Name: Kalira reviewed
Slytherin Loyalty on Mar 13, 2008 03:03 am
nah, evil Snape won't put me off. It
ll definitely be a change from what I normally read. But change isn't always bad. In fact, when it comes to reading fanfic... a little change is good. Keeps me thinking about things instead of keeping me in my little rut where I only read good!Snape fics and such. I'm definitely going to keep reading... I quite like where the story is going so far. Good luck with the writing :)
Author's Response: Well, that's good! I know what you mean about reading strange things, because I personally got so bored reading my normal ships that I went a read all the rarepairs… even the creepy ones. >.<
Name: shans12342002 reviewed
Slytherin Loyalty on Mar 11, 2008 01:06 pm
Ohhh this is really good so far! I can't wait to see how you continue it!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! You won't have to wait long.
Name: elentari reviewed
Slytherin Loyalty on Mar 11, 2008 10:25 am
Good start, your Draco is very IC and I loved that little speech of his - it just summed up the essence of his role in HBP do nicely.
Can't wait to read more of it!
Author's Response: Next chapter's in queue. I'm glad you liked it!
Name: VegaBlack reviewed
Slytherin Loyalty on Mar 10, 2008 08:38 pm
I'm really enjoying it so far, I actually really like the first person Draco's POV narration. Mostly because it allows Harry to be a mystery to me in a way that he isn't in the books, because we're always in his head. I like the angsty Draco speech on loyalty, so few other authors pay attention to the fact that Draco would have been raised to beieve that Voldemort was 'right' the same way Harry views Dumbledore, and how hard to make the leap to 'good' would be for him. I like the turmoil, he seems genuinely confused, not made an angel with a sudden epiphany, but dealing with the young adult problem of being who you are as opposed to what you've been told to be. Can't wait to see what happens when he opens the door!
Author's Response: Personally, I can't stand Harry, so anything that isn't from his PoV is always a relief. ^_~ Anyone, I think, would have ended up like Draco is raised in that environment, which is why he shouldn't be considered 'evil', because he definitely isn't. Thanks for the review, and I hope you stick around for the next chapters! Chapters up to twelve are written, so they'll be up frequently. Thanks for the great review!
Name: Kalira reviewed
Slytherin Loyalty on Mar 10, 2008 08:37 am
Good start :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Nakita reviewed
Slytherin Loyalty on Mar 09, 2008 09:23 pm
I am very interested. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! Other chapters will be up soon.