Ahh! That was wonderful. Malfoy is just besotted, in a totally charming way. Great job!
This was really nice but I would love to see a second chapter where they get together.
What was that? It was lovely story but the ending? I'd love it if there's a sequel!
Author's Response:It was written for the last fic exchange, which meant a pretty tight deadline. I hope it was fun while it lasted. ^_^ I may do a sequel to it.
this is a really cute story! love the plot!
Oh, so very lovely. It is a great story and would work fine if you left it there, but I am still going to beg for a sequel. :)
Please write more! I'd love to see their first date. And somehow the idea of Draco sitting there in the restaurant daily, oggling his girlfriend and taking her home after her shift really appeals to me.
Thank you for sharing this little jewel.
It was lovely the way he made the reference to Beatrice and Benedick. And, since the last line has two meanings, it makes it easy to imagine whether she said yes or no. Is that how you intended it?
~I wish there would have been more Draco and Ginny. More action instead of just implications of what could happen.~
Author's Response: Yeah, I know it's a little short on D/G...but it was my second fic for the Exchange, so I didn't have that much time to develop it. But I can definitely see a sequel (or a second chapter) forming in my mind. It'll be a little spicier. ;-)
Good job! I thought this story was really cute! It's a great one-shot.
Awww, I so liked the one piece so very much. I wished I could have seen a little more action on Draco's part to give her a kiss or a peck on the cheek as he left.
I loved it. Hope you can write another one piece as a sequel.