on Mar 03, 2013 10:28 pm
I love the manor being alive.
on Dec 12, 2012 08:05 am
on Oct 27, 2012 08:19 am
i hope the trust is no misplaced, either... overall a wonderful one..
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked this. :)
on Oct 27, 2012 07:45 am
like the story, so much....
Author's Response: Thank you so much. It was a tough story to write in spots, but I did like how it turned out. :)
on May 31, 2012 12:34 pm
Absolutely wonderful! I loved it. Draco does have a soul and the capacity to love and you worked it out very convincingly. Very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the story! I've never liked the idea of Draco being portrayed as one dimensional or evil. Selfish or arrogant, maybe, but he's also a kid in the books. Here, he's definitely grown up and having to make tougher decisions.I'm glad it worked for you. :)
on Apr 10, 2008 11:33 am
what a wonderful read! I thoroughly enjoyed every moment, the ending felt just right. I especially love the idea of a sentient Manor, it made the manor feel like another character in the story! x
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The manor turned out to be one of my favorite plotty bits out of the story, and I really like how it turned out. :)
on Feb 18, 2008 08:01 pm
good story wish it had been carried out a bit longer but still a really good story
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. For a little while after I finished this, I tried working on a sequel. Because I really don't have many questions left over at the end, it kind of stalled out. We'll see if I ever pick it back up.
on Jan 09, 2008 03:24 am
Author's Response: I hope that means you liked the ending. :)
on Nov 10, 2007 09:06 pm
Wait, that's it? Aw, cmon! I want to see babies!
Author's Response: I did try starting a sequel since so many people were clamoring for one. It's pretty much stuck, at least until I get a clear sense of plot for it.
on Nov 10, 2007 08:53 pm
Nowwww we're getting somewhere.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoyng it. :)
on Nov 10, 2007 08:19 pm
Hm. I have no clue what's going on, but I assume that that was intentional so I'll just try to plod on.
Author's Response: Yup. I wanted you to see how confusing a situation it was before explaining it all. :)
on Sep 12, 2007 07:34 am
Oh EV... it was grand. I loved it. I enjoyed the Manor so completely and that Draco had a conscience. I just loved it. Brava! ;)
Author's Response: yay. :) I'm glad you like it. The Manor was fun to write. If only the sequel would cooperate as much as the Manor did, I'd be all set. :D
on Aug 18, 2007 06:14 pm
What a great fic! I am impressed. Good job.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'm working on the sequel, though it's pretty slow going. Hopefully you'll like it just as much. :)
on Jul 16, 2007 07:29 am
This was a great story, loved it. Perfect. I really hope that you'll make a sequel. I would like to know when Draco and Ginny will return to the Malfoy Manor and so on...
I'll be waiting for the sequel. ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I'll have to see... There are requests for a sequel, but nothing comes to mind yet. I'll have to see how that goes after the ones I'm working on now.
on Jul 05, 2007 08:47 pm
Wow! When I started this story I didn't realize that it was finished. This was a treat for me as I love to read a story from start to finish when I can. Wow! This story was amazing, I was breathless at many points. With each chapter, I was fearful to start the next, worrying that they were to be caught. This was an amazing, intense story, which begs for a sequel. I am scared to read a sequel, again, fearful for what might happen. It is truly a wonderful story when it leaves me distressed that there is no more. Awesome job! -Kristine
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The idea was an intense one when I got it, which is probably why it didn't turn into an epic like they usually seem to. :) I seem to do one shots or long epics, and very few in between length stories. Maybe I'll do a sequel, I don't know. I didn't have much more after this. Maybe if I revisit the story, I'll come up with something, but I want to finish the other epics I'm already working on first. :)
on Jul 02, 2007 09:23 am
Lovely story. I especially liked the ending.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story. :)
on Jul 01, 2007 06:38 am
love the story!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
on Jun 30, 2007 08:50 pm
I loved the story. I wish there was more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. So far, there isn't any more. If I come back to this universe, maybe there will be more.
on Jun 30, 2007 01:17 pm
Oh no! It's the end already...? It'd be really cool if you wrote a sequel, or something...
Author's Response: So far, I don't have anything else to tell in this story. Maybe I'll return to this universe, but only if there's something just as good to tell.
Kisa reviewed Discovery
on Jun 30, 2007 12:17 pm
A great story, really! I like your style a lot. But I have a question. Did you put on the dialogue, parts of the song Hikari (but the English version) from the Kingdom Hearts videogame?
You know, at the end when they are talking and she says things like "whatever lies beyond..", "it's a little later on..." "regardless" and finally when he says: "Nothing's like before"
If you did it on purpose it was a good idea and it fit really well into the story.
Keep writing, and I'll read it.
P.D: Excuse my English and my possible mistakes. I'm Spanish and English is not my native language.
Author's Response: I did, actually, at least for Ginny's dialogue. *hands over cookie* Now that you point out Draco's reply, that is another line, isn't it? *hands over another cookie* I was quoting the song in another fic, and I thought it fit this story. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
on Jun 30, 2007 02:27 am
fantastic story! i absolutely loved it.
while the ending was really sweet and wonderful, i did feel like the last part of it was slightly fast-paced. are you planning on a sequel?
regardless, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: I wasn't originally planning on a sequel. It initially felt finished to me, and my beta felt it was good as is. Maybe after I finish my current fic, I'll revisit this 'verse, but I hadn't planned for more.
Name: jessica k malfoy
on Jun 29, 2007 05:31 pm
wow. i love this story. it was very dark and creepy. lucius played out just like i expected him to be. i have the chills :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Lucius is very good at creepy evil. :)
on Jun 29, 2007 10:08 am
Woooooooooooooooooooowwww.I can't believe you finished it so soon, but it was fitting. It was like a short-story of sorts, and I loved it. You're amazing, and I hope you write more really really soon.
I felt so bad for Draco when he realized that the only way for Voldemort to "deal" with Lucius is to kill him. It's terrible. I hate Lucius, but he'll have no idea that that is even coming... Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved the story. Lucius makes such a good bad guy. I can't help but make him nasty all the time. :)
on Jun 29, 2007 09:56 am
Bravo! Great story! Good Luck with future writing! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
on Jun 29, 2007 08:22 am
The End? As in there is no more? Will you make a sequel or something? Please!!
Author's Response: We'll have to see. As I was writing this, that was all there was to the story. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)