Name: Boogum reviewed
7. Introductions on Jan 19, 2011 06:10 pm
I've always loved this chapter! And now onto the rescue!
Name: shaded reviewed
7. Introductions on Jun 06, 2008 03:50 am
Although Adrienne's being rather difficult at the moment, I've got a feeling that once she learns to trust Ginny, they'll become wary acquaintances and then friends; they're rather alike in temperament, I think.
I adore the Fiona/Maurice relationship; they're so cute together!
I like how Ginny's learning more about Draco and the work he does with the Dragons Blancs; the talk with Maurice outside and the chat with others in the cafeteria both are ways in which the rather dense amount of information is put into context quite naturally. I say this, because too many other writers seem to have chunks of explanations and introductions that take away from the flow of the story, but you've managed to seamlessly incorporate it all. It's great to read. :)
I like your OCs, by the way. They're fleshed out very well. And I hope to see a new chapter up soon! :D
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the amazing review!rnrnAdrienne is a difficult character, but she has good reason. Actually, when I originally planned this, she was not nearly as coarse, but I think it gives her character more dimension and makes her more real. She and Ginny are a bit alike in temperament, so it's only natural that they'd clash.rnrnFiona and Maurice make me smile :)rnrnI'm glad you like the flow, especially concerning exposition. I hate writing huge blocks that are nothing but information with no character involvement - they're boring and tedious and so much more fun to write while using dialogue to introduce new characters.rnrnOC's are fun to work with ;) I'll be posting the next chapter this evening, so it should be up by the weekend. Thanks again for reviewing!
Name: Jordanza reviewed
7. Introductions on Jun 01, 2008 08:24 pm
OH MY GOD! what is with you and cliffies!!!
when will more come out??
Author's Response: Haha. Hello, my name is Ruby, and I'm a cliffie addict.rnrnThanks for reviewing :) The next chapter will be posted in the next couple of days.
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed
7. Introductions on Jun 01, 2008 09:15 am
sooo good. i can't wait for the rest of ginny's visions to come to life
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Name: wcoast_girl reviewed
7. Introductions on Jun 01, 2008 12:12 am
I am just loving this story. More people need to read it! I've been completely engrossed by it. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it :)
Name: flutterby162 reviewed
7. Introductions on May 31, 2008 03:55 pm
Very nice work. I was a little worried about how Ginny's dreams would integrate into the plot line once she reached her destination, but you're doing a marvelous job. I'm impressed. Thanks for taking the time to write such an enjoyable story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm doing my best :)
Name: dristi reviewed
7. Introductions on May 31, 2008 10:52 am
hi, your story is fantastic and fabulous. pls update soon, can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter eight will be uploaded mid-week!
Name: shalita reviewed
7. Introductions on May 31, 2008 05:43 am
woohoo! now we've got some real action going. :) I love how you write the dreams in such a way that when you write the actual event, it still feels new. Definitely cannot wait until the next chapter and see how the rescue goes!
Author's Response: Thank you! I try not to make the scene's repetitive. The next chapter will be posted shortly!
Name: elay_daily reviewed
7. Introductions on May 30, 2008 04:13 pm
Oh my lord! I can't believe you ended it there! Please tell me you already have the next chapter ready???
This was a really good chapter. I really liked how Ginny took charge with Adrienne and the flirting between Maurice and Fiona. It's so cute.
Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter is complete :) Ginny, in my opinion, never really was one to let people walk all over her, and Adrienne is no different. I'm glad you like the Fiona/Maurice - they make me smile. Thank you for reviewing. I'll have the next chapter up shortly!