Please please please submit the next chapter, with cherries om top!!!

OOOOOOO
this was great fun!
I can't wait t see the rest!
do update soon,yes?
and don't mind about tonning down the curses, they are perfectly fin for such a ginnny, and completely logical for Blaise, Pansy and Draco.

kisses

I came back to this story while going through my favorites and remembered that I thoroughly enjoyed it the first time. Still enjoyed it, but giving in to the cursing thing? I mean, I get it that people were offended (note my previous review) but really? I promise to be a devoted reviewer as long as you stay true to your voice. Seriously, if that is how it happened in your head, who really cares if a flock of "fucks" flies by? I think that you are talented and would like to see this story continue. Maybe FIA should offer an extra asterik for language or something...since not as many people seem too terribly offended by stories that have horribly graphic sex scenes or rape scenes. Guess that really what is offensive in this world is in what words we use...not how we behave. Eh. Anyhow, hope that you find it in your muse to update at some point. Good luck and I am sending you thoughts of the creative type :)

First off, let me say that you have a decent storyline here. This story has a lot of potential, and I hope that you will update it and continue it.

Second, I feel what other people are saying about the swearing is valid. I felt that there was a little too much of it in this story, especially the use of the word "fuck". And before you go playing the teenage boy card, up until a few months ago, I was one.

Thirdly, if someone says that they felt that the swearing was distracting, don't rip into them and tell them to "get over themselves." It's their opinion. They read your story and were nice enough to leave you a review. Rip into people for leaving their opinion, and soon people leave reviews at all.

LP

Author's Response: Loveable Punk,rnrnWhile you have not completely changed my outlook, I will try to tone down the cursing simply because the majority of you guys have said something. Also, if I remember correctly, when I left that response I was sick in bed with the mother of all sinus infections and was feeling pretty hateful towards the rest of the world. So I am asking you now, as a sane, healthy individual to forgive me of my earlier meltdown. That means all of you guys. Again, terribly sorry for my outburst and I hope you guys can find it in your hearts to forgive me. rnrnWith love and regret, your dear friend, rnDraconis Major

Considering that this is a fic with an "Extremely Naughty" rating, I believe that lots of cursing is fine. Also, at the age of our dear characters in this particular story, most people curse excessively just not always out loud. Anyhow...enjoying the story so far. I can actually connect with this Ginny. I could see us out at my barn working horses in the dirt and riding motorcycles later. She is great. Draco...waiting for some more snark from him in this one. Do love me some snarky Draco. :) Nice job and keep the updates coming.

Author's Response: Thank you!! Someone who finally understands!!! I could kiss you linz7886!!!!

This seems like a fun start. I like the way Ginny stands up for herself. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this!

Really like your story. Love when Ginny becomes friends with Slytherins. Please update soon.