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Name: chenjinyan reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 13, 2017 06:03 pm
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Name: chenjinyan reviewed Chapter 1 on Dec 13, 2017 06:02 pm
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Name: kieraraelyn reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 13, 2015 01:13 am
Well, that was interesting. Not the take I would have on that song, which is a favorite of mine, but not bad. I feel like the dialogue was a little bit clunky, like there was some development that we missed. I don't know that I can describe it very well, other than it wasn't smooth. Like, it didn't make sense for it to happen that way? I mean, as a dream, it doesn't necessarily have to be linear or logical. I've had plenty that aren't. I don't know, I'm trying to be constructive here, but I feel like I'm not doing even a mediocre job at it. Feel free to completely ignore this review.

On another note, I may give some thought as to how I would do this now. I'll probably never actually do it, but I like to think about this kind of stuff. I shall favorite this story so that I can credit you if I ever get around to writing a fic for the song.
Name: ginnyd reviewed Chapter 1 on May 26, 2010 05:12 pm
Wow! Loved it.
Name: creativemermaid08 reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 13, 2009 04:07 pm
Is that based off the song by Vanessa Carlton? I was good. If it was based off that song i want you to know i love that song and i love that you wrote this!
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 11, 2008 03:08 am
i luvd it...superb..
Name: kumydabookworm reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 07, 2007 06:51 am
Hmm...where have I seen you before? ;) Beautiful story, darlink. Glad to see you around. *waves*

*and if you're not who I think you are...I'm sorry for this strange review* >.

Author's Response: Aah! Look who it is! This is so exciting. rnrnAnd I have a feeling I'm pretty one-of-a-kind, but you never know. *cough*
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 06, 2007 10:04 am
I wished this had been a little longer, but it was a great fic, that complemnted the song well.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad you think it went well with the song! I agree that it could have been longer. I wonder which parts to develop more.
Name: xxbrokenxsmiless reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 02, 2007 10:45 am
Wow.

Just wow. That was amazing. I really loved it. I had no idea it was all a dream and then how he was there in the end.

Really great.

I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! As I said in my note, the plot came from a song, so that's just an interpretation, really. But I am glad it was enjoyable.
Name: elentari reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 02, 2007 04:25 am
I loved it. It has that dreamy touch to it, like a beginning of a fairytale. Great fic :)

Author's Response: Oh, the dreamy feeling was what I was trying to establish! Thank you.
Name: spazzingqueen reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 01, 2007 11:59 am
That was a very sweet story. Thank you :)

Author's Response: Thank YOU! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 01, 2007 02:29 am
I liked how it was a dream, but then he shows up at the end. It was a very nice touch and tied everything together. Quite good!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the dream-but-not effect. Thanks so much for reading!
Name: amor_quies reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 30, 2007 05:59 pm
The end when he's in her window...kind of reminds me of Peter Pan or something...but obviously in a more adult situation. *cough* Heh.

Author's Response: Hee, indeed. That's an amusing connection!
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