Reviews For A Forbidden Union
Name: MnU reviewed New Arrivals on Mar 03, 2006 04:25 am
ummm...what about the afterbirth? You should probably fix that...
Name: Sophinna reviewed Lemon *muahahahahaha* on Mar 02, 2006 11:21 pm
I'm slighty confused.... But I LOVE the story!
Name: megami_no_ushi reviewed Lemon *muahahahahaha* on Mar 02, 2006 10:55 pm
I'm sorry to say that this is perhaps the worst description of first time sex that I've ever read. Might I suggest a beta? They can help with your spelling and grammar as well as helping you write about things you don't know. (Sorry, it's really obvious.)
Name: I'mnogoodatlove reviewed The Hogsmeade Battle on Feb 28, 2006 12:17 pm
Dumbledore looked at his daughter with beady little eyes. "So you feel if I want it done, I should do it myself then?" He asked.


dude, no.
**voldemort.
u killed the mood.
gees, thanks.
haha
Name: I'mnogoodatlove reviewed The Hospital Wing on Feb 27, 2006 01:09 pm
Death Eaters don't call Voldemort "Lord Voldemort"
they call 'em the Dark Lord
Name: someone reviewed Confrontations on Dec 21, 2005 09:15 am
looses is spelled incorrectly.
Name: someone reviewed Draco's Room on Dec 21, 2005 09:07 am
Manner is spelled incorectly.
Name: someone reviewed Late Night Studying on Dec 21, 2005 08:33 am
“What is your first name?” Draco answered flatly. “Draco Lucius Malfoy.” that is his full name not his first name.
Name: someone reviewed Late Night Studying on Dec 21, 2005 08:31 am
At 7:10 Ginny opened the door to Professor Snape’s classroom and saw Draco already there and sitting on one of the tables. He looked up when he heard the door close. “Your late, Red.” Earlier on the note it said to meet draco at 9'oclock so how could she be late when ariving at 7?
Name: someone reviewed Potions Class on Dec 21, 2005 08:19 am
Mullicent Bullstrode, Semeus Finnigan,and Vincent Crabe are spelled wrong. its millicent bullstrode, semus finnigan, and vincent crabbe.
Name: someone reviewed Horseless Carriages on Dec 20, 2005 11:40 pm
you dont learn animagi you are born with it.
Name: Liv Anguifer reviewed The Hospital Wing on Dec 04, 2005 05:50 pm
Sometimes you put the words in past tense, and sometimes in present tense. Maybe you will use future tense next time, i don't know. But please try to stick to one. It gets confusing.
Name: Anonymous ;) reviewed The Hogsmeade Battle on Dec 20, 2004 05:07 am
well ive been reading your story and i think its fantastic. i love how you made Ginny diffrent (cruel;deatheater) where as in other stories shes nice..well please update soon i would love to read more.
Name: Nora reviewed The Hogsmeade Battle on Dec 09, 2004 07:20 pm
I just love the whole idea of ginny when she's a death eater and so cruel..
Name: Nora reviewed The Hogwarts Express on Dec 08, 2004 06:06 pm
If this is truly your first fan fiction, then you've done excellent job!
Name: hopestar reviewed The Hogsmeade Battle on Nov 09, 2004 02:58 pm
i like what you are doing here got me hook please update soon oh i love the twins so cute
Name: Yuuga22 reviewed The Hogsmeade Battle on Oct 07, 2004 11:48 pm
I really like this story so far. I love how you chose to do something different then most of the other authors that I've read. There really aren't that many authors that could pull off a story like this and I love it. But FRED DIED!!! *weeps* ;_; Write more soon please! ^_^
Name: Nakita reviewed The Hogsmeade Battle on Oct 03, 2004 10:20 am
Hey I want some more updates on this soon! I love this story!
Name: Babygirl reviewed Death Eater Meeting on Aug 03, 2004 01:53 pm
hey these are some good lokking chapters that you are updating here keep up the good work for me if not for anybody else kay?
Name: Babygirl reviewed Hogsmeade on Aug 03, 2004 11:43 am
So far so good I'm really lovin' the I'm-Not-Who-You -Thought-I-Was attitude from Ginny. It suits her in a very creative dark way. Nice fanfic. And I think that you shouldn't really worry about people not reviewing because some people don't have taste. Keep up the good work
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