Name: b1elliot reviewed Trigger on Jan 27, 2014 07:27 pm
Last paragraph was beautiful.
Name: I dream of draco reviewed Trigger on Jun 05, 2009 07:16 pm
I spy with my little eye... hehe. Since he IS a spy and all. :)

Author's Response: You know what, I didn't even make the connection when I wrote that and only realised it just now, when you pointed it out. *is dumb* :)
Name: cindy reviewed Trigger on May 03, 2009 07:01 am
Loved the chapter absolutely!!great!
do update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: ClairdeLune reviewed Trigger on May 02, 2009 05:03 pm
I loved the little details in this chapter, like Ginny's poor salad and the panicking memo in the elevator. They just add more fun to the story! And I loved the interaction between Draco and Ginny, especially at the end, when they reached some sort of truce and stood peacefully together. Very cool. Of course, the arguing was fun too ;)
I'll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun sprucing up the chapter with those little details, so I'm glad they stood out!
Name: enoimreh reviewed Trigger on May 02, 2009 05:59 am
Hahaha. I love it! Of course they're on the exact same schedule, haha. And the elevator scene was beautifully done. It was funny and and serious and wonderful. I love the last line, too. So good!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Name: slitherhither reviewed Trigger on May 02, 2009 05:37 am
Ooh, that was a lovely step towards detente! Heh heh. Well done. And thank you for tossing in the wonderful Muggle quotes here and throughout the story.

Author's Response: Hee, eventually they're just going to have to accept that they are meant to be. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment!
Name: ash_of_the_rose reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 03:28 pm
Awww....I love the way you ended this chapter. Sweet in a really understated kind of way. =) Nice job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 03:25 pm
great job! i love this story. its creepy how alike they are huh? haha.

Author's Response: They are totally in sync without even knowing it. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Name: DGgirl reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 02:07 pm
Hmm I like it... it's getting there, slowly ^^" But keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 08:56 am
Yea, some D/G interaction! It was great. I love how they keep running into each other no matter how hard they try. The part in the elevator was great especially when Draco says "The choice is always there, though sometimes you end up losing everything no matter what you do." That was so deep. A realistic and poignant way to show a change in their relationship. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Sooner or later they're just going to have to accept that they belong together. :) Thank you for taking the time to read and review!
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 07:26 am
Excellent chapter! I loved Draco's calm in the lift and his qouting of Isaac Asimov. However, the best line for me was:The best laid plans of mice and men, Draco thought idly as he pushed the 'down' button for the lifts, often go to shit. ---- That made me cackle. As ever, wonderful chapter - update soon!!

MTL

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so pleased you liked it and that it made you laugh!
Name: bee245 reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 06:37 am
yeahhh awesome chapter :D once again your writing is fantastic :)

glad they're reconciling, at least a little bit ;) and I'm waiting for someone to come up to Ginny and be all "we're recruiting you".

heh.

update soon please! :)



bee245

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Heh, it might be a while before they do more than just tolerate each other, but they're getting there. :)
Name: psyche reviewed Trigger on May 01, 2009 02:56 am
Finally, we get to see another D/G interaction! Yay! Hope we see more of them soon. Keep up the good work! I'm really enjoying reading this story. =)

Author's Response: Thanks for being patient; I hope the payoff was worth it! :)
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