Name: Marinka reviewed
First Time Lucky on Dec 19, 2012 01:25 pm
so i have traced it to the LJ website and read all of the fanfic there. You were going to post the last chapter but since it is not on LJ i presume you did not finish writing it? Is this right?
Name: msm_2011simonebb reviewed
Enemy of the Death Eaters on May 04, 2011 04:03 pm
i love it! i recalled that line from the movie, Enemy of the State..
Name: Len reviewed
Enemy of the Death Eaters on Aug 24, 2010 10:53 am
The plot is original and very refreshing and your writing awesome as always. I was wondering if this story is definetely unfinished (it'll be a shame if it is).
Hope to see it updated some time.
Name: Sleepless reviewed
First Time Lucky on Mar 01, 2010 08:05 am
Oh I hope you finish this it is so cute and really good!! Please finish it!!!
Name: zumsnodle reviewed
Who Needs Vegas? on Feb 16, 2010 09:36 am
Slight Britpick: I am reasonably certain that British civilians can't own guns.
Other than that, brilliant story.
Name: Nutmeg44 reviewed
First Time Lucky on Nov 28, 2009 01:39 am
OH! I do hope u plan to continue this fic because its torture to leave us hanging on a shag and a snog. not to mention lucius malfoy or tom riddle is standing right behind them. AHH plz update.
Name: amberr33 reviewed
First Time Lucky on Jul 04, 2009 03:53 pm
im sad you havnt updated this in a while :( its really good!
Name: choravenclaw reviewed
First Time Lucky on May 03, 2009 10:13 am
don't leave it unfinished!
please continue!
it was going so great and they are amasingly cute
=)
Name: angelface reviewed
Enemy of the Death Eaters on Apr 22, 2009 07:51 am
Just reread this and I find it wonderfully refreshing and fun. Really hope you'll continue with this.
Name: shezachica85 reviewed
First Time Lucky on Apr 14, 2009 01:15 pm
lol you should continue writing this was clever
Name: merriza reviewed
Enemy of the Death Eaters on Mar 31, 2009 10:10 pm
as much as i completely love this story... which i really do. are you ever going to finish it?
Name: cindy reviewed
First Time Lucky on Dec 25, 2008 02:52 am
comeon update it!!i love this story!!plz continue..
Name: Ambalishious reviewed
First Time Lucky on Nov 19, 2008 11:31 pm
OMG!!! I love this story. update soon!!!
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
First Time Lucky on Jul 06, 2008 01:10 am
NO!! Lucius, is it?
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed
First Time Lucky on May 06, 2008 12:45 pm
Please finish
Name: abby reviewed
First Time Lucky on Mar 25, 2008 09:08 am
:( Update please! I love it! I can't wait to see what happens with Molly and Aurthur! :)
Name: Shattered_Dreams reviewed
First Time Lucky on Jan 20, 2008 11:23 pm
This story is a nice change in what I've been finding lately. It's cute (if you don't mind) and a bit quirky. I'd like to see more of it and soon! :-)
Name: ryonaidane reviewed
First Time Lucky on Dec 27, 2007 07:50 pm
Hahaha Loved it. Funny how Ginny was the more experienced one rather than Draco. also, how Draco had to ride behind Ginny during their bike ride. it's great too to have two very sarcastic characters trying to outdo the other. keep up the good work, and please update soon. god speed!!!
Name: shaded reviewed
Enemy of the Death Eaters on Nov 28, 2007 10:47 am
Hehe, an interesting start. I like the quick-witted Ginny that susses out Draco's motives in a heartbeat; Ginny's exposure to the twins has most definitely made her sharp and ready to retort.
I love how Draco starts off with that almost-homage to many D/G fics. ""Would you believe, I was struck by your flame-haired beauty and loved you from afar..." It had me laughing. :D
Just a question; how would Draco know anything about dry cleaning? It seems rather out of character for him. Maybe a 'you can't afford a replacement' or something along those lines would be better suited? Just a suggestion. *shrugs*.
Name: linz7886 reviewed
Enemy of the Death Eaters on Nov 01, 2007 03:31 pm
I like this so far. I wonder whose voice it is...Lucius? Snape? or maybe...Harry?! I do truly hope that you update. Love the motorcycle bit as well, my husband has a motorcycle and I find the thought of a woman knowing more about a bike than a man rather empowering, since I can barely stand the machine up! Keep it up!
Name: Ice_Dragon reviewed
First Time Lucky on Oct 20, 2007 03:35 am
write more i wanna no whats going to happen
Name: rasbery1298 reviewed
First Time Lucky on Sep 14, 2007 04:21 pm
What happened to updating everyday? Please update soon! The suspense is killing me!
Name: Bosco reviewed
First Time Lucky on Aug 27, 2007 11:43 am
Oh wow, a first sex scene that is actually realistic to all the bumbling and slight awkwardness that goes along with first fornication. Yay! for a realistic fic!
Thanks, that was extremely refreshing to read. Please keep up the good work!
Name: nun outfits are cool reviewed
First Time Lucky on Aug 27, 2007 03:31 am
oh god........
very funny, Draco's startling purity ummm... gone...