on Mar 01, 2009 11:33 am
Brilliant! the ending was fitting :D
on Jun 06, 2007 01:42 am
OMG, that is so sad. I understand his betrayal and why he is so hurt. I feel bad for him. The fluffy side of me want him to have forgiven him, but the realistic, sentimental side knows that what she did breached the little bit of trust their relationship had, and without trust, there is no relationship. Well written story. I really enjoyed it!!!
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on Apr 11, 2007 02:26 pm
awwwwww... i love it!
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on Apr 05, 2007 07:29 am
noo, that's so so so sad!!!
and depressing, and melancholy, but I kind of understand...? Draco isn't usually seen as the sort of person who forgives easily, but can't he now...?
on Apr 04, 2007 11:54 pm
Chillingly accurate portrayal of Draco. This was incredibly well written, but my favourite line had to be this one: “What are you sorry for? Don’t you see, Ginny? This is okay for everyone. As long as I have this –” Ginny’s stomach lurched as Draco wrenched up his sleeve – “anything you do to me is acceptable.” You've shown a unique style of Draco that I haven't often seen before, but one that I thoroughly enjoy reading. Well done :D!
on Apr 04, 2007 06:25 pm
Really well done. Draco's chracterization spot on! ;)
on Apr 04, 2007 06:20 pm
on Apr 04, 2007 03:39 pm
Wow! I think that is all that can be said about this. It was amazing and beautifully written, and very depressing, but so wonderful!