Name: kieraraelyn reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 13, 2015 12:08 am
Loved the last line. And other snarkiness. Great job on the story.
Name: klover526 reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 11, 2010 05:20 pm
love that last line.
Name: mollusque reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 19, 2010 01:14 am
they are perfect together.It's a shame you can't make it longer.But nice story.
Name: Tamashii reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 25, 2009 05:36 pm
That was quite the proposal, of course, it isn't one to share with your parents or kids or a lot of people but I am pretty sure that they will never forget it
Name: choravenclaw reviewed Chapter 1 on Jul 18, 2009 04:04 am
BEAUTIFUL!!!
LOVED it!
THANK YOU for writing it!
=D

kisses
Name: Dracoz Devil reviewed Chapter 1 on May 14, 2009 07:30 pm
Loved the story. I was just curious if this line was from Pride and Prejudice the movie.

“I said quite tolerable, love,” he corrected. “There is a world of difference.”

keep writing
Dracoz Devil
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 14, 2009 12:36 pm
I love it, the end line was just genious!

MTL
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 14, 2009 12:35 pm
I love it, the end line was just genious!

MTL
Name: CHARLii reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 03, 2009 12:05 pm
Hahahaha. Wow, that last line is possibly one of the funniest things I've heard in a while! :)

Great story!
Name: Katrina_M reviewed Chapter 1 on Jan 15, 2009 04:16 am
absolutly adorable, and that's strange to say about smut but it really was adorable!
Name: KG1 reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 26, 2008 06:29 am
Lol, the last line is just priceless.
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 1 on Nov 01, 2008 04:29 am
aww..i absolutely loved it..it was humorous,romantic and draco was well,draco..good charecterisation and impressive work..
Name: rockmysocks8687 reviewed Chapter 1 on Oct 07, 2008 07:44 pm
I think it takes a certain kind of man to propose during a shag and get a yes answer. Your Draco is exactly that kind of man. This was entirely enjoyable. A very nice dalliance.
Name: zo_acm reviewed Chapter 1 on Sep 29, 2008 11:49 pm
loved it! it was so fantastic, loved the concept of him proposing to her 'while shagging her senseless'. So Draco! you, madam, are a genius and right now I am going to go and find all the glorious stuff you've written.
Name: creativemermaid08 reviewed Chapter 1 on Jun 15, 2008 06:27 pm
I loved it!!! I have a question though... whould they not have children because he's punishing her for telling or because her brothers removed his means of GIVING her children?:)
Name: gypsybaby21 reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 17, 2008 05:28 pm
AWWWWWWWWWW!! It's all I can manage!
Name: lilydarliing reviewed Chapter 1 on Apr 12, 2008 07:13 am
Oh, that was just super cute. Really enjoyable. Great job.
Name: xNymphadoraX reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 31, 2008 05:46 pm
How adorable! This was a perfect blend of snarkiness and sweetness; the essence of good D/G. I loved this line: “You essentially said that you wanted marriage. I decided that being married to you would be quite tolerable. I don’t understand this need for you to hear this again.” Only Draco could get away with such a line! I especially loved the end. It was perfectly timed, humorous and rounded the story out nicely. Excellent job!

Author's Response: Haha thank you. :) I just have this vision in my head of Draco's face while saying those lines. Something along the lines of looking at her like she's completely insane to be having him explain himself.
Name: cindy reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 15, 2008 01:25 am
nice..love d chemistry..
Name: StarlightPisces reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 14, 2008 04:35 am
wonderful story...especially the last line XD
Name: Mollie reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 11, 2008 07:43 pm
lol, I love that last line. Too funny. This was a great story!!!
Name: Jordanza reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 09, 2008 11:24 pm
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha!!!


that last line. my gods i'm so gonna use that!!


HILARIOUS!
Name: BooRadley reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 09, 2008 06:45 pm
Oh, this was really an adorable story! I loved it.
Name: DracoGinnyLover reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 09, 2008 03:43 pm
ROFL! You know what if I was Ginny I would have told him, "Looks like you will have no heir" LOL!

That was really good! Good Luck on future writing. :)
Name: tinamarie reviewed Chapter 1 on Mar 09, 2008 03:23 pm
I like this Draco, it is a very realistic (in the HP world) of how he would act regardless of who he was dating. Great story!
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