Name: caps reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 04, 2009 04:03 pm
lovely story! The characterisations are spot on.
Author's Response: Thanks very much!
Name: slitherhither reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 03, 2009 09:15 pm
Oh that warmed the cockles of my heart! The Blaise half of the chapter, at least. The other, first half continued the lovely irritation between Ginny and Draco. I like that Ginny is rather the uber-Gryffindor here, remaining closed-minded even while witnessing monumental moments in Draco's life. *g*
Author's Response: Hee! Those Gryffindors can be a bit thick, eh? :) Thanks for reviewing!
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 03, 2009 12:17 pm
Oh I do love when I get to see Blaise brought into the mix-'What's mine is yours, except for girls, my toothbrush and my secret stash of Belgian chocolates'. The D/G interaction was great; I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you! Blaise is always fun to write. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
Name: Licentia poetica reviewed
Prologue on Jan 03, 2009 12:01 pm
Excellent attention to detail and character development. You've made the transition to freedom believable and the interactions between D/G and D/B are well crafted!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm trying to get better at using descriptive language so I'm glad it's working out so far!
Name: doc_3 reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 03, 2009 11:54 am
This is a fantastic story. I'm totally engrossed in every word. Look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Name: Alexandria Malfoy reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 03, 2009 05:14 am
It's always a good thing when Blaise is brought into the mix. :) Their banter was wonderfully fast-paced and provided a good bit of comic relief. I loved the two lines regarding Draco's middle name. Leave it to Draco to avoid a question. I also enjoyed the interaction between Draco and Ginny -- the descriptions in that section were fantastic and I loved their tension. Great job! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Blaise is such a blast, isn't he? :)
Name: Anna Scathach reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 03, 2009 04:31 am
I like your Blaise... "What's mine is yours, except for girls, my toothbrush, and my secret stash of Belgian chocolate."
Author's Response: Thank you!
Name: I dream of draco reviewed
Safehouse on Jan 02, 2009 09:43 pm
Blaise. Always amusing. Always. Now I see why you had such difficulty with him and Draco.
And I tend to have more elevenses than breakfasts, myself. ;)
Author's Response: Hee. They're impossible.
Name: mchen reviewed
Release on Jan 02, 2009 08:27 pm
Fantastic! Love the premise, and gotta love Spy!Draco. Can't wait to read whatever you've got for us next.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.
Name: thegirlanachronism reviewed
Release on Dec 30, 2008 11:53 am
Arrested Development:
NO TOUCHING!
i will be waiting for the ensuing awkwardness and eventual hookup.
Author's Response: :D It's always fun when somebody gets an AD reference. Thanks for reviewing!
Name: sweetpop reviewed
Release on Dec 29, 2008 07:42 pm
ahh! *sits eagerly and waits for the next chapter* When you say that he will get his possessions back, thats everything right? money, house (duh) etc. Wow. Welcome back to the rather lavish life, Draco.
Author's Response: Yep, everything. :)
Name: Katmillia reviewed
Release on Dec 29, 2008 04:52 am
So good! I loved the bits about "you know who doesn't like my face?" because it made me laugh- and I think the best part was when they went to shake hands, and the guard intervened. Bits like that always just make it so much more real. I'm digging this story like crazy, awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it!
Name: VegaBlack reviewed
Release on Dec 28, 2008 03:16 pm
I really like this story so far, read all 3 chapters in one sitting :) It's a cool story, I don't think I've seen anything like it before. There are some really great moments in the writing and it's pretty funny given that the topic is serious. I think my favorite was Draco's pacing in his cell. Anyhoo, can't wait to read the rest and see how D and G get together!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I had originally intended to keep the tone of the fic serious, but I do have the tendency to write humour, so that's been seeping through even when I don't want it to!
Name: dristi reviewed
Release on Dec 28, 2008 05:42 am
hi, what an unusual story! the first chapters were intriguing and very interesting.
keep it up and pls update soon...
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Name: I dream of draco reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 10:14 pm
What a surprise that Ginny is the one to spring him! And, belatedly, I realized that it probably should not have been a surprise. But I'm a tad bit slow, so it was. Haha. I can't wait to see what Draco does with his newfound freedom! And with Ginny at his disposal. :D
Author's Response: Hee. Originally I hadn't planned for her to be the one to get him out, but then I thought, heck, why not throw them together and make them both uncomfortable? :)
Name: I dream of draco reviewed
Proposition on Dec 27, 2008 07:25 pm
MUSIC, cute! Is that significant to the actual organization? I can't wait to see what they want Draco to do. :)
Author's Response: Heh, not really. I just needed the right mix of vowels and consonants that would make an acronym that wouldn't be too funny. :)
Name: GoldenFawkes reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 06:19 pm
Heeheehee. "Thank god."
This chappy fits with the presidential pardons that are in the news these days. Did that help inspire you in any way?
Author's Response: I actually had that chapter written some time before the presidential pardons happened, but it's nice to be topical. :)
Name: Alexandria Malfoy reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 03:21 pm
Fantastic chapter. I love some of the vocabulary you've inserted into this chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's my secret plan to make myself learn and use new words properly. :)
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 02:29 pm
And so the plot thickens...nice chapter..do try to throw in a bit more emotion/feeling and please don't rush the story. I have a feeling it can be a really good one, if you take the time to put into it.
Author's Response: Thank you! I will try my best.
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Proposition on Dec 27, 2008 02:25 pm
You have a natural ability to tell a nice story, your writing skills are impressive. I am curious about the plot..poor Draco!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Name: luvtheweasleys reviewed
Prologue on Dec 27, 2008 02:20 pm
Ron can be a git, can't he?
Author's Response: Yes. :)
Name: Dracogirl reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 01:40 pm
An update over the holidays, what a wonderful gift!!!! A great chapter. You did a great job describing Draco's feelings about possibly getting out of there. Wanting to hope, but afraid of the disappointment. I am sooo looking forward to how you progress with this story. I know I'm going to enjoy it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!
Name: bitteliten reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 01:05 pm
Oh, I can't wait to read the next chapter of this fic. Excellent job! I love your portrayal of the characters, especially of Draco, and am eager for the upcoming interaction. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Name: LadySalmon reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 12:37 pm
Bon.
Author's Response: Merci.
Name: verily reviewed
Release on Dec 27, 2008 12:33 pm
I like it so far and I wanted to ask, is the "No touching!" thing from Arrested Development?
Author's Response: It is. I'm weak and couldn't resist throwing that in there! Thank you for reviewing. "No bees!"