Name: b1elliot reviewed
Chapter 1 on Dec 26, 2013 11:33 am
Well that's just sad... Beautiful, but sad
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 08, 2009 03:34 pm
this is a sad one...
Name: hpfreaklk reviewed
Chapter 1 on May 16, 2008 06:14 pm
thoroughly depressing.
amazingly perfect.
Name: shaded reviewed
Chapter 1 on Apr 07, 2008 02:29 pm
I'm left feeling quite empty, as though after the part about Ginny running away, the story carried on quickly and rushed past me without me actually processing it. Maybe it's due to the very matter of fact way that Draco recalls Ginny's death. Maybe it's the resignation he seems to have as he thinks "maybe it's better that way". It's interesting, as I think that emptiness is what Draco's feeling; after all, he did mention Ginny loving him and unspoken in it all is him loving her, too.
*sighs* As sadistic as it may seem, I love reading a tragedy. Especially one as well-written as this.
Name: Mollie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jan 01, 2008 04:48 pm
Oh, that is so sad!!! Stupid, stupid Draco!!! Poor Ginny!!!
Name: imelda reviewed
Chapter 1 on Nov 30, 2007 05:53 pm
This fic is wonderful. Everything seems to come together at the end, when Draco sees Ginny dead. It felt as if the whole fic was built from that one image, as if everything centered around the realization that she is dead. I just thought it worked out really poignantly.
I didn't think the last line was meaningful enough, though. It's not ambiguous, the way others have said--it's too apathetic. Your summary says that their interludes 'changed everything, and nothing'. It's clear how it changed nothing--but we don't really see any change in Draco, or in Ginny, at all.
As you prob know, I'm a huge fan of your writing. Aside from that one caveat, I thought this fic was another great one in your repertoire!
Name: white_and_red_love reviewed
Chapter 1 on Aug 27, 2007 12:41 pm
i love this fic. beautiful.
Name: Dana F Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Jun 24, 2007 05:24 am
This is beautiful, in a dark, desperate kind of way.
Thank you for a good read.
Name: Kisou reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 16, 2007 01:11 am
That is really sweet. I like the ambiguity in it. It leaves the reader to put their own interpretation in. That makes it more personal. Good job.
Name: ThisBurningHeart reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 12, 2007 04:41 pm
It's interesting, that's for sure.
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 12, 2007 05:00 am
Oof. It must have felt good to get this out of you. Well done.
Name: V_is_for_Violet reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 12, 2007 01:49 am
it's very good but i doh think d warning was enough.. was very angsty,, :S
V.
Name: skygazer reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 10:48 pm
Really liked the scene when Draco saw Ginny standing by the window the first time, I could see it so vivdly.
I've been reading/ enjoying your fics for some time now, thanks for writing and sharing them. =)
Name: Rashonda reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 05:07 pm
Sometimes when you are reading a story things tend to jump out to you, and the reader knows what's about to happen next, but still surprised when it actually happens. That's how I felt when reading this, I knew she'd be dead. I was shocked but still knew it was coming. GJ, as always.
Name: Kalira reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 04:27 pm
Sad, but good even so. I'm not normally one for angst, but I suppose it's good to read it once in a while, just to change things up a bit. Good work!
Name: bridgetmalfoy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 03:26 pm
ohmegah.................... no................. beautifully sad.
Name: hummie reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 03:26 pm
Oh, heart-rending . . . but lovely all the same. Fantastic job! I always enjoy your work :)
Name: pingpong0601 reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 02:04 pm
Wow. This was so sad and even though it was short it was powerful. Nice job.
Name: arabela reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 07:07 am
NO! NO IT'S NOT BETTER THAT WAY!
=( I'm really sad now, SHE CAN'T DIE. SHE WAS NOT SUPPOSED TO DIE, DUDE. ...well you just have to write it again xP
it was brilliant, as always XD I looovvvveeedddd it and I will definitely come back and read it again and again. The first-person POV was a change, but you made it work well, kudos!
Name: CCC reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 05:30 am
Oh, that was so sad. I love the way you gave us insight into Draco's life. The part about how his friends by day would gladly smother him at night was brilliant. This was amazing. Good job.
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2007 12:41 am
well I'm glad you're in a good mood...
Why? So very, very sad... and I'm not being very articulate about the sadness, but it is definately there...
Name: Analucia Malfoy reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 10, 2007 10:08 pm
Wow. That was wonderfully done. Very poignant with lovely imagery. I think you do angst quite well. Please write more. Thanks.
Name: amor_quies reviewed
Chapter 1 on Mar 10, 2007 07:46 pm
This is so sad and so beautifully written! Oh, the angst! I don't usually read fics written in first person, but you did a fabulous job and it held my attention. Brava!