Name: CCC reviewed
Zombie Moon on Sep 14, 2007 11:58 am
This was poetic. I'm slightly confused, but also intrigued. Did he carry her back into the castle? Did she imagine it? Were they together before he carried her back?
Author's Response: It's really open to whatever you want to have happened most.
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Zombie Moon on Sep 11, 2007 03:00 pm
Change the formatting, and it may not be "boring"
It was so spaced out, I would not bother reading it, though it is probably good.
Change that, and I am sure it will improve a lot!
Author's Response: Wow, I had no idea it was that spaced out! I wrote it in Word and I had to change the format to upload it, but I definitely did not space it out that way on purpose! Trust me, if I knew how to change it, I would. Thanks for bothering to review though anyways. I really appreciate it.
Name: Cassandra_Mortmain reviewed
Zombie Moon on Sep 10, 2007 11:44 pm
Beautiful description - and I loved the Stars reference: Because when
there’s nothing left to burn, you have to set yourself on fire.
Author's Response: It just fit so perfectly, I was also wondering if anyone would recognize it. You did, so props to you.
Name: livelysilhouette reviewed
Zombie Moon on Sep 10, 2007 05:43 pm
it was boring?!
i love this- the spacing, the way poetic way it forces you to think and backtrack and enjoy the way the words are put together, like there's art not only in the meaning, but the composition.
overall, just a great read. a style of its own, and each small part has beauty-- lovely [:
Author's Response: Thank you so much, you really have no idea how much this means to me. I almost cried I was so taken aback. And thank you for not just simplying saying, 'It was good', because then I never would have known what you liked about it. Really, thank you. You have no idea.