Reviews For Fleur de Lis
Name: shans12342002 reviewed Whisper It on Nov 11, 2007 06:18 pm
Oh i am so glad you updated! I loved this chapter, it touched my heart! I can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad this chapter got such positive responses. I look forward to seeing your thoughts on the next chapter!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed Whisper It on Nov 11, 2007 05:47 pm
I very much loved that they cried and went back to comforting one another. It was beautiful that he asked questions and she answered and that they were able to get back to that emotional level.
I loved that the all knowing Luna was there to comfort and encourage her. I loved that GInny finally decided to stick with Draco and I love that you are setting me up with a showdown of sorts btw Harry and Draco.

I wonder if Ginny is going to have Lily come to Prague for a mini break?

What will Harry say?

Author's Response: Ahhh. A long review. How I love these. The chapter was nice after some not-so-nice ones recently, but we're not done quite yet. Get prepared. Thanks for the review!
Name: MistressMalfoy reviewed Whisper It on Nov 11, 2007 05:38 pm
Ohhhhh! I'm almost sobbing!

That was so wonderful. You described the way Ginny feels so perfectly about Draco and Lily and how she'll never be happy with Harry... Thank you so much for that chapter. It did me good!

Please update soon! (And thank you for no cliffie)

Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for such a touching review. I left out the cliffhanger this time. :)
Name: 0630938 reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 08, 2007 01:21 pm
Ok this is good...for the most part
I like the fact they didn't fall into each others arms and had crazy rabbit sex, I like the fact you portraid Draco as a man that can hurt and be hurt...
I don't like the mega melo-drama at the end with the crazy hair and red face...she's not mad...she's drunk.
And ok sorry but you made the most cheeesy thing ever with Scorpius like a 10 or 11 year old...in a bar that can bartend and ehh be an mazing player...??? ok first his hand are not nearly big enough to like handle the bottles and then the playing thing is possible but do you really think that an attorny after a divorce would let the father take the child knowing that he is the owner of a club...I don't think so...it's not proper child care...but hey it's fiction and it's cool I guess

Author's Response: A very thoughtful review, I thank you. I will proceed to defend myself, firstly because I'm defensive and secondly because I think answers are warranted for some of your questions. She is mad. She's mad at herself for not realizing it sooner because it was too hard to realize and she's mad at Draco for being insensitive and so obviously still in love with her. Scorpius, to me, is just the man and to have him be an exceptionally good card player and bartender (he made up his own tricks for his small hands, and when I said good I meant efficient and intuitive). And as for that last concern, it makes me laugh, for we're in a wizarding world. Things are quite different. And I can't imagine Draco Malfoy not getting what he wanted even if it did come to lawyers. Thanks a MILLION for the great review. I hope you continue to leave such thought provoking ones. :)
Name: elinaki18 reviewed Holiday From Reality on Nov 07, 2007 03:07 am
the story is absolutely GREAT!!i love it..can't wait for more

so that means that Scorpius and lily are brother and sister right?

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, they are brother and sister.
Name: Amanda Mancini reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 06, 2007 02:56 pm
Oh, what a chapter ending! Things are going to get messy!

Author's Response: Very messy, indeed. Thanks for the review!!
Name: abby reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 06, 2007 10:29 am
It's getting HOT now!! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 06, 2007 05:56 am
Oh that was just mean! *Shakes head in disbelief* What a cliffhanger that was! GREAT thought! I loved this chapter I so can't wait for the next one! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It was the teeniest bit mean. But next chapter's on its way!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 05, 2007 07:53 am
ooooohhhhhhh nnnnoooooooo!!! oh my gosh! quite a funny LOL chapter. but sad all the same. well done, im really liking this story so far. cant wait for more!!

xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for anther review. I hope you continue to read!
Name: Mars reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 05, 2007 05:14 am
Aahhh cliffhanger!! Poor Ginny - well, poor Draco though I suppose that news will sober him up pretty quick!

Congrats on another great chapter :)

Author's Response: Yes, it was a cliffhanger. I apologize. Everyone's pretty low, I must say. Stick around! Thanks for the review!
Name: dgloves70 reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 07:35 pm
I thought it was Casablanca!
I always loved the lines before he goes off into his dialogue. Brilliant and I so cannot wait to know what is going to happen in the next great episode.
I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It was inspired by Casablanca. I hope you continue to read!
Name: thenilaughed reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 04:12 pm
Ahhh the fated line.. Le sigh.

Does Shane play the piano? Of course, it's hard to capture piano playing, but, oh.. the fundamental things apply as time goes by.

Author's Response: No, no. Shane cannot play the piano. Can't steal the storyline entirely. He is, however, extraordinarily good at playing poker. Thanks for leaving a review, and for always noticing the references.
Name: shaded reviewed This Side of Goodbye on Nov 04, 2007 03:08 pm
Oops. After sending my review for chapter 4, I read through some other reviews and realised that I must have missed out chapter 3! I started reading this fic a last week & just thought chapter 4 was the only one I hadn't read.

Anyways, much more is making sense now. Hoping to see some more of this story up soon.

Author's Response: Don't worry about it. I'm glad you could get caught up on both chapters!
Name: shaded reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 02:55 pm
I knew it! Ginny's child must've been Draco's. But you can't just leave us on this awful cliffie! It's just cruel. :(

Draco had better go running after her! I don't care if he's blind drunk; he can't just let her leave without talking to her. Though I suppose him being rooted to the place in shock is also a distinct possibility.

I wonder, how did Ginny work out that her daughter was Draco's? Was it some clear physical attribute, like grey eyes or blonde hair? Because I would imagine that Ginny's relationship with Harry would be extremely strained if it were so.

I love your descriptions of Ginny & Draco's actions. This one, for example: "His mind was blissfully blank from whiskey and tears and simply being close too her, but his lips parted slightly at her outburst. Its weight nestled into his brain and all he could muster was meeting those chocolate eyes with his own." I could almost hear his heart breaking all over again.

I love this story; please update soon.

Author's Response: This is such a wonderful review. Reviews like these just make my day completely. Draco is very drunk. And the next chapter will be from Ginny's POV, and hopefully up by the end of this week. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and the descriptions. Please keep reading and reviewing!
Name: nikisasilverrain reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 01:40 pm
*flail* AHHHH! *flail*






Really. Very good. Now, onward, please, because flailing for long periods of time isn't really good for me...
*flail*

Author's Response: Oh! Don't flail around for too long. Next chapter will be up within a week, I believe.
Name: shans12342002 reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 01:18 pm
OMG!! I can't believe you stopped there!! I can't believe she told him!
Continue soon, i can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: It is unbelievable of her. Thanks for a nice review!
Name: sweetpop reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 12:40 pm
*sniffs* It's not nice to see either of them so sad =( maybe I should go quell my sadness by drinking something... I think I'll have to stick with water, since I don't like too much alcohol. Water will dampen my sorrows! (and make me really want to go to the toilet) Nice chapter, more please!

Author's Response: Water is by far the best option. I'm glad you liked the chapter and left a review! More is on the way.
Name: ChickbabeC1 reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 12:07 pm
EVIL! WHAT AN EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!! Awesome story, the characters emotions are really coming out now. Great plot!

Author's Response: I'm sorry! It was incredibly mean and awful. But Draco isn't coherent enough to give us any really good headtalk. So we'll just have to wait until next chapter. Thanks so much for leaving a review!
Name: laylaelaine reviewed She Walked Into Mine on Nov 04, 2007 11:38 am
O, I love this. I should have cleaned, or done the spanish homework the prof. assigned, but no, I read your story. Keep it up!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks. I, for certain, understand reading a fic instead of doing the homework. I really appreciate the review!
Name: 0630938 reviewed This Side of Goodbye on Oct 31, 2007 07:47 pm
This is intresting, but I have to say too much is too much concerning the little girl, you should try to take her ressemblance to Draco down a notch, I know we all tend to do that with M. offsprings, but I think it would be way more intresting if you made her a little more hazy, so that the interaction with D. is a little more subtile and way less ohh your my daddy never liked the other one blab lba bla...Well other then that I like it!
And that was just a little advice take it or not I will still read and review!

Author's Response: Of course, I'm describing Lily's appearance to make her seem similar to Draco. Her hair is very similar to Ginny's, and her eyes have been mistaken for Fred and George's. But you are correct, and I appreciate the suggestion. rnrnThanks very much for taking the time to leave your thoughts. I hope you continue!
Name: sweetpop reviewed This Side of Goodbye on Oct 31, 2007 03:14 am
*is excitedly waiting for the next chapter*!!!!

Author's Response: Ah! Thanks so much! I'm excited for you to read it.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed This Side of Goodbye on Oct 30, 2007 05:46 pm
After all this time it just dawned on her that Draco was the father....ummm.

Harry doesn't seem like a very good husband. Most husbands would want a little more information. Say something at least.

I really like this story. I can't wait to read more. Good Luck! :)

Author's Response: Yes, it did take her a while. She's been blind to more than just a few things. Harry is just Harry. He is not an awful guy, he just doesn't quite know what to do with his life anymore. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you continue!
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed This Side of Goodbye on Oct 30, 2007 08:36 am
aaahhhh nnnooo!! the dramatic meeting next chapter or what!! omg, cant wait for another chapter. this is so lovely
xx

Author's Response: A very dramatic thing is coming. I'm glad you're still reading!!
Name: Mo_hah reviewed Holiday From Reality on Oct 30, 2007 04:40 am
Oooh!
Another great chapter, can't wait for the next one :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Name: MistressMalfoy reviewed This Side of Goodbye on Oct 29, 2007 08:31 pm
Ooooh!

I really love this story, it's unfolding in a natural and convincing way, with a new (DH) take on the DGBaby plot.

I look forward to your next update with pleasure and anticipation...

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm trying to make it as believable as possible.rnNext update should be up sooner rather than later.
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