Oh this was so great, but have you been told you're kind of evil?? To have the final(or is it?) battle and not have Lucius there!?!? Now I have to wait to see what that crazy b$stard is going to do. Because Ginny is not really safe as long as he's walking around. He was pissed at Draco because of Ginny and I'm sure he won't be happy to hear the part he played in Voldy's fall. Plus it seems he had started to develop some sort of feelings for Ginny and the only reason he didn't really take revenge, his favorite dish, is because of the baby.
I'm always scared to read this story, because though I'm in love and can't wait for the updates, I'm always fearful of the angst part of the story.
I'm hoping all the important people came
from the battle okay. And Ginny and Draco can raise their son in a Voldemort
free world.
P.S. With no updates I reread -Die, with a "T". I love this story and am looking forward to more. (Pretty please)
Author's Response: *gives evil laugh* and attempting not to give anything away. Cool stuff coming. Thanks so much, and yes, I did get some work done on "Die-t" - had a bit of a road block but think I figured out how to deal with it and was working on it today.
A wonderful story. I love how you convey
such believable emotions. I can almost feel Arthur and Molly's righteous anger, concern and confusion over Draco and Ginny's situation; Remus' remorse that he didn't listen to Draco.
I love this story.
Author's Response: Gosh thanks so much. Sorry I havent responded sooner. The emotions really are important to me and I really try to get them right. Greatly appreciate the feedback.
Hugs!
-G
so ridiculously good. eagerly awaiting the next chapter. and the little toy trap, so simple, so brilliant. :)
Author's Response: Yeah... I thought it was my lack of something creative... LOL. Voldie has no sense of humor, obviously.
i'm so glad you didn't kill Bella off in a foot note. the battle scene was great and the end of this chapter was unexpected and riveting. Can't wait for you to post again and I'm so sad that this is nearly over..
Author's Response: Yippee! Riveting! :) Story's not quite over yet, but working on it. I'm looking forward to working on other projects. Glad you enjoyed.
WOW!
I was holding my breath for most of this chapternd just realized that now.
My lungs are burning.
I'm so glad Draco didn't leave Ginny with doubts.
Sure, i'm even happier that he didn't get killed, or crazy, or obliviated or any other war scar, but knowing that he left with things clear between them is even better.
Snape showing Draco where his loyalties are was a great touch.
The nanny saving Teddy allowed my brathin to return, i was so worried about the little one!
I'm sad to know we are reaching the end!
It's so great to see everyone ding greaat or getting better but i'll really miss this fic!
I wish we could have more D/G interactino, i can't wait to just see them together and calm, enjoying their pregnancy, laying around, doing pretty much nothing[having crazy hot sex in all of the possible ways could probably fit somewhere in this little perfect world]. Also, as much as Gin loves her family, she and Draco could use the time alone!
=)
Also, hope yougot sometime offduring the hols to write a littl more of the next chapter so that we can see waht comes next[and hpefully until we've reached the end there will be no jumping ahead in time!]
Thank you for this chapter, it was a great day starter!
=)
Hope you hada nice Christmas and Happy new year!
=D
kisses
Author's Response: Had a week off during the break, but did shockingly little writing. So glad that you found the chapter suspenseful! I definitely have to thank my alpha readers, because otherwise, the battle would have been over too quickly.
loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Oh, what an EXCELLENT death for Bella! A curse got her, yes, but ultimately what killed her was a fall that could have happened to any muggle. What beautiful justice.
Author's Response: oh! I hadn't quite thought of it that way intentionally, but it just seemed fitting. I didn't see Draco quite ready to kill her outright. Thank you!
it was the most boring christmas EVER with nothing to read. im so happy the site is up again. procrastinating from studying isn't nearly as fun when my fave website is taking a holiday. now on to the review...
WOW. well voldey is dead and bella is crazy and dead. the nany must have seen how much ginny and the sane side of the family cared for teddy as well as her own attachment to him to do such a selfless act. but theres still the matter of lucius and rodolphous. only merlin knows what havoc they'll reek. but atleast draco should be around for the birth of his son and the continuation of toujours pur. cant wait for the next chapter. this one was so very good. i dont usually like fight scenes or quidditch match scenes but this one held me captive. great job.
oh, i almost forgot, is ron ok? harry needs his peeps.
Author's Response: Actually, it won't be fully explained, but basically, the nanny was just a decent person, doing what a good person might do to protect a defenseless child in her care. But.. you'll see... all your questions will be addressed next chap. :) You're right on with the storyline.. LOL
Wow, that was so epic. I'm glad that this chapter wrapped up Voldemort's death nicely. Are you planning on doing any more chapters? I would love to see maybe an epilogue where Lucius is dead, Draco and Ginny have been married, and their child has been born. That scene earlier between them was so tender and lovely. You've done a lovely job crafting their relationship. Good job!
P.S. I was on livejournal yesterday, and I read your time turner fic Omega-13. And I wasn't sure how to review on livejournal, so I thought I'd kinda leave a little review here. I LOVED Omega-13. It was just...wow. Everything just tied together so beautifully, and the D/G dynamic was just incredible, with all their witty bantering. I love how Ginny goes back into the past and ultimately earns herself a relationship with Draco Malfoy in Amanda's black leather skirt. It was just really sweet and cute, and I really enjoyed it. I hope you post it here on FIA, so other people can read it too. :)
XOXO, JT
Author's Response: Thank you! I love words like epic. I like the chapter. Personally, it was really a challenge to plan out, because of all the pieces that needed to fall into place. But, no worries, there is still a bit of story to tell - 3 or 4 more chapters, I think. This was only the beginning of the end. LOLAnd thanks also for reading Omega-13! It's gone through a bit of rework, since I found a few weak spots and typos in the LJ post. I wanted to stagger my posts here a bit, so I'll be putting it here in a few days. Thank you!!!!
great chapter, had me a little breathless at the end. Thanks.
Author's Response: I like "breathless". Mischief managed on my part, then! LOL Thanks!!!!
Awesome! Just awesome! Keep it going, I need to know how this ends!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have a huge chapter to post, but missed the site shutdown by only a few minutes! If I'd known, I could have logged in to post sooner. More coming soon, lots of good stuff! Thanks so much for reading my work and letting me know you enjoy it.
-G
i cant believe you stopped the chapter right before ginny and draco talk lol i cant wait for the next chapter. i need my d/g fix, since they didnt really get too much interaction this time. this is by far one of the best stories i've ever read. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Sorry that there wasn't much interaction here, but I try to make up for that next chap. :) So happy that you enjoy my work, and thank you so much for letting me know.
Best wishes
-G
that's cool. the more the merrier. i just wanted to know if there was more to come.
[lol] well if i'm reading fanfic instead of paying attention in class, clearly i cant tell u if ur off the mark [lmao]. but its cool...
Author's Response: LOL! Thanks!!!!
of course im worried. draco will do something stupid like risk his life to save hers. is the next chapter the last 1 or will there be an epilogue?
Author's Response: Actually, there are about 4 chapters left. I hesitate to say that it's an exact number, because they are written but have a tendency to grow as I refine them, so they could be split up.
Many thanks for the update, it makes my day. I continue to love your story.
I was not able to post another chapter for the French version of this story because I broke my arm and I can't write or type. Cheers.
Author's Response: OMG! You poor thing! I do hope you get better soon! Sending hugs to you. You are a darling.
Best wishes
-G
oh jeeze. update soon. please!
Author's Response: Hoping to! Gosh, I just re-read... and I want to work on it a little more... My alpha reader asked for a bit more detail on the smut scene. LOL!
brilliant. i cant wait for the next chapter. plz keep draco safe ad dark mark free. their son needs his father and they need to have the fairytale wedding to offset the dark times during their romance. but the story is great and im enjoying it immensely.
Author's Response: Good that you are worried! It means I've done my job. :) So happy that you are enjoying my work. I'm hoping that the ending will live up to all that you all are expecting.
Best Wishes!
-G
Thanks so much for posting! i love this story very much and its great that you've stuck with it and made it flow so well all this time! love and happy holidays!
Author's Response: I definitely have to thank my beta reader, aerleigh, for much of helping with the flow between chapters. I'm so happy you enjoy my work. Thank you soo much for letting me know.
i think its brilliant. i'm so happy u updated because i was just finishing reading this chapter in my criminal law class. love the story. i
Author's Response: Oh! how cool! I'm rather intimidated that my legal logic might fall short! so do let me know if I'm off the mark. LOL. So glad you enjoy! Best wishes! -G
i love this story, i love how you kept the plot consistent and flowing with new twists and turns and i love the character development of draco and ginny. can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Some earlier chaps were quite a challenge for me because I kept having to weave in small scenes and details that would be relevant later. I'm so happy that you are enjoying my work!
Best wishes!
-G
Ahhh! I'm so nervous about the next chapter! Thanks for clustering this one and the next close together. Holding off on this one was a kindness. Great job with the story!
Author's Response: Well, if you are nervous, then I did my job well! All your wonderful comments are inspiring me to go over it again and make sure it's as good as it can be. Thank you so much! (again)
-G
Looking forward to the next chapter!! Wonderful story.
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! Your comments inspire me to get my fingers typing even faster! :)
Next chapter is a biggie! I held off posting this one because I wanted to post the two of them fairly quickly together.
OOOH!!!
I actually forgot what i was going to cemment because this made me so happy!
;P
I was crazy happy when i saw there was an update, it woke me up around 5am and i was mad at me for not turning off the sound but then i saw what it was and i was bright as day and woke up in a sec!
=DD
When i saw a chapter with a sorta small roll bar i thought"OH we gonna get a lot of D/G interaction!" but then we got none and i was kinda mad because i that was pretty mean!
NOW, that i've read your notes in the end i couldn't be happier!
=DDD
We get a big chapter next!
Plus we'll be getting it SOON!!!!
i swear i can't stop smiling and now my mother thinks i'm mental because i'm typing furiously fast and laughing like a maniacal!
;P
Finally to the coments:
Sure, i very much enjoyed the fic and i understand how great it feels to come back home like that, as i told you before i was "arrested" for over a day in the other of the ocean so that kind gets really scary for a just turned 18 years old girl!
So, yeah, the feeling was portraited beutifully!
i was sad because there was no D/G interaction but at the same time i was really glad.
This chapter she broke most of the things that connected her to Harry so this was kinda like the break up and i'm hoping next chapter she'll be getting together with Draco!
"It's been over four years since you've seen me, Harry," she said, rather more sternly than she intended. "I'm not sixteen anymore."
it felt sooooooo good to read this!
I was like:HAHA!LOOOOSER!!!
;P
Yeah, i actually say these things out loud while reading!
Harry's hand once again reached for hers, and she stared down at their hands together on the table before looking up at him.
"I wouldn't be angry with you, Ginny."
She gave a soft chuckle. "Well, we'll see..."
SSSSSS
(,",) [That's meant to be a snake showing off her fangs about to attack]
It felt like she was plotting the demise of his happinees and cheer mood!
i LOVED it!!!!
she felt herself smiling as she remembered how happy she was to receive each one. Somewhere during her dissertation, Harry had moved away from her, although she didn't mind.
It felt like she was throing knives at him!
And he was being pushed back by some sort of invisible shield!
LOVED it too!
As you can see we didn't have Draco in this chapter but i still had far too much fun adding up to Pothead's misery, sure it may not have been your point, but i still had far too much fun acting like it was!
;P
When will the next chapter come out?
Thank you very very much for this!
^;~
kisses
Author's Response: LOL that you found the interaction with Harry so very Slytherin! I think that Ginny did pick up a lot from being around the Slytherins for so long. I like your interpretation. I was highly amused. Sorry about the lack of D/G... but I can't have the depth to the story if I only keep it isolated to what's happening between the two. I will make up for that a little next chap. Once again, thanks so much for your feedback!!!
Hugs!
-G
It's nice to see her back at home. I feel sorry for poor Harry bless him, luck never does seem to go his way, I hope there is gonna be some kind of happy ending for him. Not much Draco interaction in this one but obviously you can't have that all the time. I am interested to find out what Arthur spoke to him about.
Author's Response: Thank you! The chapters without interaction are sometimes difficult to write, but totally necessary for the plot. Thanks for being patient. :D And thanks so much for reading my story.