. these days! Glad I could entertain you for a bit. - fallenwitch
Name: Marcia reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 02:56 pm
Just reread it and I still love it! xo!!
Author's Response: Marica, you are too kind to me! - fallenwitch
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 02:44 pm
woah... vair good, if a tad confusing. I think I understood in the end, at least. Well written, and interesting :)
Author's Response: Thank you! -fallenwitch
Name: seegrim reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 12:46 pm
oh, I liked it, I really liked it! I love a messed up Ginny. ok, that sounded bad. I mean I like a non-perfect Ginny. Using the 'anniversaries' to tie it all together was great, too. Thanks for the great read!
Author's Response: Hi seegrim! I thought it would be interesting to equal the playing field for a change - flawed Ginny and flawed Draco. Thrilled that you enjoyed it! Thanks for the wonderful review! -fallenwitch
Name: CCC reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 12:05 pm
She killed his mother, and he killed one of her brothers? Talk about bringing baggage into a marraige.
Author's Response: Yep, she killed Narcissa, but did he kill one of her brothers? That's not as clear. Regardless, it's a hell of a lot of baggage. That's why they need so much Firewhiskey to handle at times. Should I refer them to the local wizard's 12 step program? Thanks for your review, CCC! -fallenwitch
Name: Lunaeyes reviewed
Where The Hell Is She? on Jan 15, 2007 11:38 am
Lovely, lovely. Your language is amazing.
"Drifts of pristine snow covered the roof and nestled against the side of the primeval structure." I mean that sentence just takes my breath away. That's insane. You're amazing.
Author's Response: Hi Lunaeyes! What a wonderful review. Hmm... that passage stuck you, did it? It's a first! I appreciate your kind words on this one. -fallenwitch