Reviews For If Only, If Only
Name: gracie reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Jul 20, 2010 03:40 pm
whooooooooooooooooooooooooa go ginny!!!!!!!!!!!
Name: rowan_greenleaf reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Oct 21, 2008 05:14 pm
I LIKE it. Very nice. I like the little AU world you've set up here. Draco is likeable, Ginny does seem pathetic, but at least she's witty! Nicely done.

Author's Response: Thank you!! I know they seem a bit AU now. Trust me both of them are still there real selves, with my little spin of course. Keep reading, hopefully chapter three with be up soon!
Name: turkish reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on May 26, 2008 02:45 pm
Hahaha the bit where Ginny outs Harry is priceless. Ginny and Draco FTW! The banter is so cute. :)

Author's Response: Hey!! Glad you found it my story! Thanks for reviewing. Now my cookie probably makes a bit more sense. Hopefully I can get the whole dozen done and up here for everyone. Keep reading!!
Name: fairydust123 reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Apr 27, 2008 09:55 am
Feisty red head indeed =)
Love your work, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am working hard on chapter three, hopefully it will be ready soon.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 17, 2008 07:57 am
Hm, no... Never heard of a restaurant bell like that. But here's a review anyways.

I liked this chapter. The Ginny-Draco dialogue was very good again and I liked Ginny's reaction to Harry's news on the most part. Her announcement in front of the whole wedding seemed a little uncouth though; I like Ginny as more of a gentlewoman than that. Or maybe more of a Slytherin, taking care of the situation in a more sneaky, less in-your-face, kinda way.

Author's Response: Usually I like her that way as well. But Ginny is also a Weasley, and they tend to like pay back, IE the Twins. Plus I don't see Ginny as the kind of girl who will just roll over and play dead for anyone, so she took matters into her own hands.
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 17, 2008 07:45 am
Pretty good! The banter wasn't corny, which is so common in Draco-Ginny banter.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 16, 2008 06:38 am
Awesome job with this chapter! I'm glad Ginny finally stood up for herself. This line in particular had me cracking up:

"I'll use this quaint American phrase I heard once "His baby's Momma"

Harry was such an a$$! I hope the Weasley's catch up to him and beat the sh*t out of him!

I'm looking forward to following your story. Thank you!

Author's Response: Thank youso much! A friend of mine says "My baby's momma" all the time, and I just had to use it myself. I am gonna be working hard on the next few chapters. Thanks again.
Name: Eleoopy reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 15, 2008 06:41 pm
I kinda like your story so far.  The only thing that kinda bother me is the whole niceness of draco and his family.  That just a bit too OOC =T  But any way to get Draco with Ginny, i'm fine with that!  I never like HG fics!

Author's Response: Well the whole idea of the Malfoy's being nice comes from the redemption angle. They want back on the goodside of the Wizarding World, so they play nice with everyone. I sort of get into the evolution of the Malfoy's kindness in chapter three, so for an explaination you will just have to keep reading ;)
Name: Guardianofthewaves reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 15, 2008 03:57 pm
heres your bell =)
it was awesome, very original too! i love it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it, and will work hard to get chapter three up soon.
Name: dristi reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 15, 2008 01:02 pm
hi, I loved both chapters and I think your story is beautifully written and well thought! It has everything a good story need! pls update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm writing chapter three now, trying to get it out for everyone. Its reviews like this that keep me going.
Name: LilyLove reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 15, 2008 12:16 pm
RING!

Author's Response: Thank You!!
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 15, 2008 09:46 am
Thanks for updating, where did you get the idea of Ginny dragging Harry into the middle of the dance floor and then telling everyone what he had done? Its one of those things you would like to do but never get the chance to. Great story update soon Thanks

Author's Response: The idea just kinda came from my idea of what Ginny would do in that situation. I took an idea and just kinda went with it. I am glad you like it. I am in the process of writing chapter three, so hopefully it won't take too long.
Name: Julia Evans reviewed Chapter 2 Trouble Always Brings A Friend on Mar 15, 2008 09:09 am
Oh wow. An Erlkonig reference and a P&P reference all in one chapter? This rocks!

Author's Response: Wow! I am so excited someone noticed!!! I didn't think anyone would catch them, they were tiny. I'm glad you like it, and I hope you keep reading.
Name: ElspethBates reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 13, 2008 09:07 am
I liked this story so much I added it to my favorites so I will know when you update and then I went to your account and snagged your story 'Seeing What Lies Ahead'... just to see if you other stories are as good as this one!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am very flattered. I will tell you, seeing what lies ahead is not so hot. It was a long time ago, and I don't even think I could finish it now. But read on if you so choose. I am glad you like it so much. Chapter two should be up very soon!
Name: Mourning Broken Angel reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 12, 2008 12:48 pm
*hugs* Lovely. Thank you for making those edits- it really does make the chapter read even better (and secretly renews my faith that authors take concrit to heart). :D

One last little hint: When a character is addressed directly in dialogue, their name should be offset with commas (e.g.- "Thanks, Draco, I appreciate that," or "Ginny, I just stopped in to say hello.") Best of luck with the next chappie!

Author's Response: Thanks for all your help! Hopefully I'll get better at catching things like that as I go on.
Name: mahek210 reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 12, 2008 06:35 am
heyy nice good start!!looking 4ward for more!!:)

Author's Response: Thanks, chapter two should be ready soon!
Name: Mollie reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 11, 2008 08:25 pm
Cute. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Name: Melodiacat reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 11, 2008 02:46 pm
I like it.

Author's Response: Yeah!! That makes me feel very good!
Name: Didushka reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 11, 2008 08:48 am
it's cute...i like it!

Author's Response: Thanks!! And thanks for the review!
Name: AuntAnnie reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 11, 2008 07:09 am
It is hard to review on one chapter. I like what youve written, how you've written it. I like the premise of the story. Your wording is good, characters believable. Could I please have another chapter or 10 to get more into it? (actually I really like what youve done so far, and I was teasing you. Thanks for a great start, update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This review made me smile, and chapter two should be coming very soon.
Name: Kalira reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 11, 2008 03:02 am
great start! I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Hopefully The next chapter will be up very soon. Thanks for reading!
Name: sevs_girl reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 10, 2008 05:54 pm
I like it! Good work.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: Kari345 reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 10, 2008 05:14 pm
That was cute! I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! Chapter two is written, all I have to do is get it edited, and away we go.
Name: harrypotterchick4ever reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 10, 2008 04:51 pm
i loved this!!!
i can't wait for the weading-and ginny stop being pathetic!!!!(sorry had to get that off my chest)
i hope you write the scene when her family finds out about harry cheating on her!

Author's Response: Oh believe me, the next chapter gets interesting, Ginny's life, the wedding, the family finding out. Next chapter is one of my favorites. So glad you liked it!
Name: Dark__Angel reviewed Chapter 1 Dredging Up The Past on Mar 10, 2008 04:48 pm
its very funny keep writing

Author's Response: Chapter two should be up very soon. Thanks for reading!
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