Name: Akt5us reviewed
Captured on Aug 16, 2008 07:07 am
Well, I'm interested! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks! Next update should be up soon.
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Captured on Aug 12, 2008 01:21 pm
Fascinating and original concept! Can't wait to see where this goes. I don't suppose you've already written the whole story and will be posting rapidly?
Author's Response: No, unfortunately not. I only recently came up with the idea for this story. And with school about to start, the time for writing is short. But I will do my best to update consistently. I uploaded the second chapter and am waiting for approval. And I'm glad that you like the concept. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: joliefille reviewed
Captured on Aug 12, 2008 11:56 am
Okay, I was already interested, and then you threw in Tonks. I am so intrigued now. And, of course, I have a bazillion questions.
Author's Response: I'm glad! It's my job to intrigue the readers. And as for the questions... those will be answered in time. Thanks for reading. :)
Name: miith reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 06:24 pm
really interesting. please keep it going
Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! i'm glad you enjoyed it
Name: hotpinker23 reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 05:57 pm
ooohh, i like the different plot (a "dark order" with the same goals as the good order) worth continuing
Author's Response: heh thanks i was going for something unique
Name: LilyLove reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 03:39 pm
oh snap! looking forward to more.
Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you liked it.
Name: silver rose reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 10:03 am
usually...i can determine by the first chapter of a story if i want to continue reading it....and that! was a great start!....hahaha....can't wait for the next chapter.....very interesting plot...haven't come across one like this before...>_
Author's Response: hah wow i got scared at the beginning of the message. xDrni'm glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing!
Name: Shyla reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 09:40 am
I love it. it sounds like the start of a good story.
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing!
Name: Imaiya reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 08:29 am
GAh! :D I absolutely love this first chapter. I really appreaciate that you explained what "Velamentum" was, but you still left a huge cliffhanger with the whole "Tonks" thing. I can't wait to read more. It sounds great =D
Love, Imaiya
P.S: You're writing is amazing =) So descriptive!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it. and yes, muahaha, i love writing cliffhangers. :D
Name: KG1 reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 06:54 am
pretty good, just, make the next chapter longer, please.
lol
Author's Response: lol,thanks, i'll try to do that.
Name: Katzegeliebter reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 05:40 am
This is a very interesting and new premise. It begins in a place no other story has, and I am intrigued to see in what direction it continues. Well done.
Author's Response: thanks. yeah, i was trying to do something unique, and i'm glad that it worked.
Name: dracois4ever reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 05:08 am
What a terrific beginning to your story, this seems to have great potential and I look forward to seeing it to completion.
Author's Response: i'm glad that you like it! it makes me happy that my story has potential. :D
Name: Milly22 reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 04:03 am
Such a great start! I can't wait to see what happens. Update soon!
Author's Response: i'm so glad you like it! thanks for all your help on it. :)
Name: Citrus587 reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 03:54 am
Great start! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: thanks! i'll try to update soon.
Name: wandap1016 reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 02:33 am
Great opening chapter, you definitely got me interested. I’m looking forward to following your story, please update soon.
Author's Response: thank you! i was hoping the first chapter would interest readers. i'm glad to see that it's working.
Name: TwistedPixie reviewed
Captured on Aug 11, 2008 02:28 am
Oooooohh very interesting!! this is sounding very good so far. I like the way its going, well done and keep it up for the next chapter! can't wait!
xx
Author's Response: i'll try to have a chapter out soon. i'm glad you enjoyed it!
Name: darkloveangel reviewed
Captured on Aug 10, 2008 10:43 pm
i really like this story please continue i want to know what happens next!
Author's Response: i'm glad you liked it! i will definitely be continuing this.
Name: RoonilWazlib reviewed
Captured on Aug 10, 2008 07:55 pm
I'm intrigued.... please continue =)
Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you liked it.
Name: mlc1039 reviewed
Captured on Aug 10, 2008 07:37 pm
Really good first chapter. There was enough substance that I wasn't completely confused, but still enough mystery that makes me want to read more. So far, sounds like a interesting story.
Author's Response: lol that's what i was going for. i'm glad it wasn't too confusing. thanks for reviewing!