This is such a great story. It has all three of my fav. characters in it, even though one has not shown his face completly. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: I'm trying to update. College and working is just killing me. Hope you check back.
zomg this is amazing! do not update tomorrow I have a project due soon and must concentrate! of course being on dracoandginny shows how much I don't want to do it :) again, zomg this is amazing, I really like the flow of dialogue.
Author's Response: I'm glad you love the story so much. No need to worry on the update, obviously. It's coming.
Wow, this was an odd chapter. First off, I hate you just a little bit for not letting your faithful readers peep at Draco and Gin's first time together. Not everyone's comfortably writing smut though, I understand that, but with your writing skills I assumed I'd be getting a beautifully written scene. You've documented the nuances of their connection so well, that I feel kind of left out...
Whatever, I don't want to crush you under the weight of my expectations. :)
Stil, what I referred to as odd is this: it seems sort of disconnected from the previous flow of the story, after having been devoted exclusively to focusing on the G and Dness without a mention of Tom Riddle, to suddenly have him come back so strongly.
The flashback of the end of the war, and I assume, Harry's death, also seemed out of place. I understand that you're trying to take the plot in a new direction, or maybe the direction you intended all along, but it just seems kind of abrupt. I think it wouldn't have seemed so if you'd gone back to G and D at the end, in a present time normal scene.
Anyway, I hope you realize I'm being specific in my reviews because I love your story, I'm not trying to be nitpicky and obnoxious!
I think you're a fantastic writer. ^_^
From your chapter notes it seems you're not a regular updater, though, so I guess I'm glad I got to read this far, and can only hope to have a speedy update. ^_^
Author's Response: I do appreciate your review, very much in fact, but I ask patience. I am very fond of writing smut, to be blunt, so you will get what you crave. But this shift was necessary here. It'll reconnect, I promise. The abruptness is important to Tom. That will, I hope, become more apparent and understandable in time. I hope my writing is more to your liking in the future.
I'm confused.
Author's Response: All I can say is that I hope you become less confused in time.
The more you write the more I'm hooked. This was a great chapter, I'm glad to see that Draco and Ginny are enjoying a new relationship but that they haven't abandonned their natural fires. Great work. More soon? Please.
Author's Response: I wish I could promise you a certain time until the next chapter. I work as quickly as my life will allow. I'm glad you're still enjoying. It's a reader like you that keeps me writing in my rare down time.
Its as if Voldie's soul was that thing that knocked her onto her back. I also have this crazy notion that she's become some sort of vessel for his soul.
Author's Response: If it was Voldemort's soul entering her that knocked her down, wouldn't it imply that she had become some sort of vessel for his soul?