Name: Kitty Lupin reviewed
Oneshot on May 27, 2009 08:34 am
Hm, intresting, beautiful in its tragedy, would have liked more about Sophie getting the money...
Name: SlytherinPrinzessin reviewed
Oneshot on Mar 27, 2009 08:37 am
I don't know how often i have read this FanFic. But I start crying every single time. It is so tragic and yet full of love. You did such a great job.
Name: Imaiya reviewed
Oneshot on Aug 22, 2008 09:16 am
This is one of the most tragic pieces I have ever read. I absolutely loved it. -favourites- Thank you for writing such a great piece :)
Name: hedwig reviewed
Oneshot on Apr 06, 2008 11:42 pm
why do you always make me cry?
this one was perfect and the new one where ginny talks to harry is even better! thank you.
Name: mahek210 reviewed
Oneshot on Mar 12, 2008 10:45 am
oh tat made me cry!!very nice!!
Name: Mollie reviewed
Oneshot on Feb 17, 2008 11:44 am
Oh, that is so sad. So beautiful, but so sad.
Name: abby reviewed
Oneshot on Feb 16, 2008 12:17 pm
sniff...sniff
Name: BIQxoxBOHICA reviewed
Oneshot on Jan 08, 2008 11:42 am
That's so depressing. Aww.
Name: Mei-chan reviewed
Oneshot on Jan 06, 2008 04:51 pm
I just want to cry... so sweet! T_T
Name: CherryGrlZuli reviewed
Oneshot on Jan 06, 2008 08:44 am
Awww... how sweet...
Name: shaded reviewed
Oneshot on Jan 05, 2008 02:41 pm
Oh my goodness! What a heartbreaking ending. It was absolutely wonderful.
I just re-read the whole story once again and found the little hints made during Draco's last speech make sense. The mentions of the crowd's whispering getting impatient as they await the Kiss to be administered by the dementors.
Just a couple of points I thought I'd mention - having the capitalised NOW in the story seemed to break the flow of writing; maybe having the words which need emphasis italicised would make it flow better. Another point is just another opinion; the sentence that has cheese and macaroni seems rather odd for Draco to be saying, especially when he's in the middle of such a heart-felt retelling of his and Ginny's story.
Of course, it is your own story and don't have to take on board these points; they're only my point of view.
In any case, I enjoyed reading this ficlet. :)
Name: ContessaNatasha reviewed
Oneshot on Jan 05, 2008 01:51 pm
Beautiful. A new concept, and a wonderful one. Fabulous job, darling. Draco's thoughts as his last words to Ginny, realizing that at the end, and that last line... beautifully written. A wonderful idea, and well written prose to do it justice. Bravo.
Name: Pipperstorms reviewed
Oneshot on Jan 05, 2008 11:00 am
This was a heart brakeing fic, it was sweet and sad, saddest perhaps that Ginny had never moved on with her life, but she still let him go. I hope you post more here :-)