Reviews For The Competition
Name: lavenderab reviewed Forfeit on May 27, 2008 11:10 am
nice chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you reviewed!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 10:54 am
A great chapter, and what a cliffhanger!?!?!?

Author's Response: I do what I can. Seriously, the next chapter is coming soon. I hope you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Name: desperate_ballad reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 10:49 am
Okay, so, one, I absolutly love Gilmore Girls, and Jess was so much better than Dean! Two, how could you leave us with a cliffhanger like that??? I'm eagerly waiting for an installment. :]

Author's Response: I know, I loved Jess! Because he and Draco are so similar, though, I put that line in as a tribute to the bad boys. Here's to Jess and Draco, who know how to break a woman's heart. Installment coming soon, I promise. Thanks for the review!
Name: elay_daily reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 10:46 am
Well, this is fun.

Author's Response: Isn't it?! Keep reading; it gets better!
Name: lavenderab reviewed Out of This World on May 27, 2008 10:31 am
awwww i like the ending im glad that they had sex and they talked about it before hand some people don't talk about it they just do it and wonder what happen when it's all over

Author's Response: Yeah, there's a lot of communication in this story, and not all of it good. Thanks for the review!
Name: Mars reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 10:15 am
Another great chapter! I liked how you switched to Blaise' point of view towards the end, having him "observe" the couple through the keyhole. Love it and can't wait for the next one!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I'm trying this new thing where I actually try to update on a regular basis. Go figure! Thanks for the review!
Name: BelleAmour reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 09:16 am
Uh-oh, somethings gunna happen. I was at school and I had to send myself part of my history project and the teacher said we have five minutes left on the computer and I got an email that the story was updated and I like rushed online and read it. Draco is soo....Draco really, I love their fight though. Wonderful!!!

Author's Response: Draco wouldn't be so awesome and gorgeous if he lacked the attitude. I'm glad you liked the chapter, though. Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 08:57 am
okay, first, love gilmore girls and i thought i recognized that from somewhere! second, omw, gin! and draco! what the heck! and harry deserves anything that had better come at him just cuz he's harry and draco's better, i feel bad for blaise tho, cuz he's always in the middle. haha. update soon!

Author's Response: I think that Ginny realized her mistake as soon as she'd made it, only a little too late. Harry will definitely be on the recieving end of some harsh remarks come next chapter, I promise. Keep reading!
Name: WolfStar reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 08:07 am
I knew that line sounded familiar! Oh man, why do we always say things we don't mean in an argument?

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm a big fan of Gilmore Girls. I think arguing is like being drunk; things that you only sort of mean slip out. Thanks for the review! I hope you keep reading!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Better for the Bicker on May 27, 2008 04:51 am
Fantastic chapter! Oh glorious arguing!

Author's Response: Arguments come naturally to me, as I participate in them daily. Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it.
Name: bee245 reviewed Saying Goodbye on May 26, 2008 12:28 pm
nooooooooooooooooo!!!!! no draco you idiot stupid stupid person!!! arg!

anyways. so great chapter :)
update soooon!:)



bee245

Author's Response: I know! I'm mad at him and I wrote the chapter! Thanks for the review, and this'll be my quickest update, yet. Promise.
Name: Mars reviewed Saying Goodbye on May 26, 2008 11:29 am
Yeah, it definitely was a bit depressing but I still loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter...Any chance of a slightly happier Draco??? ;)

Author's Response: Maybe, but they've definitely got some issues to work through, so maybe not. I do, however, promise a plot twist for next chapter, so hang on! Thanks for the review!
Name: WolfStar reviewed Saying Goodbye on May 25, 2008 07:47 pm
I like the depressing end, however. It provided some insight, character development, on Draco. I'm kind of torn between the two right now.

Author's Response: I'm really glad that the chapter gave some insight on Draco, but kind of upset that I had to use such a depressing scene to do it. However, the hurtful words aren't close to over yet. Keep reading!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Saying Goodbye on May 25, 2008 07:40 pm
Good for Gin! This should make Malfoy appreciate what he has more! I liked the chapter. Even though it was depressing. I think you really explored Draco and Ginny's characters quite well. Good job!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! The next chapter has a bit of depression as well, but the twist makes it worth it! Keep reading!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Saying Goodbye on May 25, 2008 07:24 pm
This was a good chapter and I am really enjoying the story, however, now I need to recover from this chapter, too. Please, Please tell me that this isn't really good-bye.

Author's Response: You can't really think that I'd end a story with them on the outs? Have a little faith. This is definitely no where close to the end of the story, so keep reading! I promise this isn't goodbye!
Name: Nameless reviewed Give Me Danger on May 25, 2008 06:28 pm
Really good so far.

Author's Response: Thanks! Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: aizak reviewed Forfeit on May 25, 2008 06:35 am
Oh yeah. I really like this!!! It had me reading on and on and Im actually getting into this fic! I love the plotline!! Keep writing and I'll keeping Reviewing!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you're enjoying the fic so far. I hope you'll keep loving the plot throughout. Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed Forfeit on May 22, 2008 12:39 pm
OH, I really liked it. I like the love lost of Snape and his desire to see Draco happy, makes for a nice twist in his normal character. I do hope Ginny understands how Draco feels. Nice job!! Everything flowed very well.

Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! It's always nice to get nice reviews! Keep reading and reviewing, please!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Forfeit on May 21, 2008 04:03 pm
update soon!

Author's Response: Definitely trying! Thanks for the review!
Name: Grneyedminx reviewed Forfeit on May 21, 2008 04:02 am
Woah! Your Draco has some serious chops in this fic. It's a wonderful change. I look forward to their developing relationship.

Your use of dialogue is excellent. Try to add to some of your descriptions about the characters thoughts. I believe it would make you an even more well-rounded writer.

Love the story. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you seem to like it, and I'll definitely look into that suggestion. Keep reading and reviewing!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed Forfeit on May 20, 2008 08:39 pm
nice but a bit short, i was just getting into it!

Author's Response: Sorry, but if it's any consolation the next chapter is half finished and planned to be much longer and more explanatory. Thanks for the review.
Name: NB72 reviewed Forfeit on May 20, 2008 08:33 pm
Love that Chevelle song! Totally think of D&G when I hear it. Love where your story is going too....

Author's Response: I'm glad you think the song is appropriate. I was a little worried about how it meshed. Thanks for the review! I hope you'll keep reading!
Name: budfuglee reviewed Out of This World on May 12, 2008 04:07 am
Yay! So glad they were finally honest with each other prior to "the intimate moment"! Big hugs to you!

Author's Response: Yeah, but they've definitely got a lot more to talk about before they get serious. Keep reading so you can see what happens! Thanks for the review!
Name: mishouxashley reviewed Out of This World on May 11, 2008 09:38 pm
I liked it, nice and to the point. The end was just like Draco, and cute.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I hope you'll keep reviewing. I love hearing from readers!
Name: Kalira reviewed Out of This World on May 11, 2008 05:18 pm
squeee! I loved the ending to the chapter. And the bit in the Great Hall when he drags her off was rather amusing.

Author's Response: Thanks, you're sweet! Keep reading and reviewing!
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