Reviews For Newlyweds
Name: Padfootedmoony reviewed Chapter 3 on Nov 02, 2008 09:04 pm
great job with this so far. Keep it up!

Author's Response: thank you..i am trying my level best to manage all this along with my VERY hectic college schedule...but its proving very hard...these reviews give me strength
Name: lavenderab reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 16, 2008 01:34 pm
Nice chapter

Author's Response: Glad you liked it
Name: lavenderab reviewed Chapter 3 on Oct 15, 2008 09:21 pm
Photo bucket wouldn't work for me I hope the dress is pretty
Name: lavenderab reviewed Chapter 2 on Oct 15, 2008 06:24 pm
Wow this is a very intresting story

Author's Response: Thank you..I hope to continue it this way only...
Name: lavenderab reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 14, 2008 08:07 pm
This reminds me of mr. And mrs. Smith

Author's Response: does it really??? hmmm...interesting thought :D
Name: lavenderab reviewed Prologue on Oct 14, 2008 07:43 pm
What do you mean ok what the hell is going on
Name: bee245 reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 08:59 pm
this story needs a lot of work. you really need to check your grammar, and there are countless continuity errors. you spelled nicole two different ways. and there's no flow.
do you read the chapters before giving them in?
you should get a beta.
sorry if that was too brutal.
but other than that the ideas are there and you have some of the wit that's needed for their characters. you just need to find a way to make everything work and make it good and interesting because it took effort not to move on to something else.



bee245
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 07:03 pm
so wait... blaise is married to daphne? woah. didn't see that one. and how disappointing! it was blaise kissing her not draco!? haha. update soon!

Author's Response: answered in next chapter...which SHOULD be posted soon enough
Name: Extreme Dancer reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 04:54 pm
Good chapter! I want to slap Blaise upside the face... I was falling in love with him and his magnificent obsession with Ginny until we found out he's married. Jerk-face. His one chance for redemption will be if they're married to provide some sort of cover for them for something, but otherwise he's crap.

Sorry, I get a little too into things sometimes :) Great chapter, though; I loved it!

Author's Response: Blaise is a character I'm loving...... I so wanted his character to be just like this...He's coming out perfectly till now. That's all I'm going to say right now...
Name: 0630938 reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 11:04 am
LOL, is Blaies married?
hahah what a little rascal.

Author's Response: but a very sweet rascal
Name: Shwadi reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 08:45 am
heyy, good chappy :) where did u find that dress?? who made it?

Author's Response: i found the dress though random searching on altavista... n thus i don't know who made it. at least not me
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Chapter 4 on Oct 07, 2008 07:57 am
Nice to see an update! Ahh Man I was really hoping it was Ash that was kissing Ginny. Blaise is such a snake, I never got a good feeling about him. I was also hoping that Draco would catch him and Ginny. That wuld've been priceless!

Author's Response: Draco kissing Ginny no doubt would've been priceless, but also predictable. also, in the initial stages of the chapter -that was the very case, but it was playing havoc with my plot line, so I cut it down mercilessly :D And come on, we need the tension between draco and Ginny...don't we?? **wink wink**
Name: Desire reviewed Chapter 3 on May 27, 2008 05:54 am
Oh my goodness! I can't wait for more! Oh, and the dress is lovely. Nice choice...^_^

Author's Response: thanks for the dres...pretty pretty things and really tough things too...yet to come!!
Name: sweetpop reviewed Chapter 3 on May 22, 2008 04:59 am
ohh i liked the ending of the 4th chapter =) I'm assuming its Draco, and the picture of the dress is very nice! it would be really flattering and its such a nice colour!

Author's Response: Yeah..I thought it would look lovely on Ginny..in her new avatar!! I am glad that you liked the ending of the chapter...more is yet to come.
Name: ginatoms reviewed Chapter 3 on May 20, 2008 03:00 am
What an evil cliff hanger to leave us with!! I hope your updating soon or i'll go crazy.
Name: stillmoment reviewed Chapter 3 on May 19, 2008 09:37 pm
very well written. a nice read.
Name: yomoedmb reviewed Chapter 3 on May 19, 2008 09:15 pm
I love Blaise, I always love Blaise in every story but I love Blaise here too haha. Intriguing, who is that is kissing her, please be Malfoy... er Ashton.

Author's Response: thank god i didn't made you hate Blaise in this story..he's very adorable and funny (not in a absolute way...but he kind of makes you smile like.."aww...")
Name: emenem10 reviewed Chapter 3 on May 19, 2008 12:24 pm
This is a great way to jump head first into this stroy again! I loved that you made Draco look like Blaise, very clever. This is excellent! Much Love, Emily

Author's Response: the similarity has its own reason..in my twisted mind :)
Name: mahek210 reviewed Chapter 3 on May 19, 2008 09:45 am
its been sooo long!!nevertheless it was a very gud chapter njoyed it fully!!hope ur next update cumes out sooner!!:)
Name: Citrus587 reviewed Chapter 3 on May 19, 2008 07:08 am
I was super excited to see that you had updated this story! It's definitely one of my favorites! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: thanks..I'll try and keep up its work!
Name: Jordanza reviewed Chapter 3 on May 19, 2008 05:08 am
NOOO YOU DECIDE TO LEAVE IT THERE!!!!
I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER!!

Author's Response: the next chapter is YET to go to the beta still..so you have to wait.
Name: Indiainksky reviewed Chapter 2 on May 19, 2008 12:45 am
Okay, I'm pretty excited (read here: ecstatic) that you included a Hrithik Roshan mention, because I'm absolutely obsessed with him, so power to you for putting even his name in your story. Anyway, I'm intrigued by this fic and love the D/G dynamic, and look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: me too..I overly obbsessed by him..and mroe 's to come..I hope in the near future..and Ginny/Draco dynamic is pretty uphill currently.. I'm loving doing that.
Name: raistlin89 reviewed Chapter 3 on May 18, 2008 11:47 pm
oooo i like. im so glad youve updated, cant wait for the next chapter!!
Name: princessswan reviewed Chapter 3 on May 18, 2008 11:24 pm
Loove it! I hope it's Draco who thoroughly kisses her. :P Anyway, please update again soon!! :)
Name: yunnage reviewed Chapter 3 on May 18, 2008 10:36 pm
do you know how disappointed i was when there was no next button on this chapter? =[

great job and btw, I LOVE THAT DRESS

Author's Response: Its only one chapter at a time..isn't it?? :D I loved that dress too...more pretty dresses to come..
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