That was so cute, especially the beginning part about the different parts of his personality. I like it a lot. Good job :)
I think the grammatically correct penultimate paragraph might be "And it is she who..." (instead of "And it is her who".) Overall, this was uber good, with tingles. :)
Author's Response: You may very well be correct. Thanks.
Oh. My. Lord. (it's more effective when said with a heavy Southern accent) That was the cutest, most un-cliched Draco/Ginny piece I've read in a very long time. That was just...perfect! And I loved the point of view it was told in, that was so effective. The pacing, everything was just so perfect! Aww! Thank you so much for making me smile.
- Warriorlily
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you so much! Un-cliched and adorable is always my goal - and smile-inducing, so glad all that panned out. :)
That was absolutely lovely, and even more so considering it's your first fic. The short, sharp paragraphs are just perfectly done.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!
This is such a unique idea. I loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
I love your writing style, this story is beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Very sweet and well written. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
Again, this is very sweet! Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Awwwwwwwwwww.
That is so cute!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
That was so adorable! I loved the ending especially!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you did! :)
Wow. One of my favorites writing styles and you nailed it!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! Glad to hear I did a good job! :)
This was incredibly sweet. I loved it :)
Author's Response:Thanks, glad you did. :)
So sweet! I really like this!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you do! :)
Short and sweet. The writing style was very unique!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
That may just be my favorite D/G opening EVER... and I've read many. Incredible for a first piece.
Author's Response: Hee, thanks. :D
this is such a cute little story! great first piece!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
awwwww soo cute!!its pretty gr8 considering its ur 1st fanfic!!u have a differnt nd simple style of writing!!a kind of writer who has d ability 2 tug at d hearts of its readers frm his stories!!loved how she describes draco frm all angles btw!!gud work:)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad to hear you like the way I write. :)
Wow, that was beautifully written. Took my breath away! I love this concept and your style of writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm especially glad you like the concept... and my style. :)
Very nice indeed. Can't wait to hear more from you!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you will soon... I might have a few ideas buzzing around. ;)
THis is a fantastic peice of work! I love how you are so detailed! I could feel everything as you expressed it. You have a definite talent. I can't wait to read more from you.
Author's Response: Wow, definite talent! Thank you! And you saying you could feel everything as I expressed it... well, that's what I was really going for, so that's especially great! Thanks!
This was sweet. A good job for your first fic-I hope to see more of your work :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope you will too... ;)
Yay! Thanks for the little shout-out. LOL. Glad to see this story up here. Like I said, the ship needs good writers, so keep writing. ^_^
Author's Response: No prob, thanks for directing me here. It's made the search much easier, lol.
A very lovely story. It made me feel warm inside. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Glad to help! Thanks. :)
Cute! Good job for your first fic. I hope you keep writing other stories :) I really liked the way the ending was set up like the beginning of the story, it tied it all together rather well.
Author's Response: Thanks! Not actually my first fic, just my first HP one, but still... :) Ooh, I'm glad you liked the ending. I WAS trying to tie it all together, so I'm glad that succeeded. :)
Aw. Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you... :)