Name: ZSF reviewed
Asset on Mar 06, 2009 09:41 pm
Great chapter! I think the plot is intriguing, but I would really like more Draco/Ginny interaction. It's been two chapters since they've last seen eachother, and there has been very little development in their relationship so far. Hopefully next time they'll meet again...?
Great job.
Author's Response: Yes, I know Ginny's been woefully absent, but she'll play a more prominent role in the next couple of chapters. Thank you for reviewing and for being patient with me!
Name: serender reviewed
Asset on Mar 06, 2009 09:36 pm
Always so glad when I see this story in the "Most Recent" section. Please keep updating.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you are enjoying it so far.
Name: psyche reviewed
Asset on Mar 06, 2009 06:15 pm
Where's Ginny?
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Asset on Mar 06, 2009 05:19 pm
haha. loving that its dennis. haha. update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Name: bee245 reviewed
Asset on Mar 06, 2009 05:15 pm
lol! good ending :D
actually good chapter, overall :)
very very interesting...and I like Draco :)
update soon please!
bee245
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: chiara13 reviewed
Swimming on Mar 06, 2009 03:51 pm
This is a gorgeous fanfic so far and you're an incredibly talented writer! I really like the way you're slowly setting up Draco's first incursion in the world of espionage and I'm extremely curious as to how exactly Ginny is going to merge and become a part of his new life. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad you are liking it so far.
Name: cindy reviewed
Swimming on Mar 05, 2009 06:57 am
the story keeps gettin more and more interesting..hmm..love the twist and love ur story more..do update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Swimming on Mar 01, 2009 06:54 pm
"This wasn't so difficult, and he was perfectly capable of managing a double life."
I do love how you torture Draco with seas of trailing gasps, glorified metal death traps, and over-excited house elfs sworn to secrecy. Fantastic twist with Dennis! Not moving too slow for this reader, not at all.
Author's Response: Hee, well, it's good to keep him on his toes. I'm glad Dennis was a surprise! And thank you for being okay with the pace of the story; there's a lot of set-up and not a lot of D/G interaction yet so I thought I might be losing some people along the way. Anyway, it's good to know that it's working for you! Thank you for your lovely reviews!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Pocket Litter on Mar 01, 2009 06:44 pm
Grumpy, beleaguered Draco is always funny, and much more so when nausea and revenge plots are thrown in. :D Your secondary characters leap off the page, and your prose really packs a punch. It's a great pleasure to read this story.
Author's Response: LOL, I'm sure Draco wouldn't appreciate us enjoying his misery, but I'm glad you do. Thank you for your thoughtful reviews!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Open Source on Mar 01, 2009 06:35 pm
So much goodness! Love the peak into Ginny's work life, and the scene with Ginny, Elba, Blaise, and Draco was pure fabulousness. You must laugh a lot as you write! At least, I hope you do, as your readers surely do as they read your writing.
Author's Response: Thank you! The scene in Blaise's doorway was a lot of fun to write. I do amuse myself sometimes, and I'm glad you are enjoying my attempts at humour! :)
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Suggestions on Mar 01, 2009 06:26 pm
I've been remiss in reviewing your several, excellent recent chapters. I love your Elba! And the little details you use to describe Draco's adjustment, Ron & Hermione's life, Williams' & Webb's quirks, and Blaise's home & professional life. All with a touch of humor. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Swimming on Feb 27, 2009 04:30 pm
Interesting turn of events. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 27, 2009 04:20 pm
I love the interaction between Draco and Ginny; it's great.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it!
Name: bee245 reviewed
Swimming on Feb 27, 2009 12:51 pm
ooooh!!! nice twist!! :D:D
very exciting!!! I really love your prose :)
update soon!
bee245
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Swimming on Feb 27, 2009 10:21 am
hahaha. great job! update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed
Swimming on Feb 27, 2009 09:10 am
What a fanTAStic twist at the end!! Please update soon, I can't wait to find out hwat happens next!!
MTL
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad the twist came off well!
Name: dristi reviewed
Swimming on Feb 27, 2009 08:05 am
hi,...oh..it`s getting interesting now...
keep up and pls update soon! can't wait to read more...
Author's Response: The plot thickens! Thank you for reviewing!
Name: Cap reviewed
Safehouse on Feb 22, 2009 07:31 pm
So descriptive. Excellent characters. So believable! I'm really hooked.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: shaded reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 21, 2009 01:07 pm
"I don't know if a giant head would sell, but it's definitely appropriate for the subject,"
Lol. I love the banter between the characters. I enjoyed the George/Ginny dialogue very much. I'm interested in finding out what exactly Draco will be doing on his missions.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was fun writing those scenes, and I thought it was important to have a Ginny scene with someone she likes so she doesn't come across so sour all the time! There will be some mission-related scenes down the road, so hang tight! :)
Name: cindy reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 14, 2009 02:30 am
great great chapter and the update was worth the wait..do update the next chapter soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! I'll try not to take so long with future updates... ;)
Name: bee245 reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 13, 2009 10:52 am
!!!!!!!! so exciting :D
great chapter! i feel bad for him, but at the same time....not really lol. update soon please! :D
bee245
Author's Response: Hee! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Name: kymom reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 13, 2009 08:35 am
I am really enjoying this. I love snarky Draco, and Ginny is holding her own as well. Looking forward to updates. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! For it being such a Draco-centric fic, I'm glad to hear you think Ginny's character still comes across well enough.
Name: MemoriesToLast reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 13, 2009 08:06 am
Brilliant chapter, I could list all the things I loved about it, or I could just not waste your time and say that it was a job well done. Draco, especially, is characterized wonderfully. Update soon!
MTL
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Name: Flipinpenname reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 13, 2009 02:26 am
great story. update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: dristi reviewed
Pocket Litter on Feb 13, 2009 12:41 am
hi, dm as an ogre?....what a hilarious thought!...though, he sometimes, ok often, acts like a jerk....
...liked how gw has a nice relationship with her brother...the w's are adorable!
keep up and pls update soon
Author's Response: Heh, I love George, and it was an opportunity to show Ginny in a more positive light, as opposed to how she tends to treat Draco. :) Thank you so much for reviewing!