Name: Boogum reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Jan 22, 2011 02:02 pm
Woo, action-packed chapter this one was. Naturally, I loved it.
I have to say, I love the detail you put into this fic. Without even really needing to look closely or have the information laid out for me, I get a feel of every character's background, of every city being a real city -- it's really quite amazing, and all because of the subtle hints of detail hyou throw in.
I'm prbably making no sense, but I'm running on empty here, so hopefully you managed to unravel that. In any case, excellent chapter, and I really must go read the next now. Darn you for ending it in such a tense way.
Name: Len reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Nov 12, 2010 02:58 am
I was re-reading this one again and was wondering when you would update it....
It's very bad of you to leave the story at that point, you know. Best way to make up for it would be updating ;)
Hugs
Author's Response: I know, I know! I fail. But I went back to school this smester (it's been 2 years!) and with that on top of everything else, I'm doing all my little brain can handle with out imploding. I promise I've been working on it, even if it's just a little bit at a time. Thanks for the harrassment :D
Name: waterwhistle reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Aug 23, 2010 10:56 pm
I agree - your pacing is absolutely amazing. I often get lost in the midst of the action descriptions in these kind of stories, and I go all cross-eyed and have to scroll back up and re-read just to understand what's going on, but I haven't done that a single time reading this story, which is (yeah, I'm aware I'm repeating myself) absolutely amazing. +1 apple pie point! :)
Your characters are also very well fleshed-out. Some stories have the habit of whipping out OCs only when they're needed, and give Draco and Ginny all of the spotlight. Not that I'm saying I don't like it when they get their share - we're on a DG fanfic site for a reason ;) - but you gave them a really good background *and* balance. Your OCs are much more than paper cut-outs. You've also got your characterization down pat. +2 apple pie points to that.
AND your plot. Oh, your plot. Do not even get me started. (Too late.) I've read a couple of Ginny-is-a-Seer stories before, but I can honestly say that I haven't read any which makes use of that quite the way you do. You also proceed from one point of the storyline to another in a very progressive manner, and it's all very realistic. +one bag of jelly bean points, because I've run out of apple pies. ;P
I hope I've given you enough incentive to update quite soon, because I'm literally at the edge of my seat here. :)
Author's Response: *beams* Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments! Lol, though, now you know why I take forever to update. I'm having way too much fun with my OCs, I think, and I'm a total plot-aholic. I may even start a support group. Many thanks for the apple pies, and the jelly beans, and the kick-ass review. There are a couple of other things I want/need to finish first, but LDB is right at the top of my To Do list :D
Name: Len reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Aug 22, 2010 03:47 am
I was checking if I had left a review before and saw that I had promised you some cookies. You definitely deserve them so let me know how can I send them ;)
Anyway, I'm from Compostela (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Santiago_de_Compostela) and you're invited to come get your cokies whenever you want (and stay here, of course) ;)
Author's Response: Lol, thanks! Cookies are always appreciated, and then consumed with alarming rapidity.
Name: Len reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Aug 22, 2010 03:36 am
OMG! I love this story and I can't believe I missed the last update! Imagine my surprise when I wanted to re-read this story and find that there was a new chapter dated from TWO months ago: I was ecstatic!
Love it as always. Hope you update as soon as possible!
Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm already working on the next installment! Yum, cookies...
Name: steppin_razur reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Jun 17, 2010 11:01 pm
I just got introduced to your story. Love the pace of the story. I find that many of these type of stories are too quick or too fast. Ginny and Draco are well developed. As well as most of the main secondary people. I am looking forward to more of this story. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Name: sweetevil reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Jun 17, 2010 09:24 pm
aah so i just read this entire story in one sitting. i couldn't stop. i love love love the characterization of draco. and the animosity between adrienne and ginny. and of course the draco/ginny relationship. i love how it's progressed and now they're all banter-y. absolutely wonderful writing. i eagerly and anxiously await the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much XD !!
Name: xKISHAx reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Jun 14, 2010 07:34 pm
I really, really love this story. The premise of Ginny being a Seer isn't one I've really come across before, and definitely not a central theme to the story. I really enjoy all the characterizations as well. The only critique I can offer is that some sections seem to "tell" rather than show, but I understand some of that is due to length limitations. Fleshing out some of the transitions might help with that. Otherwise, great story! I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, an the critiques! Every little bit helps, and I'll keep your thoughts in mind :D
Name: cindy reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Jun 14, 2010 10:54 am
wooow!came across it,loved it,great characterisation,cant wait to read more!
Author's Response: :D Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Name: icthestrals reviewed
Chapter 10: Public Enemies on Jun 13, 2010 11:54 pm
what a great story. I hope the rest will come swiftly!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!