Name: Dragons Green Fire
on Aug 08, 2009 04:59 am
wow....that was harsh but absolutely amazing....
Author's Response: Thank you :)
on Mar 10, 2009 08:37 pm
I don't see why this story has so few reviews.
This one made me cry, which is tough for a fanfic to do. Pregnant? Really? *sigh*
Does he continue to watch her until she dies? I can't decide if I think it's a punishment for him, or a gift...to see her going through life, but never be able to help her again...punishment, I think.
Author's Response: It's kinda like a back handed compliment isn't it? Thank you for the review!
on Dec 11, 2008 10:51 am
Fantastic, a very poignant piece of angst. Excellently written!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
on Mar 14, 2008 04:53 pm
this is even better than scream.
my god. it brought tears to my eyes.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am still working on the 1st in this set of stories. It was meant to be done a while ago, but real life choose when to interveine
on Aug 29, 2007 09:36 am
Wow. This was excellent. I was hoping you would write a sequal to Scream, and this is definitely a great follow up. So heart wrenching. I love the last two lines. They're brilliant and pretty much sum everything up beautifully. You write such sad stories! But for that, I am grateful, because not every story can have a happy ending.
I'll anxiously await the prequal.
Author's Response: I'm very happy to hear that you liked the last two lines. This story was going to end differently, Ginny was going to have the baby - Draco was going to flicker into her sight, and then disapear, no longer being able to see or hear anything. I am more satisfied with this ending though. And yes, prequal will hopefully be out by the end of September!
on Aug 29, 2007 06:41 am
Great continuaton of the story. Did you say a prequel? That would be fantastic!
Author's Response: I did I did! And better news yet - it's almost done. It should be up by the end of September :-)
Name: nun outfits are cool
on Aug 28, 2007 03:20 am
achingly sad... with such a depressing last line.....
Author's Response: I fought with that last line for a very long time. But I feel like it fit, like that line should have ended it. Thank you for the review!
on Aug 27, 2007 10:35 pm
Beautiful. the only word to describe it.
Author's Response: Thank you :-)
on Aug 27, 2007 09:00 pm
"I hope it's okay if I have this."
That's the line that brought tears to my eyes. I normally hate angst, but bravo.
Author's Response: Thank you for steping outside to read this! It means a lot that you left a review
on Aug 27, 2007 06:20 pm
You did a really good job with this story. I wasn't sure if I wanted to read an angsty story this late, but I am very glad that I did.
Author's Response: I know what you mean, but thank you for taking the risk!
on Aug 27, 2007 04:54 pm
Oooh. Just about made me cry. Almost.
And for the record, only one fic has ever made me cry.
But this was wonderfully crafted. The lines and the imagery and...such accurate feeling you describe is just beautiful. Well done.
Author's Response: Well, then I feel honered with an almost :-) Thank you for your review